Pyaar hi Khuda: Ashni ff part 8(pg 6) up!! Enjoy!

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Hello peepz,

This is the first time I am trying my hand at ff but will put my sincere efforts'If there are any mistakes please forgive me and also tell me your views'If you guys don't like it I will stop'Also, my story will be more sensual (I mean there will be more saiyyan moments ) rather than any explicit ones(coz I think even the show will not touch upon it though I wish them to coz we all are mature audience..but I will def bring it once the story takes a logical turn)..so enjoy!!

I will start after the scene after priyanka's shaadi where Dr Ashutosh asks Nidhi to join back Kotnis Hospital and nidhi tells him she is going to Europe on a holiday for a month.

Part One:

Next Day at Kotnis

Ashutosh is in his cabin remembering Nidhi's childish ways'He remembered what she said when she was washing stain from his shirt "Main na wo ad wali wife lag rahi hoon jo siddi daag , dandruff wagairah se pareshan rehti hai" this brought a smile on Ashu's face'Suddenly he stood up and walked towards Children's ward'.

Dr Ashutosh: Hello baccho'aap sab kaise hai?

Children : Hum sab achche nahi hai jab tak aap Dr nidhi ko wapas nahi latey'

Dr Ashutosh (Happy) : par bachcho Dr Nidhi apne baba ke saath videsh ghumne gayi hai'uske baad hi to main unhe wapas laa sakta hoon..tab tak aap sab ko apni dawai aur injection time pe lena padega na nahi to Dr. Nidhi mujhse naaraz ho jayengi ki maine aap sab ka khayal nahi rakhaa'

Children: Nahi Dr Ashutosh hum sab time pe dawai lenge Promise'

Dr Ashutosh: Very good bachcho 'par ek baat batao aap log Dr Nidhi ko itna pasand kyun karte hain?

Children: kyunki who humse baate karti hain..hume kahani sunati hai ..hume jokes sunati hai aur hume bohot pyaar karti hai..isliye hum bhi unse bohot pyaar karte hain'who bohot achchi hai '.Kyun kya aap unhe pasand nahi karte?

Dr Ashutosh ( a bit startled) : Ek secret bataun? Kisi ko kehna mat.. mujhe bhi Dr nidhi achchi lagti hain J..

Children: To humari tarah aap bhi unse pyaar karte hai?

Dr Ashu ( shocked to hear such a question) Doesn't know how to reply'and says'ab baatein bohot ho gayi'sab bachche aaram karenge'.bye'!!

Dr Ashutosh in his cabin: Remembering his convo with kids "To humari tarah aap bhi unse pyaar karte hai?"

Jab se nidhi gayi hai tab se uska khayal mere zahan se jaata hi nahi..yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai..kyun mujhe uski kami khal rahi hai'Dr Ashutosh you are just loosing it'may be i should also take a break 'he laughs on himself'

In Paris, France

Nidhi and baba are sitting on a bench with a view of river Seine '

Baba: Nidhi tumne Hospital chod diya..i am ok with that..main tumpe koi zor nahi dalna chahta..yeh tumhari life hai..tumhe apne faisle lene ka pura haq hai'Par bete tumne aage ke bare me kya socha hai? Matlab agar tum doctor nahi banna chahti to kya karna chahti ho? Tumne MBBS to kar liya hai..ab iske alawa aur kis field me jaana chahti ho '

Nidhi..Maine kuch bhi socha nahi baba aur sach bataun to main bohot confused hoon '

Baba: Agar tum shaadi karke ghar basaana chahti ho toh..

Nidhi : Nahi baba ..yeh wajaih nahi hai ..i mean yeh to ek na ek din karna hi hai par abhi nahi'

Baba: to fir kuch na kuch to sochna hi padega na'agar tum doc nahi banna chahti to kuch aur interest hoga tumhara?

Nidhi: baba mujhe doc banne se koi allergy nahi hai..par mujhe confidence nahi ki main ek achchi doctor ban sakti hoon..i mean it involves a lot of responsibilities'itna aasan nahi hai..mujhe dar lagta hai ki meri wajah se kisi ko kuch nuksaan na ho jaaye'dekhiye us din main ek bachche ko injection lagana bhool gayi jiske wajah se wo serious ho gaya..Wo toh Dr Ashutosh ne use bacha liya'

Baba : Beta lekin aisa to shuru me hota hi hai'par waqt ke saath saath tumhe zimmedaari aa jayegi

Nidhi: Thik hai baba ..main is bare me sochungi

One month passes by with Dr Ashu constantly remembering Nidhi every day and missing her and her smile very badly'While Nidhi has a blast in Europe while also giving a thought to joining back Kotnis'.

