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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Fierce sona is always a treat to watch
Loved it update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
AFTER THE SCENE
DEV GOES BEHIND SONA
DEV:sona plz..meri bath sunno...tum abhi tak vahi pe atki huye ho...kya tum uss din ko bhul nahi sakthi..muje maaf nahi karsakthi...
SONAKSHI:maafi unko milthi hai ...jisne koye galat ki ho..mr.dixit..aur apne koye galathi nahi ki...aapne tho bas meri jhaga dikhaya...aapki maa ke samne ,beheno ke samne,ayaan ki family ke samne,iss ghar main meri kya jhaga hai...aur shayad aapke dil main meri kya jhaga hai...and thank you so much...aab muje achi tara patha chalgaye ki meri aapki life main kya importance...aapkeliye aur aapki maa keliye tho main ek khilona thi...but i am sorry mr.dixit main phir se khilona nahi hona chahthi...seriously thak gayi huan main..inn sab se..plz leave me alone(she leaves leaving a hurt dev)
IN THE NIGHT
dev is back from office...ashi comes to him
DEV:ashi tum soyi nahi abhi thak...
ASHI:oo muje aapko good night kehna tha..
DEV:tho aab kehdho aur soojao...jao(ashi nods in no)kyun?
ASHI:OO mamma ne khana nahi khaya ...aur lights bhi on rake...aur jab lights hothi hai...main soo nahi sakthi..
DEV:omg...ashi..aapki life main tho bhahut sare problems...par koye bath nahi papa hena...sab problems solve kardhenge...aapke list main pehli problem...mamma ko khana khilana...chalo oo karthe hai pehle...kichhu bhaiya..aap sona keliye khana lagana...main fresh hoke atha huan...ashi 10 min wait karo...papa yu gaye aur yu aye(ashi nods and both smile
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Dev ne aisa kya kardiya...that she is do hurt??
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Waiting to know wat dev did years back
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Read all the parts together...
Eager to know the reason of their separation...
The story is unfolding slowly..
N Dev-Aashi bonding is very nice...
Aashi is so smart...
N Sona giving back is interesting...
Plz update soon..
Pm me Ur update if u can...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
IN ASHI ROOM..
dev and ashi come with food and dev knocks the door
SONAKSHI:ashi maine kaha na...aap nikki bua ki kamre main sojao...mamma ko pareshan math karo.jao(she turns to see dev)..aap...aap yaha kyun aye...
DEV:ashi..aap mamma se kahona..khana kale..oo kya hai ki unne bhuka dekhar aapne khane nahi khaya...aur aap ko bukar dekar main khana nahi khapaonga...kya tumhari mamma ek nutritionist hokar itne logon ko bhuke sone degi...puchoo na..(sona angryly takes her plate and eats the food..
SONAKSHI:dekho...aab maine khaliya na..aap dhono bhi khana khake sojao..jao(both of them laughs)..what
ASHI:MAMMA..humne khana kaliya...oo papa ne trick play kiya thaki aap khana khajao
SONAKSHI:tumhare papa ko tricks play karne ki alawa kuch atha kaha hai..chalo aab akhe sojao mamma ke sath(she offs the lights and dev leaves)

