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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh tigress Sona!! Its getting Intresting..update Soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Dev has dug his own grave. His mother's act of getting the prenup signed by him cost him dearly. He does not know the clauses and became a victim of it.
What I could not understand till now is without Sonakshi's signature how is it valid ?
Please update soon as I wish to read the twists and turns the story is going to take.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Nicell story looking for more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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AT NIGHT
dev returns home and is very distracted goes to his room...
DEV TO HIMSELF:sonakshi kya kar rahi hai...usse esa kyun lagraha hai ki maa hamare beech asakthi hai..(there is knock on the door)
DEV:MAA!
ISHWARI:dev tune khana nahi kaya..aur tu bhahut dherr se aya..koya koya lagraha hai kya huva tuje
DEV:kuch nai oo bas bhuk nahi jab lagegi thab khaloaga...(she was about to leave dev call hers)maa...ek baat puchoo tujse
ISHWARI:ha beta poochona..
DEV:maa...tu sonakshi pasand karthi hona...mera matlab hai...tere aur sona beech main esa koye baat huva kya..jisse sonakshi esa lage ki tu usse apnaya nahi...
ISHWARI:dev..ek maa apne bache main bhi apne khushi doonthi hai...
DEV:maa sachi sachi bathao..tuje sonakshi pasand hena...patha nai usse esa kyun lagthi...
ISHWARI:BETA tuje achanak se sonakshi ki yaad kaise agayi..
DEV:achanak kaha..oo tho hamesha mere dil hai ..aur inn sath saaloon main ek din bhi esa nahi gaya jis din maine usse yaad na kiya ho...aur tuje tho patha hena main usse kitna pyar kartha haun(ishwari disappointed)...patha hai tere liye ek khush kabri hai...teri ek pothi hai
ISHWARI:POTHI?...kya baat kar raha hai tu..muje kuch samaj nahi araha
DEV:main samjatha huan...sonakshi aur meri beti hai...oo patha hai uski surat bilkul sonakshi ki thara hai par adathe bilkul mere jaisa hai...tuje patha hai oo kitni pyaari hai...aur uske naam tho usse bhi zyada pyari hai...ashi kitna acha naam hena maa..ski baat bhi bhahut pyari hai...aur tuje patha hai oo muje kya bulathi 2D
ISHWARI:2D ka kya matlab hai...maine tho itna acha naam rakha
DEV:maa...oo mera naam main dho dees hena isliye esa oo kehthi hai...(smiles )
ISHWARI:MERI pothi muje usse milna hai...usse dekhna hai..kab leke araha hai tu usse
DEV:FILAAL nahi maa...oo teri bahu hena...abhi bhi mujse naraz hai...mujse bath bhi nahi kar rahi hai...aur muje warn bhi kiya hai..ki main ashi ko na miloo
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
I am not able to understand this Dev.He knows that Sona is not allowing him to meet her daughter. He should try to appease her and bond with them first.
Why inform his mother and create trouble in his life again.
When will he understand the real problem?
Waiting. Please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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DEV IN SONAKSHI CABIN AND SONAKSHI COMES
SONAKSHI:aap yaha kya kar rahe hai...aap samaj nahi atha...kitni baar kehna padega aapko(dev puts his hand on lip)
DEV:RELAX kharghosh...itna chilana bunnys pe suit nahi karthi(sonakshi takes his fingure )
SONAKSHI:dev...kar rahe hai...
DEV:AH..phir se bolona ...mere kaan tharas gaye the tumhari mua se apna naam sunne keliye..(after a pause)nahi bologi tik hai...sonakshi ek baat bolne ayatha...tumse..oo prenup kisko ko lekar tum muj pe itna attitude dikarahi ho...oo thabhi valid hai jab hamare divorce hojayegi...
SONAKSHI:hamare divorce hogai hai mr.dixit..main uss papers pe sign kar chuki huan..
DEV:par maine nahi ki hai ...aur aaj subah hi usse maine fad dhi(with a cute expression) so mrs dixit aap aab bhi meri wife hai...tho aap ko mere ghar main i mean hamare ghar main rehna padega..
SONAKSHI:MAIN uss ghar main kabhi nahi rahungi...
