OS : oh saathi re! last part page 2

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Part 1 and part 2 on page 1
Nidhi was paking for the Mumbai Seminaar without any excitements. Ashutosh : kya Nidhi,yeh achanak kya ho jata hai tumhe?abhi tak toh bahoot excited thi ab kya ho gaya? jao apni zindagi enjoy karo.Dr Priyanka,Dr Jyotika bhi toh ja rahi hai tumhare saath. Nidhi : yeh aap keh rahe hai? main excited thi,par ab nahi hoo.Aap se dur janeka khayal hi muze hila deta hai.Main nahi jana chahti aapko chhodkar.Aur aapke bina kaisa enjyment dr Ashutosh? Ashutosh took her face in his two palms and lovingly said," Nidhi,don't be sentimental sweetheart.You got this opportunity,and this is a golden opportunity.Yeh tumhare career me jaan daal denge.Aur rahi meri baat toh main tumhare saath hi hoo,tumhare dil me.So be practical and go with friends. Ashutosh was packing Nidhi"s bag and Nidhi was only watching him with tears in her eyes.Ashutosh became santimental too.. Nidhi suddenly run towards him and tightly hug him.and said," suniye,aap apna khayal rakhiyega.Main wapis aaoo toh muze mere pati bilkul aise hi chahiye."and she started to cry.Ashutosh console her and said," i am going to miss you badly Nidhi."and usne nidhi ko kaskar bahome le liya. ============================================================== Nidhi ke jaane ke baad Ashutosh apne bed par aaya aur sone ki koshish karne laga.Usne bed par haath faira toh woh jagah khali thi.Use yaad aaya Nidfhi ka woh shanti se sona.Apne haath par uska sur rakhna.Uske photo ko woh kitni der tak dekhta raha.Aur usne socha," Nidhi ne kitne rang bhare meri zindagi me?uski jagah khali hone se laga meri zindagi viraan ho gai.Usne Nidhi ke takiye ko apne seenese laga liya aur fir Nidhi ke tasveer ko uski taraf rakh diya aur fir sone ki koshish karne laga. Use neend nahi aa rahi thi.Woh sochne laga,"ghar me aisee koi jagah nahi hai jahaa uski yaad na ho.Usne wordrobe khola toh use yaad aayi apne janamdin ka deen,jab Nidhi ne uske coat me ful aur chitthi rakhi thi.Dining table ki taraf aaya to wahaa bhi use yaad aaya Nidhi aur woh kitne pyaar se ek dusreko khana khilate the aur woh uski god me baithkar khana khaya karti thi.Ab uski aankhose aasu chhalakne lage," I miss you Nidhi and more than missing I love you." use yaad aaya Nidhi ka ruthna,muskana,zagadana.Aur uski yado ne itna jor pakada ki Ashutosh Nidhi ke photo ke saamne khada ho gaya aur bola," Nidhi,maine tumhe himmat di thi na?lekin main apni himmat kho raha hoo.Muze tumhe dekhe begair jeeneki aadat nahi hai.Ladte the,zagadte the par tum mere najaroke saamne hoti thi.Tumhe dekhkar toh main jee leta tha.Lekin ab main kya karoo Nidhi?Bade lambe din hai aur us se bhi lambi raate.Kaise kategi Nidhi? His cell-phone rang.It was call from Nidhi.He receive the phone eagerly. Nidhi," Muze pata tha ki aapko neend nahi aayegi.Aap abhitak jag rahe honge.Main theek se pahuch gai hoo,aur hotel me hoo.Dr Ashutosh aap hote toh bahoot majaa aata.I am missing you.Kya baat hai dr Ashutosh?aap kuchh bol kyon nahi rahe? Ashutosh: Nidhi,bus tumhari aawaaz sunni thi muze.Tumhe yahaa se gaye kuchh hi pal hue aur muze laga sadiya beet gai tumhe dekhe hue.Ghar ke har kone me jakar tumhe yaad karta hoo.Mirror ke saamne jata hu aur tumhe yaad karta hoo,kichen me bhi yeh aankhe tumhe hi dhundti hai.Aur bed par tumhare side me dekhta hoo aur dil se ek aah nikalti hai.Yeh judaai mere liye bahoot hi lambi hai.Please jaldi se wapis aa jao. Nidhi : suniye,aap aisa bolenge toh mera kya haal hoga?do deen baad 31st Dec hai,tub tak main wapis aa jaoongi,i promise.Main aapke saath hi apna naya saal celebrate karna chahti hoo.Bus aapke saath. Ashutosh ke mun me kuchh aaya.Dono ne ek dusreko good night kiya aur phone rukh diya. Please do comments,whether you liked or not.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was super sweet alka ji⭐️👏
do continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one Alka ji ...So Ashu is going to celebrate new yr with Nidhi 😉