NEXT MORNING
AT THE DINNIG TABLE
DEV:sonakshi...aaj main tume drop karoo kya?..hospital thak..aur waise bhi ashi ko school bhi drop bhi karna hena..
SONAKSHI:no thanks..mere paas meri scooty hai...aur ashi ko main drop karlugi...dont worry(saying she leaves outside to notice scooty is not there)arre ha ...kaal raat maine hospital ke samne
DEV:chod ayethi...(she turns to see him)..isliye offer kiya maine ...aab chalogi...(he turns to ashi)ashi...chahe tho aapki mamma bhi asakthi hai.agar unne koye problem na ho tho..(sonakshi angryly sits in the back seat and ashi in the seat next to dev) thank you ashi...aap apne mamma ko laye hena..isliye(he shouts a little these lines)
ASHI:papa...muje sunayi dherahi hai...aap inte zoorse kyun bolrahe ho...
DEV:sorry ashi...jisko sunna tha unthak pounchne keliye...chale(she nods and both leave)
Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Aww..such a light hearted part..mission manao Sonakhsi..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Nice n beautiful updates
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
AT ASHI SCHOOL
ashi gets down the car and waves to them and devakshi does the same...she leaves to school
SONAKSHI:kyun kar rahe hai ee sab (dev gives a confused look)..kyun ashi umeedhe bada rahe hai aap...aap bhi janthe hai main bhi janthi huan...oo aap ke sath hamesha keliye nahi rehne walli...
DEV: sonakshi..ee kya baat kari ho tum..
SONAKSHI:hakeekat...mr.dixit...fact...ki aap aur main sirf naam keliye ek sath rehrahe hai..and 3 mahine badh...alag hojaenge..
DEV:uff...phir shuru hogai na ...tumhara so called lecture...sonakshi ek baar apne dil se puchoo...kya tum mere bager rah sakthi ho
SONAKSHI:kissi mahan ne kaha muje ki dil baat nahi kartha...aapki yaadhash itni kamzoor hai muje nahi patha tha mr.dixit...
DEV:sonakshi har bath pe taana marna zaroori hai kya?...tum esa kyun kar rahi ho...just because uss dhin main tume SUPPORT
SONAKSHI:support ...seriously...oo tho bhahut dhoor ki bath hai mr.dixit ..aapne uss dhin sabhit kardhi.main uss ghar main sirf ek cheez thi.koye furniture jaise...aape ek baat bhi nahi socha ki meri batho main kitna sach hai...

FLASH BACK
ranveer ,dev ,sonakshi.neha goes to their old house...and share the memories
RANVEER:par neha...ee ghar jhal kaise gayi..
NEHA:patha nai...par mami kehrathi ki achanak raat main aag lagayi..
RANVEER:achanak...strange!
SONAKSHI:kyun ranveer...iss main itna ajeeb kya hai..
RANVEER:come bhabhi!...aap ek science student thi...aapko tho inn sab ke barre main zyada patha hona chahiye..(sonakshi gives a confused look)...ehi ki ghar main achanak aag lag gayi oo bhi raat ko...ee thoda ajeeb nahi hai..
SONAKSHI:HA..thoda ajeeb hai...
RANVEER:i think we need to find about it...
(AFTER A WEEK)
sonakshi and ranveer meet in her cabin
RANVEER:bhabhi...hamara shak sahi nikla..
SONAKSHI:you mean ee sab mami ne kiya...thaki oo dixit house main rahe...omg koye esa kaise karsaktha hai..
RANVEER:ha..bhabhi..muje lag tha hai hume ee baat sab ko batha dena chahiye...
SONAKSHI:nai ranveer ..sab ko bhahut bura lagega...especially dev..patha hai jab unko patha chala ki oo ghar jhal gaye..oo tut gaye the..pehli baar unko rothe huye dekha
RANVEER:bhabhi ...tho hum ese sab ese hi rehne denge...bhabhi...jo aurat apni ghar jhala sakthi hai tho oo kuch bhi karsakthi hai...
SONA:RANVEER...sab ki feeling ke barre main socho..especially maa
RANVEER: bhabhi...aap unke barre main soch rahi hai...jisne aapka rishta kissi aur se karwana chahthi thi thaki aap aur dev bhaiya alag hojaye..
SONAKSHI:what oo rishta maa leke ayi thi
RANVEER:bhabhi ..muje laga aapko patha hogai ki rithwik ka rishta maa leke ayithi
THE NEXT WEEK
its riyas wedding sangeet
Edited by saira246 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Excited to know whats next
Update soon
Edited by DevakshiCrazy - 8 years ago

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