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i am totally fed up of this maa bete wala pyar indebt whatever it is...aur patha nai kyun sonakshi chup chap seh lethi hai sab kuch...muje tho bilkul bardash nahi horaha...isliye i came up with this os..iss story main sonakshi har dixit ko jawab dethi hai...for your surprise sonakshi ka ek beta bhi hai as i have mentioned in the earlier post..so guys are you all ready

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ofc...we all would love to read it...please update ASAP😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay sounds interesting waiting for you to continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i am totally fed up of this maa bete wala pyar indebt whatever it is...aur patha nai kyun sonakshi chup chap seh lethi hai sab kuch...muje tho bilkul bardash nahi horaha...isliye i came up with this os..iss story main sonakshi har dixit ko jawab dethi hai...for your surprise sonakshi ka ek beta bhi hai as i have mentioned in the earlier post..so guys are you all ready

DEV WORKING IN HIS CABIN AND TINA COMES
TINA:MAY I COME IN SIR
DEV:HA...TINA AOO
DEV:SIR OO AAP KA MEETING KA TIME HOGAYA
DEV:HA..MAIN ARAHA HUAN
the meeting goes so well...and everybody were so impressed by mr.dev dixit...and one o the person looks at the clock...ok mr.dixit we are impressed by your presentation ...bakhi ki meeting lunch ke badh...yeah sure mr.desai...everyone haves their seat and wow mr.dixit ab patha chala aap itne ache bussiness man ke sath itne fit kyun hai...aap diet plan bhahut acha hai..tasty bhi healthy bhi..
DEV:HA..actually meri wife kehthi hai ki hume hamare health ko ignore nahi karna chahiye...and he gets caried away by his thoughts...

flashback:
sonakshi :aaj muje jana hai...kya maa ne muje sach mein apna liye ya aapki zidh puri karle
dev: sonakshi kaise bath karahe ho tum...maa tume apna liya hai...
sonakshi:really dev...aaj ria ki shadi main jo bhi huwa uske badh bhi aap ko lagtha hai ki
dev:sonakshi tum bath ko bada rahi ho
sonakshi:oo tho main bath ko bada rahi hai...aur jo aapki maa
dev{angry}:sonakshi enough
sonakshi:wow! really mr.dixit you have proved once again ki aap sirf apni maa ki bete...(she starts to pack her bags)
dev:sona tum kya kar rahi ho
sonakshi:aap apne maa ki bath bina kahe samajathe hena...tho aaj main bhi kuch nahi kahungi samaj legiyega...

flash back ends
Edited by saira246 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sounds very interesting dear...go for it
Update soon... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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as one of his clients calls him repeatly ...dev comes out of his trace...
dev:ha...kya huva
clients:main ee kehratha ki aapki wife...
dev:can you plz excuse me...muje ek kaam yaad agaya...
client:sure mr.dixit (dev runs to his cabin and opens his draw to find his sonakshi pic and strarts crying)
dev:7 saal sonakshi 7 saal hogai...kya tume ek bar bhi meri yaad nahi ayi...main jantha huan mujse bhahut badi galat huyi par muje itni saza math dhoo sonakshi...main toot kar marjauuga...tumne muje ek thak janne nahi diya tum kaha ho...aur maa baba se tho main nazare bhi nahi milparaha huan...kya tum apne iss obodhro ko ek moka bhi nahi desakthi...(there is knock on the door) (he wipes his tears and) ha...come in
TINA:SIR oo neha maam ka call ayatha..kehrahi thi ki
DEV:HA...muje yaad hai pihu ko pick up karna hena school se...usse kaho ki fikar na kare main chalajaunga

AT PIHU SCHOOL
DEV waiting for pihu to come out...she comes out saying maamu...
DEV:HA..BETA..jaldhi chalo aapki mamma wait karahi hai(she nods in no)kyun beta..kya huva?
pihu:mamu oo meri friend ki mom abhi thak nahi ayi agar hum chalejaenge tho oo akeli hojayegi na..
DEV:OO tho ee problem..hai...koye bath nahi hum aapki dost ko company jab thak uski mamma nahi athi ..ok..tho kaha hai aapki dost(pihu points at a little girl wearing a light orangefrock and matching shoes and dev goes to her sits on knees so that girl feels comfortable)hellow beta aap ka naam kya hai?
ASHI:HELLOW i am ASHI
DEV:SO cute name...tho aap ki mamma ne aapko bathaya ki oo kab ayegi
ASHI:meri mamma bhahut busy hai isleye unne late hogai...varna oo hamesha time pe athi hai
DEV:BACHI se important kya hosaktha hai...kitni laparva maa hai...apni bachi ki kyal bhi nahi rahsakthi..
ASHI :hellow aap meri mamma esa nahi kesakthe...lo meri mamma agayi...(dev looks to his left and notices sonakshi coming to the child)
SONAKSHI:SORRY princess aaj mamma ko thodi derr hogai...
ASHI:ITS ok mamma..aoo main aapko meri nayi dost se milathi huan...yeh hai pihu aur ee unke maamu
DEV:sonakshi...tum
SONAKSHI:dev aap
DEV:SONA..tum yaha kaise aur ashi hamari
SONAKSHI:HAMARI nahi hai mr.dixit...uss par haq jatha ne ki koshish math kijeye oo aap ki kuch nahi lagthi..(sonakshi leaves from there with ashi)

