OS-THE INVISIBLE Part 6- Page 13 - Page 4

Part 2 was good. i m liking the way u are developing the love story slowly.

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Thank you for the update. Will come back with review...

Originally posted by: Ena292

suspense...! What happened to nidhis sis??? May be she was in love...but...you tell...kya hua tha"? Aur kitne part hai??

Originally posted by: sshirley

Part 2 was good. i m liking the way u are developing the love story slowly.

So, there is something v. tragic about her sister and her death, that had made nidhi so desolate.. and she finally opened up before ashu - good going.

eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

Sorry sai for the late reply love ur chap really interesting 😛

The first scene DB , BB and Ashu conversation superb as it shows their relationship nicely well written sai 👍🏼

The conversation between Nidhi and Ashu superb well written dear👍🏼

the way u shows the friendship between arman and ashu Great 👏

nice your fresh concept and simple writing so much sai 😛

need ur next update soon as free in weekend 😛

Originally posted by: Ena292

subah hogayi mamu!!!! where is the update????

hi,i m a silent reader from 1 year. i m a big fan of ktlk. i have read ur all os,ff.all r so good.in this os the concept is new,it is very nice. i m waiting for the next part.pls update soon.