DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: Anjani9
Hello Anuji...

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aryanpp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

HAi Thanks for the update...😊 But I felt ashi story got COMPLICATED TOOO MUCH... Now both are aware of their love for each other but still some how very very complicate... I was expecting a very romantic love story to be continued & the good news will also be in a happy romantic scenario of the result of their happy union but here it was more like an accidently became pregnant and no sign of love in the air... please clear this complication of ashni as it has created a very very tense atmosphere...😕

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syedzoya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Wonderful chap...Luved it very much...Awesome part...Thanks for the long long update...Waiting for the next chap... And hope some misunderstandings gets solve in next chap.. Overall a beautiful part..

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

Originally posted by: aryanpp
HAi Thanks for the update...😊 But I felt ashi story got COMPLICATED TOOO MUCH... Now both are aware of their love for each other but still some how very very complicate... I was expecting a very romantic love story to be continued & the good news will also be in a happy romantic scenario of the result of their happy union but here it was more like an accidently became pregnant and no sign of love in the air... please clear this complication of ashni as it has created a very very tense atmosphere...😕

Thanx for the review and the comments.

@aryanpp

I am sorry that you thought the story is too complicated. Actually this story is meant to be that way.

The complications are going to continue, and in some chapters even increase a bit. Although this is an AshNi story it is not a conventional one. The issues between them are not meant to get solved at this stage. The last couple may three( I will have to see) chapters are the only ones where the romance and feelings will be out in the open. And as I have no plans to end this or any other of my FF's any time soon, there will be no declarations of love from either of the main characters.

I am so sorry if the idea does not appeal, but my other three FF specially Season For Love have plenty of romance in them. Although they also have their share of ups and downs too.

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

Originally posted by: syedzoya
Wonderful chap...Luved it very much...Awesome part...Thanks for the long long update...Waiting for the next chap... And hope some misunderstandings gets solve in next chap.. Overall a beautiful part..

Hi Sweetie

Thanks a bunch for the comments.

I am glad you liked it. Am going to be updating HHGA next.

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gargpoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

Wonderful chap aunty...so hot😳

their convo was beautifully written...so imotional...

both are aware of their love,but why don't they accept it in front of each other???

they hurt each other every time...

can't wait 4 next...What will ashu do now??

Please update soon...

& please don't disappear again...

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Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#887

Where is Anuji today?

HAVE been down with a migraine today

Came on forum to answer my comments.

Migrane???? How are you now???

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suku_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#888

Thanks a lot Anu ji for give the update despite of your busy schedule... You know DC was not one of my favs I liked it though but not fav but now i am quite liking it...Superb...!!

AWESOME UPDATE Anu ji 👏👏👏 loved it...thought it was like a roller coaster ride...😆

Loved the suspense in starting... You portrayed the Ashu-Nidhi's turmoil very well... Both fighting within themselves for their undeclared love 👏...

Loved the Nidhi confrontation in study and what followed wow... it was awesome !!

I loved the small scene when Ashu looks at CV's photo and apologies for his behaviors... awesome...

But I dont get one thing... Nidhi said naa I was falling in love with you then why Ashu didn't acknowledged it 😕... He would have also said I love you naa... 😡 and then his behavious after those 5 days "service"... So couldn't understand it...😕

OMG that hospital was so so so emotional... I was actually feeling bad for that lil girl... BTW by any chance will Ashu and Nidhi will adopt her ??

Well eagerly waiting for your next update... just for Ashu's reactions on the news. 😉😆

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Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: Anjani9

Where is Anuji today?

HAVE been down with a migraine today

Came on forum to answer my comments.

Migrane???? How are you now???

How are you today?

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: gargpoo
Wonderful chap aunty...so hot😳
their convo was beautifully written...so imotional...

both are aware of their love,but why don't they accept it in front of each other???

they hurt each other every time...

can't wait 4 next...What will ashu do now??

Please update soon...

& please don't disappear again...

Hello Pooja

Thanks for your wonderful comments. i am so glad you liked the chapter.

Sweetheart this story is all about misunderstanding, and hesitations. About understaanding and loving each other.

You see this is like an arranged marriage, where neither knows each other.

Well in this they do love each other, and they will learn slowly before they decalre their feelings.

the desperation at the thought of being deparated, then finally sacrificing because they think that that is what the other wants. so you will have to waiat for the story to unfold.

what i will tell you is that they will reach a truce. Then their dicovery about each others nature will begin, although they will still have the issues and tensions etc between them, stoping them from declaring their love.

I am working on HHGA now.😃

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