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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
IN THE EVENING
ASHI IS BACK FROM SCHOOL...I
IN DEV CAR

DEV:ashi...patha hai..aaj na muje icecream khane ka bhahut mann kar raha hai...tho chale..oo tumhara favourite parlour...
ASHI:nahi...papa..mera mann nahi hai..aapko khana hai tho khalo
DEV:ok...ashi papa ko company tho degi na...(ashi nods)
AT THE ICE PARLOUR
DEV:(looking at the menu)..ha...ashi dekhona iss menu main kitne sare flavours...papa ko tho kuch samaj main nahi araha..aap help karona meri...
ASHI:papa..aap kuch bhi order karona...
DEV:tik hai tho aaj main ashi ka favourite hi khaoga...two chocolate plz..(waiter leaves)..tho bathao
ASHI: kya papa?
DEV: yehi ki meri cute si ashi itni sad sad kyun hai..
ASHI: kuch nahi papa...main tik huan
DEV: teri maa bilkul sahi kehthi hai...
ASHI:kya bolthi hai mamma..
DEV:yehi ki...aap mujse pyar hi nahi karthi...apni mamma se zyada pyar karthi ho...isliye apni sari scerets mamma se hi bolthi ho...aur 2D se kuch bhi nahi hena...
ASHI: NAHI..papa..i love you..ee sa math kaho...
DEV: tho aab papa ko bathao na...
ASHI: papa oo meri class main na ek boy aya hai...uski mom aur dad ka divorce hogai aur oo 6 months apni mom ke sath aur 6 months dad ke sath rehtha hai...aap aur mamma bhi itni ladthe ho aur divorce ke badh muje bhi..
DEV:aur aap ko lagtha hai ki mamma papa ka bhi alag hojaenge aur aapko kissi ek ke sath rehna hoga...(ashi nods in yes)...ashi...esa kuch nahi hoga beta...patha hai (she hugs her) divorce kab hothi hai..jab couple weak hothe hai..aur aapki mamma papa tho bhahut strong hai..teri maa bas ruti huyi hai...
ASHI; aur oo kabhi nahi manegi papa
DEV:kisse ne kaha..mamma nahi mani..oo man gayi hai beta..
ASHI: sachi..
DEV:MUCHI...(ashi hugs him tight) lao ice cream agaye..chalo khao..(ashi nods in no) kyun?
ASHI: kyun ki pehli bite papa(she hugs him) i love you papa
DEV TO HIMSELF:I am sorry ashi..papa ne aapse jhoot bola...but dont worry..main bhahut jaldh ee jhoot sach main badal dunga(he hugs her too)
Edited by saira246 - 8 years ago
Chandniyati thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Wow... instant update...
Thank-you...
Loving the way Dev is handling n bonding with Ashi...
The way he is giving her positivity...
Looking forward for next...
Sona's reaction n Dev turning the lie into truth...
Dev said lie but it's good if it makes a child happy...
N he has clear n true intentions to turn the lie into truth...
Thanks once again..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
Very nice update...loved dev-ashi bonding
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Loved Ashi- Dev bonding...
Pls cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
loving dev ashi bonding
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
When will you update the next part
I m eagerly waiting for it
Hope you will update ASAP
Thanks for the ff
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
AT HOME
dev and ashi are back...ashi goes to sona and hugs her tight

