DESTINY'S COURSE chap 8 parts 1&2 updtd 1/6 page 130

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@Libra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: sshirley
Hey Anu,

a fab chapter, beautifully portrayed tug of emotions, reactions and actions..

I liked it that they won't clear any of their MUs anytime soon. and loved the way ashu assumed the worst when he heard just the beginning of her convo with anji ..

wish I could give u a more detailed review. But I m currently typing my chapter - which has v. diff. characterizations, so cant get caught up too much into ur characterizations. but please rest assured that I really enjoyed it..

Next is HHGA - great! When?

Thanks for the review Shirley.

I really appreciated it. Haven't seen you on my thread for a while. How have you been?

I am glad you liked the update. And don't worry about detailed review.

HHGA...working on it. No definite date yet.

Edited by Libra - 12 years ago

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sshirley

@sshirley

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: Libra

Thanks for the review Shirley.

I really appreciated it. Haven't seen you on my thread for a while. How have you been?

I am glad you liked the update. And don't worry about detailed review.

HHGA...working on it. No definite date yet.

I am fine.

I keep too busy these days managing my own ff .. do u read it?

and yes sorry I forgot.. belated happy MA.

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: Libra

I am sorry Poonam. Actually I did not forget you.

But ou see my PC has the program where the words and names I use most POP up as soon as I type the first 3-4 letters, and I guess I did not pay attenttion. Pooja and Poonam both begin with "POO"and J comes before N. Sorry.😳

No problem...😊

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deepaligupta197

@deepaligupta197

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#904

Lovely chap Anu that drowns the readers in its captivating plot and precarious romance. Characters are realistic, likable and earthy. Emotions run the gamut from insecurity and fear to passion, pain and the indescribable joy .

The interactions between the main characters are simply delightful and the character development is both believable and gives good points to ponder. So much to enjoy in this one, it definitely stays on the list of my favs.

So many moments that moved me to tears on more than one occasion - not to mention a love story that swept my heart up.

Nidhi is strong n appears to be super confident but in reality she is a scared and terrified girl who is trying to copeup with the fact that she has to leave both Ashu n her baby one day.. She isn't afraid to speak her mind, stand her ground. Loved it! It was beautiful to watch her realize just how wrong she was about Ashu.

Ashu's character is also very unusual , he is silent, deep, intense type, the rugged guy not very good with words, doesn't always say or do the right thing at the right moment; the guy who doesn't always handle the heroine in a smooth way. His kind of stoic, an intense look sometimes saying more than words, and but somewhere deep inside he does love n care for her.

They both know they love each other yet wear their masks to hide their feelings.

The way Nidhi adorns n supports Ashu in the patient incident was an emotional roller coaster ride! Loved the entire Ashu's self thot sequence too! His pain , guilt , remorse all evident!

Anji Nidhi frndship , amiable n supportive .

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ssktlk

@ssktlk

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#905

Hi Anu,

Glad to have you back with a gorgeous update. Missed you so much. So Nidhi is pregnant finally, wonder what will ashu's reaction be.Love how each of them doesn't want pregnancy to be near each other but keeping it within. Hope these dimwits give in to their feelings and confront them :) Can't wait for the next one, I know the other ffs are in row.

Glad you had such a wonderful MA. God bless you with many many more.

Sanya.

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suku_07

@suku_07

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: Libra

@RED
In the update Ashutosh does react. Remember he turns around, and nidhi stops him.
He does not say anything because she says that she WAS BEGINNING TO FALL IN LOVE with him,
He thinks that he ruined it.
Then His behavior...
Well he made love so that she knows that he desires her and is not rejecting her. Now as for his aloof and cold behavior well it is because he thinks that he abused her and feels guilty for it. That is why he was thinking about letting her go...
I hhope that clears your confusion.😃

Please PM me if there is anything else I can explain.😳

Got your point ma'ma, no further explanations needed 😆

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#907

Anuji, I will try to give review this week..

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#908

Chap 7 Review:

I somehow guessed this house issue...Nidhi leaving the house to the family and moving out .

I have expected more hospital scenes...like how fellow interns teasing Nidhi ...few lighter moments atleast

and expected AshNi to melt a bit...but you have given different twists we have not guessed...

You have taken the emotions to new height..

She needed to get away from him as quickly as possible, because each delay made it that much harder.

That one line expresses Nidhi's love and trying to get out of this as fast as she can...

Their passionate love moments are highlights of the update..carrying her upstairs and tearing off her dress and love under the moon...

Anji-Nidhi bond also very nice and she is a true friend...

Are you planning to add the kid to the family? I don't vote for it...will it not complicate their relation?

Why are you not bringing other characters like Shyama, Ranganath etc into the picture...you want to keep this more of AshNi? Like more moments with the family, hospital staff etc...

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#909

Anuji, You will not come online till HHGA is ready???

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karajekar

@karajekar

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#910

chap 7 was outstanding anu

you are full of talent anu really ,you write like a writer or should i tell you are a fantastic writer

i was literally crying by reading this chap ,why ashu is doing this to nidhi ,

why he is not understanding the girl who have given her everything why he dont understand she loves him

why he is ignoring his feeling towards her

the way you wrote the para(how nidhi was talking with her mom & dad ) that feeling you showed

so perfectly ,

now nidhi is preg now what i m curios to know pls update fast pls

thanks for writing such a wonderful chap hats off to yu anu😊

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