Preview: Nidhi visits Kotnis


p.s plz drop in your views good or bad...Thanks!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting!!!
Please continue😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice hope in you Fc we can imagine Ashni love process.
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interesting part when can we have next segment... can u pm when u post
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Posted: 13 years ago
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only 4 comments?? but anyways thanks for those who liked...!! will post the next part tomorrow...(may be today night if i am free) !! and a couple more later..if the response is good, will continue...!! I am trying to keep it logical as far as the story is concerned coz in the show Nidhi actually cancels her trip which i think was totally illogical and impractical otherwise they should not have brought in the trip thing in the first place...

But will try to spice up the story with logical happenings and some dreamy ones too and put in lots of saiyyan moments...
Edited by soniyas - 13 years ago
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good & interesting pls continue

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Part 2

Nidhi's home

Nidhi is unpacking.She takes out the blue T-shirt that she bought for Dr Ashutosh.She goes to Anji's house

Nidhi: Anjiii'Anjiii 'Anjiii

Anji: Nidhi'tu aa gayi...kaisa raha tera trip? Khub maze kiye honge tune haina? I'm so jealous yaar...Achcha bataa mera saamaan layi ki nahi?

Nidhi: Itne saare sawaal...haan ye le teri puri list..tujhe pata hai kitna time laga shopping me? Aur haan yaar Europe is just wow...we should go there together.

Anji: offcourse yaar I would love to and thanks for buying my stuff.

Nidhi : Chup pagli...Achcha tujhe ek baat batau? She takes out the T-Shirt for Ashutosh'bata yeh kaisi hai?

Anji : bohot achchi hai...kiske liye hai?

Nidhi: Dr Ashutosh ke liye

Anji: What?? Par kyon?

Nidhi: bas aisehi yaar ..jab maine yeh dekha to mujhe lagaa ki yeh sirf unke liye hi bani hai..He would look so good in this na?

Anji: par tu unhe ye kya kehke degi?

Nidhi: pataa nahi...socha nahi...

Anji: Nidhi lekin who kya sochenge ki tu ye T-shirt unke liye kyon layi hai...

Nidhi: haan yaar mujhe bhi ye confusion hai...unhe ye kaise doon...chal koi baat nahi'par main try karungi...Chal main ab Hospital jaati hoon...Bye

Nidhi goes to the hospital...She meets her fellow interns in the cafeteria..She was having fun with them when Dr Ashutosh was passing by..he stopped by to overhear their convo

Nidhi: Chalo tum logon ka bohot time le liya...Ab main Dr. ashutosh se mil ke aati hoon...

Priyanka: Arre yaar log to Dr hardstone se bhagte hain aur tu unse milne jaa rahi..gutsy yaar...kya baat hai!

Nidhi: Dekho yaar wo Dr Hardstone hai is hospital ko chalane ke liye..unhe hona padta hai nahi to hospital me sab lenient ho jayenge. Aur jitna maine unse interact kiya hai , mujhe lagta hai ki wo asal zindagi me bohot achche hai..actually very sweet and caring..aur khadoos to wo bilkul bhi nahi hai jaisa ki main sochti thi...

Intern: Wow ..Europe trip ne to tujhe bilkul badal diya hai.

Nidhi: Shaayad! Chalo ab main chalti hoon..Bye!

Ashutosh while was hearing all this was pleasantly happy. But rushed back to his cabin..

Nidhi: May I come in?

Yes ..!

Nidhi: Hello Dr Ranganath.

Dr. Ranganath: Hello Dr Nidhi kaisi hai aap?

Nidhi : badhiya..aap kaise hain? Europe se laut ke sab se milne chali aayi.And they kept chatting

Dr Ashutosh's cabin:

Dr Ashutosh to himself..yeh Nidhi kyun nahi aaye ab tak ..aadha ghanta ho gaya. Yeh ladkiya bhi na,,inki baate hi nahi khatam hoti'he started fiddling with his pen...when he hears a knock...he says : Come in!

Nidhi: Hello dr Ashutosh...

He looks at her with a smile and a relief on his face..

Nidhi: I am sorry maine aapko disturb to nahi kiya na ..main baad me aaoon..She gets nervous and walks towards the door...

Dr Ashutosh: No no no not at all Nidhi (Saiyaan'..naine ki bhasha samjhe na..)

Nidhi also happy to hear her name from his mouth and both get lost in each others eyes...

Dr Ashutosh: Please have a seat'aap yaha kaise? And how was your trip?

