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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Too small an update.
Dev is blaming Sonakshi for her daughter's retort.
He should understand that for children their mother is epitome of all virtues and they do not like anybody criticising her even if it is their own father.
Waiting. Please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
So small update please update soon and longer one
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Plz update soon longer one this time
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
AT THE DINNING TABLE
ASHI:mamma jaldhi se breakfast lao na...bhahut bhook lagi hai...
ISHWARI:oo beta teri maa kitchen main hai...thab thak tum ee kachori khao na bhahut acha bana hai..
ASHI:YUCK...!ee kitni oilly hai...aur kitni spicy lag raha hai...muje ee nahi khani...mamma kaha ho..mere sanwich laona...
DEV:ashi eese nahi bolthe ...dekho dadi ne bhahut pyar se banaya hena...aapke lieye...ek bar try tho karlo
ASHI:ha..bhahut pyar...bilkul iss kachori ki oil ki tara...isliye nahi khana...aur ee meri kuch nahi lagthi thi...ee sirf aapki maa hai...uski alawa kuch ban bhi nahi sakthi
DEV:ashi!...tum maa se ese bath nahi karsakthi..chalo sorry bolo(angrily)
ASHI:AWAZ...niche kijiye mr.dixit...aapki awaz se aapke employees darthe honge main nahi...(sona comes hurryly with the sandwich)
sonakshi:ee lao...aapki sandwich ...jaldhi khalo...dheer horahi hena...
ASHI:ha..mamma bhahut dheer horahi hai...aapka breakfast hogai tho ee aap pack kardhona..break main khalugi...please...waise bhi iss ghar main koye khana tik se nahi khasakthe...(sonakshi smiles and packs her bag and sona and ashi leaves)
DEV:MAA...dekna kitni batameez hogai hai...muje maaf kardhe maa...tu ashi ki bath ko dil pe math le...oo muje naraz hai...isliye mujse jhudi huyi har bath ko
ISHWARI:koye bath nahi beta...tu fikar math kar...jaldhi sab kuch tik hojayega..
DEV:BHAGWAN kare esa hi ho...maa(he takes the bleesings of his maa and leaves to office)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
IN THE EVENING
sonakshi packs her things to leave and some one knocks
SONAKSHI:yeah...come in...
NURSE:maam...ek ghate main conference hai...dr.sinha...
SONAKSHI:what!...ek ghante main conference hai aur tum muje aab bolrahi ho...
NURSE:mam...dr.sinha ne bhi abhi inform ki hai...kehrahe the ki zaroori hai...
SONAKSHI:tik hai tum jao...main ajaongi...(she leaves) o god...aab kya karoon...ashi ko pick karna hai...ek kaam karthi huan...dada ko...oo tho kolkalata gaye hai...uff..mr.dixit ko call karthi huan(she calls dev and dev lifts)
DEV:hellow!
SONAKSHI:..OO aap busy ho kya?
DEV:nahi...esa kaam hi kya kartha huan jo busy rahuga...
SONAKSHI:ho...i am sorry...main badh main call karthi huan(she was about to cut the call)
DEV:wait..wait..!...imazine main esa husband hotha tho...
SONAKSHI:mr.dixit...mere paas inn faltu cheeze keliye waqt nahi hai...
DEV:acha tik hai bhathao..muje yaad kyun kiya?
SONAKSHI:oo mr.dixit...mera ek conference hai...3 ghante keliye..aur ashi ko pick up karna hai..school se...isliye
DEV:its ok...main pick karlonga
SONAKSHI:aur muje anne main bhi dheer hojayegi..usse khaana khilana hai..oo rath ko bhahut kam kathi hai...use soup pilana hoga..oo bhahut jidh karthi hai..aur...
DEV:ho..tho ee problem heriditary hai...
SONAKSHI:MR.DIXIT!...oo aapki bhi beti hai...
DEV:really!
SONAKSHI:any way aap muje divert math kejiye..usse homework bhi kardijiyegaa...aur 8:00 baje thak suladhijega..aur dheer thak na sone ki zid karthi hai...
