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Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Hey...but I thought your Mallika was a positive character...don't tell me she will go the way of the show's Mallika too!

Have you seen Viraasat? Anil Kapoor is in love with Pooja Batra but is forced by circumstances to marry Tabu,,,,it is pretty obvious that Anil and Pooja have shared an intimate relationship...and yet she understands and accepts the circumstances and moves on...and there is even a fledgling relationship shown between Tabu and her...wonder if we will ever get to see such maturity on soaps?!

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Vidisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao

Have you seen Viraasat? Anil Kapoor is in love with Pooja Batra but is forced by circumstances to marry Tabu,,,,it is pretty obvious that Anil and Pooja have shared an intimate relationship...and yet she understands and accepts the circumstances and moves on...and there is even a fledgling relationship shown between Tabu and her...wonder if we will ever get to see such maturity on soaps?!

That was a good movie...loved the way Tabu gives her Rangoli designs...and the lipstick mark on Anil's cheeks, reminiscent of their final kiss...

Mallika is a gray character...just like Nidhi😊. There are no saints in the ff

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Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

That was a good movie...loved the way Tabu gives her Rangoli designs...and the lipstick mark on Anil's cheeks, reminiscent of their final kiss...

Mallika is a gray character...just like Nidhi😊. There are no saints in the ff

Saints are boring...but the kind of manipulation and sheming shown on soaps is kind of sickening too...it is always about extremes...glad to hear that you won't be taking such extreme positions...personally get put off by such extreme stands!

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Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

You have chosen a new story...it is good to read your FF. Nidhi not guilty about spoiling Ashu's happiness?? Though it was not her fault to create those photos and spoiling their image..

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karajekar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

hey wass up

no update tdy seems busy

sonali

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Vidisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Part-8

Baba used his presence of mind and met Mallika midway. He asked her to accompany him to the study where Ashu would soon join them.
Mallika- "Baba ghar pe toh bahut mehmaan aaye hai lagta hai, any function?"

"Beta andar jaake baath karte hai. tum bahut dino ke baad aayi ho na...toh bahut kuch hoga baath karne ko."
"Ji Baba"

Nidhi waited for them to enter the house.."Mallika was looking beautiful as usual. Her azure saree made her look heavenly...she had a passing resemblance to Katrina Kaif"...Nidhi's heart cringed while making the observation.

Mallika entered the study and made herself comfortable on one of Ashu's chairs .
"Baba aap kaise hain? "
"Mein theek hoon beta...tum kaisi ho...bahut dukho se guzri ho na tum?" Baba talked to Mallika but didn't look at her in the eye...he knew that the news he would have to reveal once Ashu enters the room will be too painful for her to bear. She came here to seek succour but will return even more hurt...but then, if he hadn't done what he did then his own Nidhi would have been in Mallika's place. Mallika is a strong woman and she'll endure all this and move on...but my motherless child Nidhi wouldn't have survived the humiliation and heartbreak.

"Ashu" Mallika beamed as Ashutosh entered...she couldn't hide her happiness on seeing him after so long..."why should I hide? we are one after all" thought Mallika.
She hugged Ashu and started to cry from relief..."Ashu...Ashu "
Ashu patted her head..."I am sorry Mallika...My mistake can't be forgiven" tears rolled down from his eyes.

"Tumne kya mistake kiya hai Ashu"Mallika looked at Ashu in surprise. Baba nodded and then it dawned on him that Baba hadn't broken the news to her. So Mallika wanted him to be the shoulder she could cry on! things couldn't have been more ironical.
Ashu was at a loss for words, he continued stroking her hair.

Baba saw Nidhi standing by the door, pain was writ large over her face. The sight of Ashu embracing Mallika was unbearable for her. The word - 'mistake' reverberated in her mind. 'So Ashu is terming our marriage a mistake just a day after our wedding'. Baba tried to approach her and called her name but she ran away hiding her tears.

Ashu turned back and saw that Baba had gone out. "My God, I don't know how Nidhi has interpreted this...well I will cross the bridge when I come to it, let me deal with Mallika first"

"Mallika, mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai...woh.."
"Accha ji, after being away for a few days I expect something romantic...but first tell me about the mistake you were talking about" Mallika crossed her arms and gave a loving smile to Ashu.

