FF Completed: Hurdles and Hesitation (Index: Pg 1)

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maxnruby

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

LOVE LOVE LOVE the udate. And I am loving this story so much. Ashu's helplessness when Nidhi is confronting him, his speech, her innocence - just mindblowing. Mujhe lagta hai main woh hideous show dekhna bandh karke ab se saare FF's hi follow karungi. I mean cm'on!!! Why are they fighting over dye and specs?? And is that the only way to show age difference? Ashu ko buddha bana do! Up until last episode, he had not even one grey hair and now his entire sidelocks are white! Stupid writers!

Anyway, you are doing an awesome job and I am lookign fwd to the next update..

Keep writing..

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ApoorvaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

The flow has gone very well and the way Nidhi has barged into Ashu's place to know the truth is very much right wrt her character. You have handled it right...

This is going better than the carpy show KP Uncle is cooking...

"Aap ye maan baithe hain ki aapki wajah se meri zindagi barbaad ho jayegi. Ek possibility ye bhi to hai na ki meri wajah se aap khush rahne lagein."

I felt these words a bit strange and out of place. Instead Nidhi should have told, she never feels her life will be spoiled if she is in relationship with him. Here I felt she is a bit over confident to state that he will be happy with her...

Not sure what was your intention in Nidhi stating that ashu will be happy with her. I know you have very good clarity and hold on your characters and story line so there is a reason for Nidhi to say these words which I am not getting.

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DEEPIKA BANERJEE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

wow sharmishtha..I always wanted that tie sequence to turn out to be somewhat like this...loved the way you have presented it...⭐️

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: oaz30
haaai ... biiig hug am falling more in love wid this ash ni than your DK wala ones, i love the clash of personality and love the fact they fight for their opinion... Ashu is 😍 and nidhi is 👏 to stand up for her thoughts... the emotional turmoil of ashiu is wonderfully depicted ...

am seriously gone start the Mish on ktlk CV campaign...

Superb Awsome Brilliant

My highlights :
"It's not a good idea Nidhi. Some things are better left unsaid."

Can't you see what I am going through? Can't you see ki main tumhein khud se bachane ki koshish kar raha hoon?

As much as he had tried to deny it in front on Nidhi, she had managed to give him hope. A hope of happiness... in her, with her.

Thanks Sharifa 😳 Even I felt later that in DK - the inner turmoil did not get enough space. So, I have tried to so that back and forth that is inevitable in such uncertain relationship here. 😊

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Mimoha
Sharmishtha, I have run out of words to praise your work. Such a beautiful and engaging chapter. I dont know whether I am the only one but after reading this chapter I got reminded of the tie promo, birthday promo and the longer version of the promo in which N makes a heart stethoscope on A's name. Sigh.

Thanks Mimoha. 😳 And the promo connection is spot on. Those were my inspirations too 😊

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Cathy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Love this Nidhi and Ashutosh.

It was great, how Nidhi unknowingly persuaded/managed to get Ashutosh to speak out the truth which he was desperately trying to hide. Love the pace at which you are writing. No unnecessary dragging.

Btw, this dialogue by Armaan to Ashutosh was my favourite in the update. "Aakhir koi to wajah hogi ki tum dono ek doosre se pyaar kar baithe. To wahi wajah tumhare rishte ko bhi majboot banaye rakhegi" How true isn't it, when you put it like that.

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: kritash
fantastic, mazaa aa gaya.
the way nidhi is dealing the situation liked it very much.
exactly now with this FF i am feeling like watching KTLK, i started watching KTLK for this bubbliness of nidhi and helplessness of ashutosh .
great way of narrating the romance.
carried away with chacter, where nidhi was smiling i too was smiling and where ashu was confused with her reaction fealt that too.
fabulous work.
thanks waiting for next update.😊

Thanks dear. Really glad to see that you related with the characters while reading, just like I did while writing. 😊