Pyaar hi Khuda: Ashni ff part 8(pg 6) up!! Enjoy! - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Going well!!!! Very romantic!!!!! Update soon!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I really love ur all parts...n egarly waiting for next..when u will post it???
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Very well written waiting for ur next posts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Excellent progress.Jaada wait mat karana.Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 8

Nidhi

Nidhi went straight to Anji.

"Anji mujhe tujhse kuch poochna hai yaar."

" Nidhi, kuch poochne ke liye tu mujhse pooch kyun rahi hai…seedhe seedhe bol na baat kya hai"

"Dr. Ashutosh!"

"Kya? Unhone tujhe fir tang kiya?"

"Arre nahi …kuch hua hai yaar.." And Nidhi told her everything about the dance and tea stall incidents.

" Hmmm!"

"What hmmm? Kuch bak na…"

" Dekh Nidhi ab humari age hi aisi hai..you know hormones and all..may be yeh uska asar hai.."

"What? Tujhe mazaak soojh raha hai? Thik se bol na"

" Dekh Nidhi , mujhe toh ye lagta hai ki either you are getting physically attracted to him or you have strarted liking him"

"Yeh tu kya keh rahi hai Anji, physically attracted? How is that possible? Maine aaj tak aisa kisi ke liye feel nahi kiya…toh wo toh mere senior hai, profession me bhi aur age mein bhi…I mean off course he is handsome and fit for his age …"

" Toh fir you have strated liking him"

" Haan toh unhe like kaun nahi karta?"

" Tu bhool rahi hai Nidhi, unhe koi like nahi karta , sab unhe respect karte hain par unse darte bhi hain ..remember Dr. Heartstone and khadoos..tu hi kehti hai na?"

" Haan par yaar jab se main unhe jaanane lagi hoon , who aise nahi hai…Who bohot achche hain and he cares for me"

"Dekh Nidhi, jo hua use badal toh nahi sakte, but I must warn you are treading on dangerous lines aur uske pehle hi tujhe sambhal jaana chahiye…Agar yeh sab kuch humari umar ke kisi ladke ke saath hua hota to main khush hoti , par Dr. Ashutosh aur tere beech mein kafi age gap hai…Agar tune unse distance maintain nahi kiya, toh you might one day end up falling in love with him."

Nidhi looked at Anji wondering if what Anji had said could really happen.

Ashutosh

As soon as he reached home, he called Armaan his best buddy who lived across the town and owned and run a fashion house.

" Armaan , mujhe tujhse zaroori baat karni hai. Please come here quickly"

Armaan reached Ashtosh's place.

"Kya baat hai yaar? Aisi kya urgency thi?"

" Urgency hai Armaan. I am confused about a girl."

Ashutosh told everything to Armaan end to end.

" Hmm"

"Yeh hmm hmm kya lagaa rakha hai? Kuch bol na yaar . I am damn confused."

" You like her?"

" Ye kaisa sawaal hai? Off course, she is a good doctor!"

"Arre doctor woctor nahi…you like her personally?"

" I don't know. May be. I feel good when she is around. I like her company. She is fun"

" Toh fir problem kya hai?"

"Arre problem who hai jo maine tujhe abhi bataya… I mean, jo hua uss waqt mujhe pata nahi kya ho gaya tha…Jab who mere kareeb hoti hai, I just loose my senses yaar…Us din dance ke waqt bhi , mujhe pata nahi kya ho gaya tha…My heart beats were erratic…Uske paas jaana ya usse ….usse choona..you know what I mean, mujhe zaraa bhi control nahi tha apne aap pe aur toh aur mujhe achcha lag raha tha uske kareeb rehna…aur aaj toh hum itne karreb aa gaye the ki we would have ……"

"Kissed?"

Ashutosh looked down feeling ashamed to admit but said "Yes!"

" Beta Ashutosh , I think you are falling for this girl!"

" What nonsense?"

" Toh tu hi bata ki sense kya hai?"

" How can I fall for a girl half my age Armaan?"

" Ashutosh , pyaar mein umar nahi dekhi jaati"

" Par uska toh soch na Armaan…"

" Uska kya? Did she snap out or jerk away when you were close to her ya who bhi teri tarah hi trance mein thi?

" Nahi , she didn't snap out…"

" Toh fir toh aag dono taraf baraabar hai mere dost!"

" Nahi Armaan mujhe usse door rehna hoga, apne liye nahi toh kam se kam uski zindagi, uske future ki khatir. I can't spoil an innocent girl's life."

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Very good update...but ashni aksaath chahiye yaar...long updates...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Don't stop.AshNi story ka Khuda to humhare bhi bar gayee hai.Good going and update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Very good update...love it..but why u update small one..next time i want long n full of ashni part..Thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Totally enjoyed this ff. is it asking too much for a nice long weekend update 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Hey soniyas,
When will u update next chapter..i m egarly waiting...
Ab aur intzaar nahi hota...

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