ASHI:thank you so much mamma...
SONAKSHI:thanks kisliye?
ASHI:aap papa ko maaf karli na..isliye(sona looks at dev angryly..dev makes a puppy face)
DEV: ha...sonakshi tu man gayi na..uss baat keliye jo subay hamare beech huyi thi...
SONA: oo baat ..main meri ashi keliye kuch bhi karsakthi huan...(ashi coughs a little) ashi aap ne icecream khaya..itni raat ko...baby aapko patha hena ..aapko bukar hojatha hai
DEV: oo sona...ashi bhahut upset thi..isliye uske man behlane keliye maine hi...
SONA:mr.dixit...what is wrong with you?..kuch kardenge aap...
ASHI: MAMMA..aap papa ko math datona..plz mereliye
SONA: ok fine par aapko promise karna hoga..aaj raat ko no tanda pani and no ac ok
ASHI:kharghosh wali promise..
SONA:kk...chalo...(she takes a pose)ek minute eee tuje kaise patha..
ASHI:oo papa ne bhathaya(and she runs away and sona comes to dev angryly and dev scared)
SONA: ee sab kya hai mr.dixit...
DEV: masuri ki kasam...maine kuch nahi bathaya ...oo baat baat main nikalgaya hoga...tum ese gusse se math dekna muje plz..
SONA: mr.dixit ee drama bandh kijiye.(dev comes to his normal state) ashi ashi ko kyun kaha ki main mangayi...
DEV: kyun ki tumhari so called lecture jo tum muje diya hena ...oo ashi ne sunli...usko literally yakeen hogai ki tumara aur mera divorce hojayega aur usko hum main se kissi ek sath rehena hoga...
SONA: tho...oo mere sath rahegi...whats the big deal in that?
DEV: tumare liye nahi hoga..par ashi keliye hai...patha hai oo kitni sad lagrahi thi...wait tume kaise patha hogai tume tho bachpan sehi maa aur baba dhono ki milgayi na..infact soruv se zyada hena..par muje patha hai ek 7 saal ki bachi par kya beeth thi hai thab oo apni maa baap ko ladthe huye dekhethi hai..plz ashi keliye...(sona nods in yes) thanks..chale(they both walk and dev to himself)main itni dheer se baat karraha tha aur kharghosh ne kuch nahi bola matlab oo samjne lagi hai..wow...i hope oo muje samaj legi aur maaf khardegi
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Amazing update. Happy new year😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
AT DEVAKSHI ROOM
dev is busy with his laptop and sona with her files...ashi comes to the room with her soft toy shouting mamma papa..
DEV: ashi beta aap hoye nahi abhi thak...
ASHI: papa...aaj main mamma aur papa ke sath songi
SONAKSHI: nahi ashi..oo papa ko ac ke bina needh nahi athi..aur patha hena apne mamma se promise ki na...tho
ASHI:(she goes to dev and sits on his lap) papa aap mereliye ek din bina ac ke nahi sosakthe plz(she makes a puppy face)
DEV: papa aapkeliye kuch bhi karsakthe hai(they both hug each other)
SONA TO HERSELF:uff puppy face banane main tho ee baap beti ek jaise hai..
DEV:(noticing sona murmuring)ashi mamma kuch bolrahi hai shayad
ASHI:kya mamma
SONAKSHI: kuch nahi jab papa bete decide karchuke hai...main kya kehsakthi huan(dev smiles to himself)
DEV: ashi chalo...sojathe hai(all three sleeps on the bed and ashi holds devakshi hands in hers)

IN THE MORNING
dev awakes to see sona ashi next to him and smiles
DEV: finally oo subay agaya jab main utne ke badh sabse pehle meri sona ko dekraha huan...aur meri beti ko bhi(he touches ashi head she hugs him saying i love you papa in sleep) i love you too ashi(he hugs and notices that she is having fever)isse tho bukar hai..sona...sona utto na(sona wakes up and)
SONAKSHI:kya hai...dev
DEV:sona...ashi ko fever hai shayad ek baar dekna...
SONAKSHI: KYA..(she takes the thermometer and checks the temperature) o god 100 ee tho bhahut zyada hai main dr ko call karthi huan..(dev holds her hand)
DEV:tum ruko..ashi ke paas ee call kartha huan ok..(she nods and dev calls dr.sinha) hello dr main dev bolraha huan...ashi ko bhahut bukar aap jaldi se ajayiye plz(he cuts the call)sona maine call karli dr athe honge..thab thak tum fresh hojao

AFTER SOMETIME
doctor comes and examines ashi
DOCTOR: gabarane ki koye bath nahi hai...bas viral hai..ee ice cream kathi hena bhahut...maine kuch medicines likha hai...sham thak tik hojayegi(doctor looks at the ac) ee ac rath bar chalrahi thi...ashi ac main soyi thi...isliye zyada hogai fever...tume ac badh kardena chaiye tha sonakshi..
SONAKSHI: par doctor maine off ki thi...(she remembers dev cannot sleep with out ac)
DOCTOR: sonakshi...kya sochrahi ho...medicines mangva lena..(she nods and doctor leaves)matlab dev ne raat ko...how can you do this mr.dixit...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#80
Awesome...ab DEV ki khair nhi. Please update soon.

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