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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Wow!!!! Mind blowing os👏👏
Hats off to u

I just loved it😃😃
I want DEV to react this way in show

Please PM me ur next writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: taara113

👏 👏 👏 👏

What ya...don't show us such beautiful dreams that can never be true on the show...luckily for us readers your writing creates such an involvement that one can easily visualize; and this story has beautifully played in front of my eyes as I read...

Thank you. 🤗

Though I would live up to my loyalties to Indian TV and say too much too soon...I'm just so greedy to watch the main leads that I would have loved the disclosure and confrontation and the meeting to go slightly slower...purely because I would want more...maybe more parts to the OS 😉

I know what you mean. I used to be able to do that before. Write a scene longer. But once I started on my novels, scenes became shorter. Very to the point and precise mainly because I had to take care of the overall page count. Now I find I can't write long scenes.
can't we like get a reply to the note and "The Talk" and then more

Reply?? Oh boy!! I don't think I want to go there. 😆

I wish the CV's understood these characters like writers on this forum do...I'm sure they build these characters with a lot of heart and effort but they so easily loose track and then all we get are some small moments which remind you of the initial essence...

And I think the story changes hands too. The new writer would want his / her own outlook and it gets all messed up.

I LIKED THIS TALK A LOT 😃

Thank you once again. ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: cscs

Its AMAZING. 👏

Its important for Dev to realise where he went wrong and also someone has to show Ishwari mirror too.
Loved it.




If seven years of her son deserting her, spelling it out to her that she was the reason behind everything are not enough reasons to make her introspect, honestly, I don't know if she ever will
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Wonderful OS..luved it..thanks ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Hum kal subah padhenge...😈🥳
Haaye-Haaye jeeji kitna tadpaaya aapne ab tak kuch bhi nahi padhne ko diya iss Gareeb ki beti ko...🤪


😆 Dramebaaz!! Nakal utaarne keliye GKB hi mili thi kya?? 😆

Now did you read or no??
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: tia.o

Thank you, thank you, thank you. I loved this OS. This I want to see on screen. Someone send this to CVs. 👏




CVs - I don't think they even want to listen to us Tia.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: gmgi

I love you Suvi. This is it. I don't even care if something like this happens in the show. Because nothing is going to surpass this. Loved it.



Geena. Super happy that you feel so.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Are you sure there is no way you can send this to the writers of the show? Slip it in the actor's make up room,distribute to the entire crew?Hand it over to them directly?😆 Any possibility? Or even better,can you become the writer of the show?
As always.Any chance you'll be writing more One Shots?They are any day better than the actual show.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: deepsel

Holy mother of all Gods...can someone please show this masterpiiece to the confusing CVs who are hell bent on talking the cliched route?


Top class writing Suvika..Now I don't care whatever damn ending they are going to show because this will be etched in my memory forever. Thank you - for this wonder piece and also for your generosity to write back again !!

P.S: I love your ball tickling posts too 😉😆



🤣 Ball tickling posts!! You do have a way with words Deepa. BTW... does this post come under the category of tickling or kicking?? 😆

Jokes apart... Very much Deepa and I am real glad that you enjoyed this write-up 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: romanticgurl070

Awesome one 👏


Thank you 😃

I hope we get a proper confrontation of Devakshi in the show & they solved all their issues among themselves without anybody interference.

Would the issues even be resolved is my doubt at this point of time. Or would they all be brushed under the carpet in the name of providing a stable family to Suhana

Ishwari face will be worth seeing when she'll know about Soha & the prenup clause

Thank you for writing such a beautiful OS😊

You are very welcome😊

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