Edited by saira246 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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dev to himself:sonakshi itne saalon badh yaha...aur ashi usko mamma kehthi hai..matlab oo meri (after a pause)meri beti hai...nahi esa kese hosaktha hai doctor ne tho kaha ki sonakshi kabhi maa nahi bansakthi...par 7% chance hena...muje patha karna hoga...kal (he turns to pihu)
DEV:pihu kaal bhi maamu hi aapko pick up karne ayenge tik hai
PIHU:matlab mamma kal bhi nahi ayegi...
DEV:beta...aap ese sad math ho...ek kaam karthe hai..kal aap ke school ke badh hum icecream kane chale
EXCITED PIHU:sachi maamu ...
DEV:ha...aur apne nayi dost ko bhi sath leke aoo
PIHU:ashi par uski mamma nahi manegi..
DEV:tum uski chitha math karo...uske sath kaise deal karna hai main ache se jantha huan...tum apne dost ko inform kardena...(pihu nods in yes)

AT NIGHT
DEV:tina kal tum sonakshi ke paas jarahi ho...sham 4:00 baje...aur tum usko theen ganto keliye busy rakogi..
TINA:PAR SIR main unke paas jakar kya karoon aur aapko lagtha hai oo muje apni cabin thak bhi anedegi ee janthe huye bhi main aap keliye kaam karthi huan
DEV:tina...tum kuch bhi karo..par oo 7:00 baje thak busy hona chahiye...its dev dixit order...(saying he cuts the call) sona sab dhoodh ka dhoodh aur pani ka pani hojayega

THE NEXT EVENING
AT THE SCHOOL
DEV:ashi pihu chale...(they nod in yes)
ASHI:oo pihu muje ek question puchna tha..main tumhare maamu ko kya bulaoo...unke naam tho itne lamba hai..aur tongue twisting hena
DEV TO HIMSELF:mera naam lamba hai...sonakshi bose dixit se bhi lamba hai kya...
ASHI:ha...main aapko 2D BHULAOGI..alright
DEV:2D! ee kaisa naam hai...ee bhi koye naam hotha hai kya?
ASHI: 2D aap ka naam ka short cut hai...kyun ki aapke naam main 2 2 dees hena isliye..(dev smiles at her inocence and takes them to hospital surprised kids ask him several questions dev answers them saying its a regular check up .)
tests were been test done and doctor informs dev that he would send the reports to home at 9pm
Edited by saira246 - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!! Twist!!! Okye waiting for Doodh ka Doodh aur Pani ka Pani...!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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AT NIGHT
AT ISHWARI NIWAS
dev desperately waiting for the reports
dev:i hope...main jo soch raha haun ooo sach ho...agar ee sach hai tho meri sonakshi wapas aa sakthi hai...mere paas..(there is a knock on the door dev sign the papers and takes the papers ,checks the reports)thank god...iss ka matlab ashi meri beti hai...meri aur sonakshi ki beti...hamari beti...sonakshi tumne jhoot bolana...par kyun?..tum muje apni beti se dhoor nahi karsakthi...main esa kabhi nahi hone dunga..

NEXT MORNING AT SONAKSHI CABIN
angry dev comes to sonakshi cabin without even knocking the door...
SONAKSHI:seriously mr.dixit...aap apne maa se bina pooche knock bhi nahi karsakthe...
DEV:baath ghumaneki koshish math karo sonakshi...main sach janchuka huan
SONAKSHI:SACH !kaisa sach...may be sun rises in the east...
DEV:sonakshi you know exactly what i am talking about...main ashi ke bare main baat kar raha huan...main janchuka huan ki ashi meri beti hai..tum meri beti ko mujse dhoor nahi karsakthi sonnakshi..(sonakshi gives a sarcastic smile) tum has rahi ho...tume ee sab mazak lag raha hai...sonakshi main chahu tho uss par claim karsaktha haun...
SONAKSHI:(SMILING)muje patha tha...mr.dixit...ki aap ee report lekar eese emotional wale bath lekar ashi pe haq jatha ne zaroor ayenge...isliye maine oo prenup apne sath rakha
DEV:PRENUP?
SONAKSHI:DONT tell me aapko yaad nahi hai...vahi prenup jo aapne banwaya...remember

