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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Ashi is a very good girl...mamma's girl..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
AT DIXIT HOUSE
everybody welcomes sonakshi ans ashi...and everybody takes their seat at the table...
ISHWARI:sonakshi ..maine tumhari saman dev ke kamre main rakwadi hai(sonakshi fake smiles)
ASHI:kyun mamma..aap mr.dixit ke room main sooge..nahi mamma aap sath hi soona plz..
DEV:ashi..its ok beta ...aap chahe tho aap bhi hamare sath soosakthe ho...koye problem nahi hogi muje..
ASHI:aapko koye problem nahi hogai par shayad aapki mom ko hogi...maine sunna hai ki aapko apni mom ki ghod main sone ki adath hai...aur ee bhi suna hai aap apni adath kabhi nahi badalthe..
SONAKSHI:ashi..ee aap kaisi bath kar raho
ASHI:kya galat kaha maine mamma...maine vahi kaha na jo sach hai...
GKB:kya bangalan tumne apni beti ko ee parvarish de hai...?
ASHI:meri maa ka naam sonakshi hai..bangalan nahi...unne esahi bolne ki adath dalijiye...vahi bath parvarish ki hai tho meri maa se zyada oo koye aur kar bhi nahi sakthe...mamma mera dinner hogai sone chale muje bhahut needh arahi hai..(sonakshi nods and follows)

AFTER A WHILE
DEV WAITING FOR SONA IN HIS ROOM AND SHE COMES
(sona is about to go and dev holds her hand tight and sona feels pain)
DEV:KYA huva sona...dard horaha hai...tho socho muje kitna dard hotha hai jab meri apni beti mere barre main esa bolthi hai tho ...sona kya tum mujse itni nafrat karne lagi ki meri beti ko mere barre itna burra bola...
SONAKSHI:MAINE esa kuch nahi kiya dev...mera hath chodiye...muje dard horaha hai...
DEV:nahi choduga ...kya karogi...(ashi comes there)
ASHI:maa ka hath chodiye mr.dixit...
DEV:ashi beta...esa kuch bhi nahi hai jo aap soch rahe hai...(ashi angryly shouts again to leave her mom hand...and takes sona with her)
IN ASHI ROOM
ASHI:maa aap kuch kehthi kyun nahi hai..oo insaan aapko hurt kar rahe the...
SONAKSHI: tume kitni barr kaha hai...oo tere baba hai...tameez se bath kar
ASHI:OO PLZ..mamma aap oo typical wife ki tara behave math karo..itna sab honeki badh bhi aap chahthi hai ki main unko rescept karo...aur yaha tho tameez ki dhukan hena...aapne dekha unki mami aapko kaisi taunt kar rahi hai...(sonakshi is about to get up)aab kaha jarahi ho..
SONAKSHI:paani lane...
ASHI:aap bato...main leke athi huan...aur ha...aaj aap mere sath hi sonenge..tik hai
SONAKSHI:ha ...tik hai meri dadi amma...(ashi goes to bring water and dev comes to her)

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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Wah Jo kam sona ne nhi kiya uski beti ne kar diya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Waiting eagerly for the next part.
Please update if it is ok with you
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Read all ur parts in a go
Loved all of them
Love how ashi is giving the dixits a tough time
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
very nice chapters...totally loved it...
Ashii is very mature here..even after seven years mami have no change..
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Very nice story plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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NEXT MORNING
ashi getting ready for school and dev comes..
DEV:tho princess school keliye ready horahe hai...arre ashi tumne shoe nahi pehne abhi thak...main help karoon..(he was about to help and ashi pushes his hand away)
ASHI:no thank mr.dixit ...meri maa ne muje apna kaam khud karna sikhaya hai...
DEV:ashi...aap mujse ese baat kyun kar rahe ho...main aapki papa huan beta...acha tho isliye naaraz ki maine aapki mamma ka hath pakda...oo maine janpooch kar nahi ki hai beta...
ASHI:ha...aap kaha koye kaam janpooch ke karthe hai..samne wale ese hi dard hojatha hai jise kal huwa tha ...hena...oo i forget..aap ko aapki maa dard ki alawa kisi aur dard nahi dikthi hena...
DEV:ee sab kisne kaha tume...ee sonakshi bina..bache se ee sab kehthe hai kya..phir kehthe hai ki apne apni bachi ko bhahut ache parvarish de hai...
ASHI:meri maa bhahut achi maa hai...aap ee sab lejiye ki aab thak main aap se tameez se bath rahi huan ee janthe hua bhi ki aap ne meri mamma ko kitne hurt karchuke ..ee sab meri maa ki vaja...patha hai..unhone ee bhi kaha hai main aapko papa bhulaoo...par sach tho ee hai ki aap oo deserve hi nahi karthe..na muje na meri mamma ko(saying she leaves and dev is hurt)
Edited by saira246 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
I love Ashi...kaash Sina bhi apni beti se kuch seekhle...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Liked it very much
Plz update soon

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