SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14

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mena_k

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Brilliant 👏

Thousand likes for your post 😛

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write2neetha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Just loved it... True they both need to talk first..

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sia.krpkab

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Amazing! So bloody good :)

Are the CVs reading this?

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Shaun

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

An Excellent Just Perfect OS

The fact that Dev had always believed the woman he loved claimed she loved him but could not trust his love and walk away finally hears the truth that she did not walk away but was forced to walk

Dev learns further about the prenup and its clauses shocking him to the core sure how can he blame Sonakshi when she was placed in that position

Dev confronting Ishwari and asking her questions every question he asked he stated it was always about her and he let make it about herself

now Mamaji too probably for the first time really learns the entire truth

I liked the gesture Dev sending flowers and his note acknowledging the faults but he just wants to talk

I hope something similar does happen between them

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

It was a brilliant piece written suvika di... Loved it a lot... Thank u fr writing it... I relly lived thr convos... Vry much.. Thank u once again...

Bt it ended thr... Bt i kno its an os... Nvr mind..

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Suvika.

@Suvika.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Good morning Everyone!! Or is it Afternoon??

Wonder how I did night-outs during my college days!! One night I stay up past midnight and I had to drag myself out of the bed in the morning. On top of it hubby said - I think age is catching up with you. 😲 I was 😡 and it became an ego issue now. 😆 You are 38 vs I'm young at heart debate!! 😆

Anyway, yet to read and respond to all your comments. Will do so now.

And thank you Divya - for everything. Above all, your patience. Thanks to your memory - for remembering and reminding me of all the instances in DevAkshi's life that had grated on our nerves. Thank you for making sure I vent it all out through this OS.

Love,

Suvika.

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peace

@Krpkab_superfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

This is by far the best thing I have read that address all the issues between Dev and Sona...

It is great for a write up but I think the show will not be able to take such a quick route to redeeming Dev or making Sona convey her feelings.. I am sure it will come in parts in the show, maybe over 4-5 different conversations.. if they move things so fast, they will have to close the show soon which all of us dont want😉

I would seriously want CVs to read this though.. wish someone can put it up on twitter tagging Mamta/Durjoy.. it will really give them a perspective on how to keep the confrontation and further push Ishwari down in Dev's eyes..

Keep writing.. great job👏

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AnanyaGhosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Suvika.
Good morning Everyone!! Or is it Afternoon??
Wonder how I did night-outs during my college days!! One night I stay up past midnight and I had to drag myself out of the bed in the morning. On top of it hubby said - I think age is catching up with you. 😲 I was 😡 and it became an ego issue now. 😆 You are 38 vs I'm young at heart debate!! 😆

Anyway, yet to read and respond to all your comments. Will do so now.

And thank you Divya - for everything. Above all, your patience. Thanks to your memory - for remembering and reminding me of all the instances in DevAkshi's life that had grated on our nerves. Thank you for making sure I vent it all out through this OS.

Love,

Suvika.

How did u manage these emojis??? These extra big animated emojis??? 😲

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NATASHA

@natasha_n

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Superb OS

I hope makers read it and take some ideas from here

Show is at stand still now...not moving forward just going round and round in same tracks

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fanktlk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Suvika.
Good morning Everyone!! Or is it Afternoon??
Wonder how I did night-outs during my college days!! One night I stay up past midnight and I had to drag myself out of the bed in the morning. On top of it hubby said - I think age is catching up with you. 😲 I was 😡 and it became an ego issue now. 😆 You are 38 vs I'm young at heart debate!! 😆

Anyway, yet to read and respond to all your comments. Will do so now.

And thank you Divya - for everything. Above all, your patience. Thanks to your memory - for remembering and reminding me of all the instances in DevAkshi's life that had grated on our nerves. Thank you for making sure I vent it all out through this OS.

Love,

Suvika.

Thank you Thank you

Most of the times before you write an OS we do discuss but for this OS I will gladly accept the credit.

You keep threatening to quit the forum and I look for ways to pull you back in.

When I first mentioned to you the Dev- Ishwari confrontation , i knew these 3 wont introspect and if they don't they wont see their own faults and the story wont move ahead. Soha had to be the trigger and seriously I am a little annoyed with the entire gender battle.

I knew I was planting the seed in your head and wasn't surprised that you wanted to write the OS.

Let me add a couple of my thought.

These 3 are in their own bubble and till they dont introspect I don't see them getting out. Dev was willing to listen to Sona vent only because he just walked in, in front of his daughter and the first look that she gave him was of being scared. That shook him and made him take a step back and bow down.

This will hopefully burst his bubble.

Ishwari would still continue ranting it is all Sona's fault but Dev questioning her that she would have behaved the same in case of any other girl will shake her core and make her bow down. You never wanted me to get married... Hopefully this would break Ishwari's bubble.

Sona has always been a mature and a sensitive girl... Dev didn't really say sorry but he sent flowers the same way he did the first time he apologized... This will make Sona take a step back and also force her to introspect.

Though I don't want Soha to be the reason Dev and Sona are together, undoubtedly she will be the trigger.

I do hope this post is shared with the CVs