Nidhi: Trip bohot achchi thi Dr Ashutosh. Maine socha aap sab se mil loon Aur...aur main aapke liye Europe se kuch laayi hoon ...yeh lijiye..

Dr ashutosh: yeh kya hai Dr Nidhi..he takes out the t-shirt...par aap mere liye ye kyun? I mean iski kya zaroorat thi?

Nidhi: who bas mujhe achchi lagi to maine le li aur mujhe lagta hai ye aap pe bohot achchi lagegi (both look at each other and smile...Saiyyaan'.)

Ashutosh: Thank you Dr Nidhi!! Par yeh kahi mujhe maska maarne ke liye to nahi?

Nidhi: par mujhe aisa karne ki kya zaroorat hai ? ab to main yahan kaam bhi nahi karti..

Ashutosh : ya right!

Nidhi: dr Ashutosh aapne mujhe hospital wapas join karne ke liye kaha the..kya wo offer ab bhi open hai?

Ashutosh: Yes Dr Nidhi..kya aap hospital join karna chahti hain?

Nidhi: ji maine Europe me ghumne ke saath saath is bare me bohot socha...par main aapse kuch poochna chahti hoon before I can make a decision..

Ashutosh : Yes Dr Nidhi..please go ahead..

Nidhi: Kya aapne mujhe hospital wapas join karne ke liye isliye kaha ki childern's ward ke bachche mujhe pasand karte hain ya fir isliye ki main ek achchi doc banne ki kabliyat rakhti hoon?

Preview: what will Ashu say?


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Edited by soniyas - 13 years ago
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very nice liked both the updates a lot
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Part 3

Dr Ashutosh : Nidhi yeh sach hai ki main aapko isliye is hospital me lana chahta

tha kyonki children's ward ko aap bohot achche se sambhal rahi thi…Lekin yeh

bhi sach hai ki mere itne saalo ke experience se mujhe lagta hai ki aap me ek

achchi doctor banne ki kabliyat hai; agar aap apne kaam ko puri sincerity aur

lagan ke saath kare…aur mujhe ummeed hai ki aap aisa hi karengi kyonki kehte

hai na bhagwan ke baad doctor aata hai..to hume apne is kaam ko hi bhagwan

maankar iski puri shradhdha se puja karni chahiye..warna log humpe vishwas

karna chod denge…mujhe aapke happy go lucky nature se koi shikayat nahi hai

agar uske saath saath aap apni responsibility samajh jaaye… aur main bhi to

hoon aapke saath…She looks at him in admiration…and smiled at his last

sentence…

Nidhi: Thank you Dr Ashutosh..To main kal se hospital join kar loon?

Dr Ashutosh: My pleasure Dr Nidhi! And Welcome ..again…To Kotni General Hospital!

She stood up and was about to leave when he said " Dr. Nidhi aapne mujhe yeh itni achchi T-shirt gift ki to mera bhi farz banta hai ki main aapke liye kuch karoon.."

Ashutosh was nervous …he didn't know what he was saying or about to say…

"Kya aap aaj dinner pe chalengi…m…m…mere saath…if you don't mind…dinner will be on me…

Nidhi was dumbstruck….She couldn't believe her ears…Did Dr Ashutosh just ask her out on a dinner? Her heart was fluttering…They both looked at each other with feelings they themselves didn't know they had…There was something happening…they definitely had some connection….

She came to her senses and said "Khaane ke mamle me na Dr. Ashutosh I will never mind…main bohot besharam hoon …especially free ke khane ke maamle me to bilkul bhi nahi…"

They both laughed….!!

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Part 4

Nidhi was at home in a very happy mood...She was getting ready for the dinner...doing her makeup ...She took out a beautiful blue saari and wore it...She was looking like a princess..a doll'and angel..She was super excited.

Hulcul hui zara shor hua

Dil chor hua teri aor hua

Esi chale jab hawa
Ishq hua hi hua

Hulcul hui zara shor hua
Dil chor hua teri aor hua

Esi chale jab hawa
Ishq hua hi hua

Ashutosh also was also nervous and excited at the same time...He was unsure what made him ask Nidhi for dinner...this had never happened to him..Was he doing the right thing going on a dinner with an intern...What will everyone say if they know about it...Oh common Ashu, it's just a dinner...no big deal!!

Nidhi was ready to go" Arre ab tak Dr Ashutosh ka phone nahi aaya? 7:30 baj gaye...kahi unhone mere saath mazaak to nahi kiya? nahi nahi wo aisa mazzak kyon karenge? Kahi bhool toh nahi gaye? Ya fir kaam me fas gaye? To ek call to kar sakte the na? aur main yahan taiyyar baithi hoon."