Wow nice idea , Please continue 😊
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Part 2 waise bhi main khud hi itni impatient hoo ki jaldi update kar hi deti hoo. ============================================================= Ashutosh ki baten sunkar Nidhi itni bechain hui ki uska kisi chij me mun hi nahi lag raha tha.Lekin fir bhi woh doctor thi toh usne apne aapko sambhala aur use baba ki baat yaad aayi," Work come first." Nidhi ko Seminar me bahoot sare behetarin doctors mile.Aur sabne uski taarif bhi ki .CM ke operation ki charcha yahaa bhi hui,uspar sabhi ne use badhai bhi di aur sarahna bhi ki. Aur fir aakhri din Ball-room dance party thi.Nidhi ka toh mun hi nahi tha taiyaar hone ka. Dr Priyanka ne kahaa," Nidhi,yeh to party hai,hum taiyaar hue bina nahi jaa sakte.Dress code saree hai yaar,please." Nidhi," aap log jaiye.Main yahaa hi rahoongi.Muze koi interest nahi hai party main. Taiyaar hokar bhi kise dikhana hai? Priyanka," Nidhi,achha nahi lagata.Chalo jaldi taiyaar ho jao.Yeh party khatam karke hum sab to raat ko hi wapis chale jayenge toh fir Dr Ashutosh se jee bharke mil lena.ab chalo. Nidhi ne taiyaar hone ke liye suitcase khola toh usme Blue Colour ki saree thi,jo Ashutosh ne use janamdin pe gift ki thi.Jisme ek chitthi bhi thi," Aasmaan se utari pari ki tarah,Zeel me behete paani ki tarah,Aasman me chamakte tare ki tarah,tum meri zindagi me ho dhadkan ki tarah.Tumhare liye tadapta Ashutosh. Bus fir kya tha?Nidhi ne woh saree aur halka sa diamond ka set pehena aur party me aa gai.Sub log dance kar rahe the aur woh chupchap ek kone me khadi thi,udaas. Tabhi maik me kisiki aawaaz sunai di.Aasmaan se utari pari ki tarah.Zeel me behete paani ki tarah ab Nidhi chauk gai aur usne stage ki taraf dekha toh wahaa andhera tha.fir se aawaaj gunji,"Aasmaan me chamakte taareki tarah,Tum meri zindagi me ho dhadkan ki tarah. Aur wahaa se violin me ek dhoon baji," O saathi re,tere bina kya jina? tere bina bhi kya jeena.Fulome,kaliyome sapno ki galiyo me tere bina kuchh kahi na.tere bina bhi kya jeena? Aur spotlight us par padi,woh dr Ashutosh the,haath me violin liye.Sab unke pas gaye toh unhone kahaa," aaj main dr Ashutosh nahi hoo,Main dr Nidhi ka pati hoo. Aur dono ne isi gaane pe dance kiya.Nidhi bahoot khush ho gai.=========================================================== Nidhi aur Ashutosh dance karte hue.Nidhi,'aapne bataya kyon nahi ki aap aa rahe hai? Ashutosh," Bus nidhi,muze khud pata nahi ki mera dil kya chahta hai?bus tumhare pas aaneka.Tumhare bina jeeneki aadat nahi hai na,isiliye mun bechain ho raha tha.Na kisise kuchh kahaa,na kisika suna.Bus sirf apne dil ki aawaaz suni aur chala aaya tumse milne. Party khatam ho gai aur sab jane ke liye nikale.Ashutosh aur Nidhi gaadi me hotel ki taraf ja rahe the.Tabhi dr Ashutosh ne Nidhi se kahaa," Nidhi,tum hotel me packing jaldi se kar lo,barah baje se pehele hume kahi jana hai,hum New year kahi aur celebrate kahi aur karne wale hai.Please jaldi karo,main tumhe help karta hoo packing me. Nidhi was quite surprised to see Ashutosh like this.But she was excited too.They done their packing .They dropped priyanka and jyotika at the airport they started their way to unknown place which was unknown for Nidhi but not for Ashutosh.Their Journey for New year and romantic night was waitng for them. Part 3 will update soon comments please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice 👏 waiting for the 3 part please jaldi se update ker dijay
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG now cant wait ...Romantic Night

jaldi Jaldi
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Originally posted by: aru29

it was super sweet alka ji⭐️👏

do continue soon...😊

thanks aru,will cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: saibanu

Good one Alka ji ...So Ashu is going to celebrate new yr with Nidhi 😉


Wow nice idea , Please continue 😊

part 2 updated
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: seemakothari

nice 👏 waiting for the 3 part please jaldi se update ker dijay

i am updating soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: saibanu

OMG now cant wait ...Romantic Night


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ya sure honey

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