DEV:tik hai...tum apne meeting pe concentrate karo...main apne beti ko samalunga..ok(he cuts the call)o god...finally muje apne beti ke waqat miljayega...wow...ashi main araha huan
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
Lovely updates
Fierce ashi is a treat to watch
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Hey! New member here
Read all the parts of ur ff.Amazing👏
I'm fed up of this maa-beta drama in show
Ur ff is such a treat to read
V well done
Update NXT part soon
waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
AT DIXIT HOUSE
ashi is back home with dev...
DEV:ashi aap jake change karo...uske badh khana kayenge...(ashi nods and leaves)
ISHWARI:dev ...aaj tu jaldi agaya..aur ashi..
DEV:ha ..maa...oo sonakshi ki ek meeting thi isliye oo dheer se ayegi...tho main ashi ko le aya..
ISHWARI:HA..oo sab tho tik hai..par tu ashi ko khud kapde badalne keliye kyun kaha...arre oo 7 saal ki hai...oo khud kaise karegi..beta
DEV:ha...maa .main tho bhuligaya...aur oo itni badi badi baathe karthi hai ki..usse dekhe bilkul nahi lagtha oo 7 saal ki hai...acha maa...main jakar uski madath kartha huan(he goes to ashi room and to his surprise ashi has changed her clothes and suprised dev)
DEV TO HIMSELF:ha...sab kharghosh ka kamal hai...tum bhi kharghosh meri princess ko apne jaisa banaya hai...
ASHI:mr.dixit kaha kogaye aap...
DEV:OO beta...aapne khud kapde badali...kitne saal lo se sekhaya ee sab aapki maa...
ASHI:aaj mera first time hai...
DEV :THANK GOD...aaj aab ee khalo...(ashi says no)aise kaise no...main aapko khilaoga...acha..sona ne kaha ki aap usse sare school ki sari bathe bhathathe ho...tho aaj muje bhathao na..plz
ASHI:(WITH little hesitation starts her story)aaj na...hume miss play ground leke ayethe..aur main bhahut bhahut khela ..usske badh hum ...(story continues and dev feeds his baby)..hoagai..aaj ee sab huva..school main
DEV:AUR aapka khana bhi hogaya...(ashi smiles) tho hamari ashi ne pura khana finish kiya..aur apna homework bhi..tho uskeliye hamari ashi ko reward milna chahiye na...
ASHI:kya hai...
DEV:UHMM...vedio game..patha hai..main ee game nikki ke sath kheltha huan..aur oo muje hara dethi hai...
ASHI:aha...ok..aaj hum unne hara denge ok..chalo(she takes dev to nikki room) nikki bua chalo vedio game khelthe hai..
NIKKI:ashi...muje aab mood nahi hai...
ASHI:kyun darr lagaha hai ki aap mujse harjaoke..
NIKKI:excuse me..tere papa bhi muje hara nahi paye hai...tho tum muje hara ge...plz...tik hai chalo khelthe hai...(they starts the game..while nikki and ashi are busy in the game ...dev only sees his cute little daughter)
ASHI:yes maine aapko hara diya...dekha papa ...maine nikki bua ko hara diya(she hugs dev and dev is super happy)tho main jeeth gayi tho main aap dho ice cream khilaugi...chalo...
NIKKI:ashi...aap jao hum athe hai...(she leaves) bhaiya kya huva...aap itne khoye huy hai aur assu kyun..
DEV:nikki...tumne notice kiya..ashi ne pehli baar muje papa bhulaya...muje kitna acha lagraha hai main tume bhatha nahi saktha...i am so happy..khas esa har roz hotha...
NIKKI:DONT worry bhaiya...esa bhahut jaldh hoga...oo dhin dhoor nahi hai...aur bhabhi bhi manjagi...akhir oo bhi apne obodro se kab thak naraz rahegi hena..
DEV: I hope esa hi ho..sona jhaldi se manjaye aur ashi muje roz esehi bath kare
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Wow! Very nice
Continue soon and do PM me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
I loved the Bonding between Ashi and her Papa!!

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