FF Completed: Hurdles and Hesitation (Index: Pg 1) - Page 21

I love the first part with the interaction of Nids and Anji, the tranquillity of nidhi amidst the storm of baba's reaction and anji's reaction.

. He really loves you, doesn't he? Aur woh serious bhi hain," Anji's voice softened towards the end.

Perceptive yet you feel the longing on Anji's part, almost envy i would say this reminds me of Anji's look when she dropped Nids at violin date and saw the way ashu was looking at nids.

Ab ja kar himmat ho rahi hai ise tumhein dene ki. I hope tumhein pasand aayegi."

Acceptance is clear now he can move forward yet there is the twinge of doubt of whether she would like his choice.

And i love their exchange in the car... lol kudos to ashu's sense of observation J

Yograj Varma had spent the night sleeplessly. Dr. Ashutosh was a nice man, but never even in his wildest dream, he could have thought of him being a match for Nidhi. They were almost a generation apart. And then there was a shared past, which could make things bitter, which both of them were unaware of.

The turning point... the inner battle of a father about what is right and what he sees as right. You can sense his lack of understanding of it all and the fear about what will happen to nids

The phone convo... haila these two could be in an ad for mobile phone... as they go along u see the comfort level has increased and Ashu is much more relaxed and this is shown.

Then bam!!!! The climax... confrontation ashu baba... both men right in their stand and at the same time you have the father v/s the lover and you have to appreciate the way ashu behaves up to revelation.

His reaction at baba's revelation about the past link is controlled ... at least it is how you would have expected ashu to be and not like the foolish reaction we had on TV

Bas main ye kadwahat Nidhi ki zindagi mein nahin ghulne dena chahta."

Powerful words that in my view sum up the actual fears of Baba more than the age factor it was that bitterness that would harm nids is what haunted baba.

Haaaila i just loved ashu's reaction... the conflicting hero at his best.. yet the beauty of it is the self realisation is beautifully executed. He comes to term wid it alone and love comes across as the winner. One has to feel for the child that peeks out when he doubts about his baba's love. You feel happy when with that one letter his insecurities are laid to rest.

The letter the turning point and i love the fact that it appears as catharsis where you see the –ve emotion coming out to see only the positive left

Nidhi's reaction on seeing him awww. Her fears hidden behind the scolding :P

The confession is awesome... the love he has for her wins over the hate and awww bless ashu for being such a sweetheart

Kya tum meri is baat ka vishwaas karogi? Aur kya apne Baba ko is baat ke liye convince kar paogi ki jo kadwahat mere man mein thi, already back seat le chuki thi, lekin phir bhi thi, woh aaj mere Baba ka ye letter padhne ke baad mere aansuon mein ghul kar meri zindagi se, mere man se bah chuki hai, nikal chuki hai?"

These are the kinds of words i would have loved to hear MB say and darn he would have been perfect .. those eyes would have melted anything when saying those.

As much as Ashu shows maturity when he talks about his hate Nids does the same when she finally answers that old question of his. You have to love the girl for being so open so realist... she proves that age and maturity do not always go hand in hand and a youngster can have more logic and maturity than an adult (i.e mallu) Nids understanding of Ashu proves her love is real > To her what he has gone to finally acknowledge his love is worth so much more that diamonds.

She is indeed right when she acknowledges that it would have been sheer idealisation had she not had a glimpse of the man behind hardstone (haila mish I would visualise MB here) and the beauty of the words are commendable.

There might be 18 years diff but your ASH NI have proved that when there is real love and true love you can get around any barriers/doubts /fears that may come across. Frankly this is the kind of ASH NI what we would have loved to see on tv

As I said before this FF has an apt title, you took us on a wonderful ride where we came across the hurdles that were both social and emotional the hesitations that were prompted by society's expectations and that stemmed from inner fear to finally the acceptance of feels with it the power to deal with hurdles and hesitation of any forms,

Thanks for a wonderful joyride👏 and awaiting for the next one from you { haan i now I nag)

Originally posted by: AMBIKA2561979

😊oh ..plz plz..don tell me it was your last FF...😭😭...i'll miss your updates...it was soo beautifully written that i din come to know also when it ended...plz do come up with such things so that we can read n enjoy it...😊

Originally posted by: shali

thanks sharmi...

wonderful epi...

gone read it once more...

Originally posted by: RRANAMIKA

yaar wel written . nidhi's answer was really amazing . i felt as i'm watching a movie.
tooo goood
but very sad coz it ended.


hoping for anothr ff sooon...

Originally posted by: anu13

Hi Mish, very well written.

Ashu and Baba's conversation was decently done...

How you handled the house issue was real peaceful...it potrayed Ashu's maturity real good...

The way Nidhi explained how she loved Ashu was heart touching...

Overall, it was superb...but am sad and not able to digest that it has ended...I would have loved if you would have shown a little more togetherness of AshNi, their marriage and life after it...you know just like all I am also too greedy...

Well considering everything, you have achieved the task you have taken up to make us all happy...Eagerly waiting for ur next FF and would definitely try to comment after reading it again... if i come back from my dreamland of ur FF soon...keep writing...