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Posted: 12 years ago
"Please.." she tried to interrupt, but he said, "Pl. mujhe kehne do aaj. Mallika, I probably don't even know what 'love' is. Maybe, I love you already.I.. I know I respect you a lot, I like your company, I know I am comfortable to share my innermost thoughts with you. I know for certain that we are the best of friends. At this age, I guess, that is what love means. Or should we expect ourselves to behave like teenagers in love?" he laughed and she joined him.

for me, this is the best dialogue of the chapter Shirley. This tells a lot about the Ashutosh of your story. he has never been in love before and knows that Mallika loves him. According to him, friendship and respect are fantastic starting points of marriage and he assumes the rest like passion, desire etc would soon follow. and he is comfortable enough to share all this with Mallika. He is not trying to hide and tell her i am falling for you etc.

Not only she was a topper in L.L.B., but I also assure you that she is a very coherent & logical thinker and I am sure would make a brilliant lawyer give the right training – she has immense potential to make you and your firm proud. And finally, she always lives upto a challenge. All you need to bring out the best in her is to challenge her.

this is the side of Nidhi that we haven't seen so far in this FF. Good that you brought it out through Solanki. Otherwise readers would know only one side of the coin. Pampered, spoilt yet has potential. she is an intelligent sharp girl who just looks for an easy way out. hmmm..interesting.

so have you started chapter 5?
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's century page of your FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another nice chapter. Interesting story. sach me aap intehan dekh rahe hai hamare patience ki. AshNi ki actual paheli mulakat ka intezar hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice chapter Shirley. All previous chapters were nice though I failed to put up review, this chapter is definitely a progression in giving insight of the characters vs. last two chapters setting the stage.

Ashu-Mallu conversation and Mr. Solanki's dialogues are highlight of the chapter. Ashu's confession clearly gives insight of his character that he has never known love and his thought that their marriage will be based on foundation of their mutual respect and friendship. Though he acknowledged he is aware of her feeling of love, he is not able to feel the same for her. After confessing it his assurance to her that he is committed to this relationship is worth the praise.

Positive side of Nidhi's character has been shown first time through Mr. Solanki. Also his concern for Nidhi is very palpable. He is able to see her potential but feeling sad seeing her ruining it herself. One more interesting part going to be Ashu meets Nidhi with already set impression provided to him by Mr. Solanki.

Surprise element of the chapter, Nidhi first time realizing that she is feeling good saying no to Rohan due to her work. She verbally always accepted that she doesn't mind Rohan flirting with anyone but her satisfaction of rejecting him today says how much she is internally expecting to be valued by the person she loves...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: creativebird



Surprise element of the chapter, Nidhi first time realizing that she is feeling good saying no to Rohan due to her work. She verbally always accepted that she doesn't mind Rohan flirting with anyone but her satisfaction of rejecting him today says how much she is internally expecting to be valued by the person she loves...


does she love Rohan? i don't think so Mona.

Oye, Shirley..does Nidhi love Rohan??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.


does she love Rohan? i don't think so Mona.

Oye, Shirley..does Nidhi love Rohan??

Oye Suja, sab kuch main hi bata doongi toh readers kya karenge? Unko bhi thoda toh sochne do
And friends thanks for ur beautiful reviews, but in a mood to write the chapter now, so would reply later.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sshirley


And friends thanks for ur beautiful reviews, but in a mood to write the chapter now, so would reply later.


You not in mood to reply I am not in mood to write review...😆😉 will TRY to do it later 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sshirley

Good Lord, What slave drivers you all are!
Posted. Now, its upto u people to motivate me or demotivate me 😆 as it will irectly affect my next chapter.


Humne kad demotivate kiya ?? 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suku_07


Humne kad demotivate kiya ?? 😭

Yeah yeah, it is a great motivation when I don't get enough reviews aur jo milte hain vo bhi superdelayed😡😡😡😡
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: suku_07


You not in mood to reply I am not in mood to write review...😆😉 will TRY to do it later 😆

Great!
Chapter likhu toh bhi I m damned aur na likhu toh bhi. 😡😡
Feel like banging my head on the wall

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