FF: Intehaa Pyaar Ki: Chapter 4 Page 98, June 16.

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: deepa17

Exactly.. It is only a weekly update.. So there is enough time to get next chapter😉

Good Lord, What slave drivers you all are!

Posted. Now, its upto u people to motivate me or demotivate me 😉😉😃😆😆😆 as it will irectly affect my next chapter.

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: deepa17
Ok Shirley..

Going for afternoon nap.. Will defo read before your morning.

Okay Deepa,

BTW, M awake or some time.

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#743

SShirley,Honestly speaking but m sure you couldn't believe me that i had read this chap and trying hard to hit like button.But error occurs and then suddenly turned my mind in making post so i forgot to comment.But ok.Sorry for late reply.Peechhlee bar suvika me late latiiffi ka award milte bacha hai.

But this chapter is really nice to read.I am now thinking that after ashu and nidhi's meeting means jab they met kuchh na kuchh toh jaroor hoga.I am much impressed that how Solanki's and Verma's show her the value of work.And Nidhi was getting merriage Rohan only bec of his property?and Ashutosh is still in dilemma[i may be wrong here] but Mallika loves him lot.And she wants ashu to express at each and every step.And here ashu fir se saiya naino ki bhasha samze na.And wanted to know more what you wanted to give us as a next update?again sorry for late commenting.Are you also planning to distribute the awards?

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Chalo Everyone, good night. m sleeping.

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#745

I thought engagement will be announced and then the story will start...

Mallika will have all Astra to break their bond.

But you have not gone the Bollywood way or Suhasini way...

If Armaan is pissed off what will happend to Ashu and Mallu?

In KTLK, initially Mallu was friendly with Nidhi...will the same happen here or she starts from day one?

So, it was all planned ... family ignoring Nidhi and then she was forced to take up something..

When those eyes are haunting Ashu, why is not trying to understand...may he was never attracted to any girl...

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suku_07

@suku_07

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: sshirley

Good Lord, What slave drivers you all are!

Posted. Now, its upto u people to motivate me or demotivate me 😆as it will irectly affect my next chapter.

Haha indeed we are.. 😆... I really dont like writers without work so go now and write the chapter or even better call me I'll write it for you, tujhe baar baar problem aati hai naa mein likh doongi.. 😆

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parmarA

@parmarA

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#747

Sshirley,i just read 4 th chap.I just don't know or i am little bit confused about ashu and mallika"s relationship.Sometimes ashu acted rudely and sometime Mallika.And then ashu became careful and Mallika ignored.And i am thinking at micro thought is that swami said is going right?means is something superstration style?kya Suchmuch ashu aur Mallika ki jodi ke liye jo swamiji ne bataya tha woh such honewala hai?so the engegment is going to cancle na?waiting for the what destiny had in her stomach?

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Aardhan

@aardhan

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#748

Good continuation Shirley. 👍🏼

I liked Anji's attitude and her read on Nidhi. I liked how she made sure she got a commitment from Nidhi to keep her job for at least two months. At the same time she has ensured that Nidhi has got irritated to the extent that she wants to now prove herself. In the same vein I also like what KS said to Ashu and Armaan about Nidhi. Glad he spilled the beans and requested them to keep Nidhi on her toes and suitable challenged... this simply goes to show that the entire Solanki family knew and understood Nidhi very well. 👏

Coming to Ashu, I think he is trying hard and is showing some interest in the proceedings like discussing the party, their engagement and also the wedding with Mallika. Liked that he admitted his failing to her and also showed his sincerity in his efforts. Admitting that he was pushed but at the same time assuring Mallika that he still made his choice but being pushed has only stopped his procrastination was a good way to reassure Mallika.

So MAllika is being forced to forego the party and Nidhi has made an appearance... interesting now! 😳

One thing I felt was that this was a rather short update. There were only three main scenes. Brings me to the all important question, how many chapters are you planning? Seems to me you are taking more time in setting up the stage here and once again you may have to rush in the end due to lack of time... please do not mind Shrley, this is just my gut instinct here. Otherwise I liked the writing and the chapter. 😃

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bc123456

@bc123456

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#749

Hi the chapter was fascinating, the gods have decided that ashustosh and Mallika cannot announce their engagement so, finally he gets to meet nidhi's very interesting and thank you for weaving a different story , which is so interesting to read ,👏 now we all waiting for the next update , a week is too far so take pity on us poor souls and update at least twice a week , loving the freshness of your story👍🏼