Her phone rings.its Dr Ashutosh...she gets very nervous and picks up the phone...

Nidhi: ji Dr. Ashutosh, main aapke hi phone ka wait kar rahi thi.

Dr Ashutosh: Nidhi I am outside your house..Are you ready?

Nidhi: Kya?? aap baahar hain?

Dr Ashutosh: Kyon mujhe nahi hona chahiye tha? Aapko abhi time hai kya..

Nidhi: Nahi I mean mujhe laga aap aane se pehle call karenge...but no worries ..i am ready ..abhi aati hoon.

Dr Ashutosh: Ok !!

Nidhi comes out .Ashutosh immediately reaches out to open the car door for her and then walks towards the drivers seat.

Ashutosh starts driving the car.

They both are quiet...they both don't know what to say to each other...

Saiyaan naino ki bhasha samjhe na...samjhe na...

na na na na na na na na

Saiyaan...saiyaan...

Finally Nidhi gathers some courage and says " to hum kahan ja rahein hai?

Ashutosh: It's a surprise.but I can tell you it's a good place...aap niraash nahi hongi...

Nidhi: ok!!

Then there was again a deadly silence in the car ...

Nidhi reaches out to switch on the radio and Ashutosh does it too...The moment she touches the button Ashutosh's hand was on her's...Nidhi gets shivers down her spine..her whole body gets a feeling of electric shock...She remain still there...his hand over hers was like a protective cover..she felt so safe and warm.Her eyes were moist with a sudden rush of happiness and joy...she could not understand why she felt the way she did...

Ashutosh felt the same...The way he felt today, he had never felt before...he had shaken hands with many of his female peers but the touch of Nidhi's hands was so different...His heart went fluttering. He looked at Nidhi. Her cheeks had gone a sweet pink...He was now embarrassed yet happy. He drew his hands back and said Sorry!!

She finally switched on the radio.

"Chaahe tum kuchh na kaho maine sun liya...Ki saathi pyaar ka mujhe chun liya
Chun liya...Maine Sun liya
Pehla nashaPehla khumaar
Naya pyaar hai naya intezaar
Kar loon main kya apna haal
Aye dil-e-bekaraar
Mere dil-e-bekaraar
Tu hi bata
Pehla nasha Pehla khumaar"


Both get lost in the beautiful song. Both have been alien to the feling of being in love with someone.

RJ says "Ye gaana un logon ke liye ho yeh nahi jaante ki pyaar kaise hota hai"'Next song plays:

"Aankhein khuli ho ya ho band,Deedar unka hota hai.
Kaise kahoon main o yaara,Ye pyar kaise hota hai.. "


Finally they reach their destination, which was a bit away from the main city. Nidhi was pleasantly surprised. The place was very posh and the eating area was actually a beautiful garden, there were candles everywhere, in the background soft ghazals were playing. He had reserved a table..which was a bit secluded from other tables. He pulled the chair for Nidhi
"What a gentleman" she thought

Dr. Ashutosh..yeh sachme bohot achchi jagah hai. I wonder main yaha pehle kyon nahi aayi?She said!

Ashutosh: Really? Thanks that you liked it! Kuch order kare

Nidhi: ya sure..!

Ashutosh: Dr Nidhi aapki Europe trip kaisi thi?

Nidhi: wonderful Dr. Ashutosh! Europe is so beautiful!! Ek dum swarg jaisa, meri hamesha se ichcha thi ki main baba ke saath World tour pe jaau..

Ashutosh: Kamaal hai Dr. Nidhi, is umar me ladkiyan aksar world tour pe ya to apni saheliyon ke saath jaati hai ya apne...apne boyfriend ke saath.

Nidhi: Dr Ashutosh, First thing ki mera koi boyfriend nahi hai aur yadi hota bhi to bhi main baba ke saath hi jaati kyonki baba ki jagah koi nahi le sakta..!! Mere baba hi mere best friend hai!!

Ashutosh: Aapse yeh sunke achcha laga Dr Nidhi, warna aajki generation aisa nahi sochti..bohot khudgarz hai sab aajkal.

Nidhi: baaki sab ka to nahi jaanti par meri zindagi me mere baba hi mere sab kuch hain.

Their drinks were served. Music changed from ghazals to romatic numbers from films

Anchor: yaha pe maujood sabhi couples se request hai ki wo is dance floor par aake iski shobha badhaye. He suddenly came to their table and asked them to do the honours.

Ashutosh didn't know what to do. Nidhi was nervous too.

Ashutosh: Dr. Nidhi would you like to...

She stood up in nervousness, excitement and a range of emotions... They both walked towards the dance floor...
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