FLASHBACK
MAA:dev muje lagtha tume sonakshi ko iss kagzat ke bare main batha dena chahiye...
DEV:maa...kaise bath kar rahi hai...sonakshi already mujse naraz hai aur agar main iss papers ke bare main ..nahi
(meanwhile sonakshi overhears the conversatin)
SONAKSHI:KAUN SI papers hai dev...
DEV:OO kuch nahi hai sonakshi (she pulls the papers from him)sona oo
SONAKSHI:PRENUP...seriously mr.dixit muje sach main patha nahi tha ki aap hamare divorce ke liye itna desperate horahe hai...tho tik hai agar aap ese chahthe hai tho esahi hi hoga...(she signs the divorce papers)aaj ke badh aapka aur mera koye rishta nahi hoga...good bye mr.dixit..(sonakshi leaves the house )
FLASHBACK ENDS

DEV:SONAKSHI oo bas ek misundersatnding thi...maa tho bas
SONAKSHI:aapki maa kya chahthi hai..kya sochthi thi...muje iss se koye farak nahi padtha mr.dixit...forget that coming to the point...iss papers ki 3 page ki 2 para ki first line padlijiye(dev angryly looks at it and shocked) kyun chok gaye ...iss main clearly likha hai ki agar hamara divorce hotha hai...uske badh mera koye bacha hotha hai..muje usko akele palna hoga...tho aap ashi pe apna haq jatha na band kijiye...plz leave(dev leaves from her cabin nad walks through the corridor and ashi hugs him)
ASHI:2D! aap yaha kya kar rahe ho(dev smiles and sits on his knees )
DEV:OO kya hena ...main princess ko miss kar raha tha..tho milne agaya...
ASHI:MAIN bhi aapko bhahut kiya...ap school bhi nahi aya..
DEV:SORRY princess...2D KO MAAF kardo ...
ASHI: koye baat nahi 2D ...THO AAB muje bahar leke jaona
DEV:ABHI! maa ko patha chalgaya tho
ASHI:MAMMA ko patha bhi nahi hai main yaha ayihu...aur aap hona tho aap mana logi..
DEV:NAUGHTy girl...chalo(they go for a ice cream palour and enjoy the ice cream0
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dev and ashi enjoys ice cream...and suddenly a tight catch on ashi hand...
ASHI:MAMMA!
SONAKSHI:beta aap yaha ho...mamma aapko kab se dun rahi hai...aap ghar kyun nahi gayi abhi thak...aur ee
ASHI:mamma oo main aur...
SONAKSHI:ICE CREAM...ashi kitni kehna padega tume...its not good for health...anyways bhahut dherr hogai ghar chalo...
ASHI:BYE 2D! (dev waves hand and ashi leaves)
SONAKSHI:aapko ek bath main samaj athi ya phir sonayi nahi dethi..meri bachi se dhoor rahiye
DEV:sonakshi oo meri bhi beti hai...tum mujse usse alag nahi karsakthi...
SONAKSHI:oo really...aab yaad aya...aur aapki maa tho kar sakthi hena
DEV:sonakshi tum har bar maa ko beech main kyun lathi ho...
SONAKSHI:kyun ki oo hai beech main...hamesha...oo apne bete ko kisi se bhi bat nahi sakthi
DEV:sonakshi tum hadh zyada bol rahi ho..
SONAKSHI: gussa araha hai...apne maa ki bare main esa bolatho...aur jo apne meri maa ko bola...uska kya...? ...mr.dixit meri bachi bhahut choti ...usse ee problems ke beech main math layeye plz...
DEV: (takes a deep breath)sonakshi meri bath sunoo...jab ek bache ke sath apna baap nahi hotha..uss par kya beeth thi hai ..ee mujse behter koye nahi jantha...aur main nahi chahtha ki meri bachi bhi uss halat
SONAKSHI:aapke aur uss main bhahut zyada farak hai...ashi apni family ki har member ko equally pyar karthi hai...jise mujse karthi hai...oo bhale hi choti ho par sahi galat ka arak samjthi hai
DEV:tume lagtha hai muje sahi galat ka nahi patha hai...
SONAKSHI:ofcourse...jab aapki maa ki bath athi hai tho aap sahi galat bhul jathe hai...aur bhagvan na kare agar aapki maa ko meri bachi se koye problem hogai tho aap uske sath bhi vahi karenge jo mere sath kiya...plz meri bachi se dhoor rahiye(saying this she leaves)

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