"Malli, Malli listen to me carefully. Please try to understand the circumstances...you may not regard them to be extenuating but please do try to forgive me"

A line of worry appeared on Mallika's face as she heard those words...Ashu looked emotionally drained "Aisi kya baat ho gayi Ashu ki tum mujhse maafi maang rahe ho? Mein tumhe nahin samjhungi toh aur kise samjhoongi?"

These words pricked Ashu's conscience, he stared her with pleading eyes and said "Malli, in the past few weeks I have drifted far away from you...and the distance is too big to be bridged now"

Mallika held his arms and said "Tell me quick...don't torment me by keeping me in dark"

"Malli, I actually...It is...I married Nidhi yesterday"

Mallika gave a look of disbelief...she shouted "how could you ? Mein musibat mein kya padh gayi tumne toh mujhe paraya hi bana diya...hamare itne saal purane pyar ko ek jhatke mein todh diya? …...and why Nidhi? how long has this shameful affair being going on?"

Ashu tried to make his voice as soft as possible...never once did I fancy anyone other than you...the circumstances were such that ."
Mallika cut in "The circumstances were such that you were enamored with her but she refused to give herself to you and hence you had to marry her in order to claim her as your conquest...unlike me she was firm about her values...I am an oversexed old maiden who slept with you to ward off her frustrations...isn't it...that is what you think about me. My novelty has worn off right?"

Mallika's outburst shook Ashu, he cried loudly and said "Malli I hate myself...please don't make me kill myself out of this hatred". Mallika became quiet and listened to him ...sniffles could still be heard...Ashu told Mallika all that had to be told..Both of them held each other and cried lamenting their fate. His moral dilemma and her absence conspired against their love.

"Yeh kya ho gaya Ashutosh...yeh kya ho gaya "

Nidhi passed by the room and found the door shut...but their voices were still audible...She rushed to the bedroom and sunk her face in a pillow.

After almost an hour Mallika and Ashutosh came back to their senses. Mallika wiped her face and said "Bahut waqt ho gaya..mein abhi jaa rahi hoon...donno what others are thinking now. Take care Ashu..phir kabhi milte hain...mere liye kuch waqt zaroor nikalna( gives a sad smile). Mein tumhe bhoolne ki koshish nahi karoongi..I can never succeed in it..Trying to forget someone you love is like trying to remember someone you never knew.I just hope that time lessens the intensity of my feeling"

She comes forward and holds Ashu's right hand and says "It is bad enough that we are hurt, let us not pass on this pain to our dear ones...you know what I am telling?? Try not to hurt Nidhi's feelings..let us spare her at least"

"Bye Ashu".
Ashu's relatives threw questioning glances at Mallika as she left...Her dignified posture hid her anguish very well.

Mallika made up her mind to stay away from Ashu...but would her heart overrule her mind?

"And ever has it been known that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation."
Khalil Gibran

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karajekar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

it was superb chap

i m feeling very sorry for mallu ,becoz it is very hard to forget true love ,

but i know mallu is strong women she will handle her self

now i want ashu to concentrate on nidhi ,& give her some time

ashu need to talk with nidhi ,so that they can look forward for their married life

sonali

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Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Very well written, Vidhisha...

The problem here is that Ashutosh and Nidhi are already established in our minds as a pair...if this were a completely fresh story, it would be even easier to appreciate this...but for now, one only waits to see when the relationship between Ashutosh and Nidhi will actually open up...

Our sypmathies are already firmly establsihed with Nidhi...am sure you will understand that!

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Vidisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao
Very well written, Vidhisha...

The problem here is that Ashutosh and Nidhi are already established in our minds as a pair...if this were a completely fresh story, it would be even easier to appreciate this...but for now, one only waits to see when the relationship between Ashutosh and Nidhi will actually open up...

Our sypmathies are already firmly establsihed with Nidhi...am sure you will understand that!

It is one of the unwritten rules of ff...the lead pair must be united in the end.😆

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Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

It is one of the unwritten rules of ff...the lead pair must be united in the end.😆

True...because the characters already exist...so there is only so much you can improvise with thieir story...the FF readers are utlimately looking to read the love story of their favorite pair...your captive audience is your strength and your weakness...go in a direction that is not favorable to the lead pair and you will lose them...I just hinted at divorce and I was pounced on and virtually pounded out of shape.. 😆

Edited by Sujatha.rao - 12 years ago

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