Pyaar hi Khuda: Ashni ff part 8(pg 6) up!! Enjoy! - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice...romance going on very well...go on !!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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abhi jara agey kya hua...ye bhi tho batau yar ...waitng fr ur nxt post...by d way gud work...lovd it...ktlk mai tho ye hone wala hai nahi...isliye ..imagin hi karna padega...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vasanthi16

Very nice...romance going on very well...go on !!👏


Thank you very much...!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woow some 600 views and only a handful of comments...hey peeps please let me know whether you guys are liking the story or not...i know its progressing gradually coz i am detailing the growth of Ashni relationship...now i have a clue why the makers rushed for confession...i am trying to potray the building up of a relationship and shaping up into love...and i think these small small meetings and interactions only help in knowing each other as a person and then falling in love...

But Thanks for those who liked and appreciated it so far!! Would really appreciate it if you guys hit the like button if you liked the story and and spare a few mins to leave a comment(good or bad)!!

Thanks in advance!!

Love!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 5 : The Dance

Spotlight was on them. Both were hesitant to make a move. Finally, Ashutosh

took her hand in his stronghold. He took her other hand and kept it on his

shoulder.She coyly moved her hand a bit up and held him strong.As she did this,

he held her waist with his free hand. He got so attracted to her , his hormones

went haywire and he felt a fire burning inside him. It was the effect of the touch

of her milky soft bare skin under his hand. He was controlling himself very

hard but lost it a bit when he slid his hand around her bare back to get a bit

more of her. She too was burning inside with immense attraction towards him.

She failed to understand what this 'Man' was doing to her in spite of being

almost two decades older. They both looked at each other and got lost in a waltz as the music played.

Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho
Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho

Kya kehna hai, kya sunna hai
Mujhko pata hai, tumko pata hai
Samay ka yeh pal tham sa
gaya hai
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai
Bas ek main hoon, bas ek tum ho


Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho

Kitne gehre halke, shaam ke rang hai chhalke
Parvat se yun utre baadal jaise aanchal dhalke
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai
Bas ek main hoon, bas ek tum ho

Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho

Sulgi sulgi saansein, baheki baheki dhadkan
Maheke maheke shaam ke saaye, pighle pighle tan mann
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai
Bas ek main hoon, bas ek tum ho

Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho
Kya kehna hai, kya sunna hai
Mujhko pata hai, tumko pata hai
Samay ka yeh pal tham sa gaya hai
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai
Bas ek main hoon, bas ek tum ho

Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho...

They totally forgot where they were and danced as there was no one around. Everyone looked at them in admiration. While dancing, Ashutosh was completely in lead and Nidhi was bowled over by this. He made her turn, he pulled her close, he slid his hands along her arms when he was behind her and then he slid his hands along her midriff. His hands were covering her navel. That was it. Nidhi's eyes were closed, she rested her back on his chest in complete submission and threw her arms up joining them behind his neck and he slid his other hand along her midriff too...Whatever bare skin of hers that was visible was now covered by his strong hands. Slowly, he got lost in her and was touching her as his own; he smelled her hair and dug into her long, heavenly tresses while Nidhi was completely in trance. He encircled her midriff even more to bring her closer as if to never let her go. His lips were less than an inch close to her right ear when she turned to face him. Her eyes were still close and his too. And now their lips were just less than an inch apart from being one. They could breathe each other. She parted her lips and he moved towards her...Their lips barely touched. They could sense each others breaths. The music stopped bringing them back into senses. Both opened their eyes. They looked at each other first, in awe, and then a bit of shyness crept in, slowly that turned into embarrassment as they realized what state they were in and that too in front of so many people. They broke apart quickly only to be greeted with a round of applause.

No one spoke after that!!

Edited by soniyas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
it was amazing dr... continue soon... so romantic...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
WOW...that's a really WOW and hot update ...love the song too...very apt.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Beautiful. Love the fact that there are four FFs going on concurrently and each has given the story a different treatment. Look forward to next one.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Excellent!!! This is what keeps me going:)) Especially when the real story is messy😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
very nice...loved it...please continue...😃

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