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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Ab toh Dev gaya...
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
dev hurryly comes to sona who is standing at the door step..
DEV: sona..ashi kaise hai...doctor ne kya kaha..main ek bar dekhe ayu ..(he was about to go and sona holds his hand)kya huva sonakshi muje janedho na ashi ke paas..
SONAKSHI:kyun phir se usse taqleef dene keliye
DEV: sonakshi tum kya bolrahi ho ...main samja nahi
SONAKSHI:samaj nahi aya main samajathi huan...ee ac on kaise hogai

DEV REMEMBER THE LAST NIGHT CONVERSION WITH ASHI
flashback
ASHI:papa papa utto na..plz
DEV:(in a sleepy way)kya huva hai ashi...aap kyun utti..
ASHI: PAPA plz ac on karona..
DEV: MAMMA ne mana kiya na...nahi aap sojaoo
ASHI:papa bhahut garam hai yaha pe...aur muje needh nahi arahi ...plz papa...thodi derr keliye
DEV: HA...tum ese puppy face banao ge...tho main mana kaise karoon..tik hai par sirf half an hour keliye uske badh off karlena..ok...promise
ASHI:kharghosh wali promise (dev smile at her etics and gives the remote and sleeps but ashi sleeps and forgets to of the ac)
FLASHBACK ENDS

DEV:oo maine hi
SONAKSHI: muje patha hai...aap kaise insaan ho mr.dixit..maine aapse pehle hi kaha ki ashi ko mana kardho...apne usse ha kyun kaha...aur ek raat keliye bhi ac ke bina nahi rehsakthe..what is your intention mr.dixit..meri bachi ko marna chahthe the aap...
DEV:SONA tum kaisi bath kar raho plz..main apni bachi ko..
SONAKSHI:PLZ..mr.dixit...aapke problem mujse hena tho mere sath kuch bhi karlijiye par(she pulls his collars)meri bachi ko kuch kiya tho mujse bura koye nahi hoga(she leaves)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
Wow!!! Ek ke baad ek update. Thank u SO MUCH for making new year so special with ur wonderful updates.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
Awesome ...thanks for quick updates
Happy new year..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
IN THE ROOM
ashi wakes up...and sona comes to her...
SONA:ashi...tik hona...bukar utargaya...aab juice piyo chalo...
ASHI:i am sorry mamma..
SONA:sorry!...kisliye...
ASHI: oo maine aapka promise thodiya na..isliye
SONA:kaun sa promise beta..
ASHI:kal maine aapko promise kiya na main ac on nahi karungi aur maine ac on karli
SONA: ashi...muje patha hai..ee sab dev ne ki hai...tuje unki side lene ki zarooorat hai..aaj tho unhone sare hadh par karli..
ASHI: nahi mamma..unhone mana bhi kiya muje..maine hi zidh karke remote leli...aur unhone kaha bas half an hour keliye..aur maine off karna bhulgaye...sorry mamma
SONA: matlab dev ne kuch nahi kiya aur maine gusse main akar na jane kya kya bholdiya..
ASHI: mamma...aapne papa pe gussa kiya..kyun mamma..unki koye galti nahi thi...unko kitna bura laga hoga..aap unko sorry bolna hoga...(she gets up)..kaha jarahe ho..
SONA:sorry bolne
ASHI:aise itni raat ko...papa kam kar rahe honge..kal sube shopping karke jaenge..
SONA: shopping kisliye...
ASHI: kal bathaogi..pehle aap leke tho jao..
SONA:KKK..aab sojao...(they goes to sleep)

NEXT MORNING
IN THE GARDEN
dev is trying to work but cannot..as he was remembering his conversion with sona...and ashi closes his eyes...
ASHI:batho main kaun huan...
DEV:(gets a smile on his face and ) ye..hath ko dekhar kehsakthe hai...ee meri choti si pyar si ashi hai...(and faces her and makes her sit on his lap)..aap bathao...are you fine now?
ASHI:main bilkul tik huan...oo i am sorry papa..
DEV: sorry kyun?
ASHI:oo kal mamma ne meri vaja se aapko datana isliye..
DEV: its ok...aapki koye galthi nahi hai...mamma ko aapki fikar horahi hai isliye...muje bura nahi laga...aur phir ese ac on karke nahi sovo ge...promise karo muje..
ASHI: paka promise acha aab aap mere sath chalo..aapkeliye surprise hai..
DEV:surprise mereliye...kaise surprise
ASHI: aap chalona..thabi patha chalega ki surprise kya hai...(she takes him to his room and sona is there)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
IN THE ROOM
dev is at the door step and knock the to her attention
SONa:dev plz...andhar ayena..ee aapkeliye(she gives him a paper bag)(dev looks back and points to himself saying mereliye)ha...
DEV:vese tabeet tik hena kharghosh...i mean tum gift layi ho oo bhi mereliye muje na digest nahi horaha..ee sab sach hai..ek baar pinch karona plz(she pinches him hard)..ouch
SONA:aab yakeen hogai..chaleye parcel kholiye...
DEV:GIFT bhi ese dherahi hai jaise bina vaja ki fine bharnepedi hai...kharghosh kahiki...(he opens the wrap and finds a collage of devakshi and ashi) sona ee tumne banaya...
ASHI: maine bhi help ki hai mamma ki..
DEV:(HE SITS ON knees nfornt of ashi)..ashi ee aapne banaya ...(she nods and says mamma bhi) thank you soo much...patha hai aaj thak muje kissine itna beautiful surprise nahi diya(they both hug and ashi pulls sona also) thank you sona..(she smiles)
ASHI: kk..papa main chalthi huan..muje na nikki bua ke sath vedio game khelni hai ...bye(she leaves and dev was also about to leave then sona)
SONA:dev
DEV:ha...sona
SONA:dev oo kal keliye sorry..maine bina soche samaje kuch bhi boldiya
DEV:its ok ...sonakshi...
SONA:its ok...pehle tho aap itne gussa hojate the...sonakshi tum mere bare main esa kaise soch sakthi ho..and all..aab ee cool dude wale image kyun banarahe hai...dekhiye aap chahe tho muje daat sakthe hai...plz
DEV: aab himmat nahi horaha hai sona...darr lagtha hai kahi mere gusse ki vaja se tum phir se mujse dhur hojao...Iisliye rehne dho aur main samaj sakthi huan tum ese react kyun ki..
SONA: kya samaj athe hai aapko..ha...aap abhi vese ke vese hi hai...budhu ram
DEV: matlab kya?...tum koye bhi baat sidha sida nahi bolsakthi...
SONA:aapko abhi samaj nahi aya na...mr.obodro...main ee collage kyun layi ..becuz i love you mr.obodhro..
DEV:matlab tum...(she nods in yes) ne muje maaf kardi ...
SONA: aab tho hug kijiye na...ee bhi muje bolna padega
DEV: sorry..(they both hug each other)..vese sonakshi agar muje patha hotha ki tum ek hug se manjao gi tho main kab ke karletha..(she hits on his chest) ouchhh.
SONA: oo sorry..main tho bas esehi
DEV: main bhi esehi (they hug again and ashi comes)
ASHI: aap dhono akele hug kar raho...muje nahi bholaoge..
DEV: ha..sona...hum hamare princess ko kaise bholgai...princess ajao..(she runs to them and dev lifts her and there is a group hug)

kuch rang pyar ke aise bhi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
Nice episode
After a long time u wrote so much🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
what an amazing way to start the new year
back to back updates and that too such nice one's

loved each and every update of yours dear

Do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Amazing n beautiful update dear...
Best gift n way to start the new year...
Keep writing...
Update soon...

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