DEV:REHNA padega sonakshi ...agar tum mujse chutkara chahthi ho...samaj main nahi aya..its ok kharghosh main samaja detha huan...ye ek agreement ..jis main likha huva ..ki agar koye couple shadi karenge and one of them iss shadi main kush nahi hai...tho unko 7 mehene keliye kaha jatha ..aur uss ke badh bhi oo kush nahi hai..tho oo divorce lesakthe hai...tho hum sign kare..
SONAKSHI:WHAT nonsense esa koye agreement nahi hotha hai...
DEV:NAHI HOTHA HAI...par tume patha hena dev dixit tumhara obbodhro kuch bhi karsaktha hai..tho maine apne lawyer se ee agreement banvaya hai..(sonakshi little tensed)kya huwa sonakshi,,darr lagraha hai..kahi enn 7 mahino main tume mann jo mereliye feelings hai oo jag jayegi..aur tum..
SONAKSHI:sonakshi bose kissi se bhi nahi darthi...aur iss agreement se tho bilkul nahi...
DEV:tho kardo sign...dekha dho sonakshi bose kitni strong hai(she hesitately signs the papers and dev feels delighted with this)ok...tho shaam ko apne luggauge aur meri princess ke sath ready rehna...ok..main tume lene ajaoga ok...bye kharghosh(he leaves the cabin leaving an angry sonakshi)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Dev dixit apna tareeka nikaal hi leta hai...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Loved the challenge.
Waiting.bplease update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
IN THE EVENING
BOSE HOUSE
sonakshi packing the bags...and baba comes
BABA:tho tum jarahi ho..beta
SONAKSHI:jana padega baba ...maine agreement pe sign ki...aur waise bhi 7 mahino ki bath hai..agar iss 7 mahino ke badh dev se...unka family se chutkara milsakthi hai tho yahi sahi...
BABA:main oo sab nahi jantha beta..bas itna jantha huan...uss admi ne tume dhoo bar hurt karchuka hai...aur main tume phir se toot the huye nahi deksaktha..beta
SONAKSHI:DONT worry baba...aapki beti itni bhi kamzoor nahi hai...oo muje phir se hurt karenge..aur...plz baba...7 mahino ki bath hai...oo insaan 7 saal se kuch nahi karpaye tho inn 7 mahino main kya karlenge...phikar math kijiye baba...(sonakshi hugs her baba)(ashi overhears the conversation)
ASHI TO HERSELF:kya 2D MERE baba hai...oo jisne ne maa ko 7 years pehle hurt kiya tha..jiske liye mamma aaj bhi roothi hai..aur oo meri mamma ko phir se hurt karna chahthe hai...mamma aap muje bhale hi kuch na kaha ho...par main aapki bathe chup chup ke sunthi thi...aur mamma main aapko roothe huye nahi deksakthi...i promise mamma...iss bar main unko aapko hurt karne nahi dunga(sonakshi calls her) ha...mamma..
SONAKSHI:BETA..aaj na hum 7 months keliye kisi aur ke ghar rahenge tho maine aapke kapde pack kardi hai...
ASHI:MAMMA...aap jhoot kyun bolrahi ho...muje patha hai...oo mr.dixit ka ghar hena..jisne aapko 7 saal pehle...
SONAKSHI:ee sab aapko kisne bathaya...esa kuch nahi hai beta...
ASHI:muje patha hai..mamma...aap kuch kehthi nahi hai..par maine aapke bathe sunli hai..mamma aapne ha kyun kahi unko...oo insaan
SONAKSHI:ashi...apne papa ke barre main esa nahi bolthe beta...oo
ASHI:OO meri kuch nahi lagthe maa...main itna patha hai ki ee vahi insaan hai...jisne meri mamma ko hurt ki hai..unki maa ki vaja se...so i hate him...
(car horns and dev comes excitedly0
SONAKSHI:deko beta...esa kuch nahi hai jo tum sooch rahi ...unke sath ache behave karogi ok..aab chalo(ashi is not ready to accept this)(both leave to dixit mansion)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Impatient to read more.
I do not know how Dev will feel when Ashi is not friendly with him.
Please update the next part too.
Hope she loves her 2D.

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