Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 75

Originally posted by: coolmeet

Such a captivating ch.

Enjoyed reading every bit of it.

Awesome update Gayu

Thanks for the pm

Update soon.

Thanku so much dii for the much needec appreciation
Will update soon
Waiting for ur update too

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Wow...maza aa gaya Gayu dii...

I enjoyed it a lot...

Especially, Dev giving Ishwari and GKB left right and center...

Pls update soon

Waiting eagerly

And when can you update next dii...bcoz from 4th of March...I won't be visiting IF...

Thanks for the pm

Thanku adi for liking it
Will try to update before ur exams date dear

Originally posted by: Jade0001

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">This chapter is really awesome just superbly fantastic </font>

<font face="Georgia" size="3">I had always wondered why Ranveer got involved was he perhaps out to ruin Dev and Sonakshi but hearing his side of the story I have to admit he is one admiral person </font>

<font face="Georgia" size="3">Dev came back two before his schedule time and finds out that Sonakshi has left to Delhi he feared if his family would cross paths with her and doing the right thing he too flies down to support his wife </font>

<font face="Georgia" size="3">I loved every bit of Dev's conversation telling his mother and Mamiji though Ishwari still blames Sonakshi Dev was in no mood to stand and witness his wife been humiliated he stood firm by her side and told his verdict too that he and Sonakshi together with Ansh are leaving to USA </font>

Thanks for commenting
I had promised some readers that i will clarify why ranveer got involved in all this
I hope i have done justice

Thanku for liking it

Originally posted by: randomramblings

Loved loved and lived ur confrontation. I was Damon enjoying imagining shaheersheik in this scene. Kaash serial mein bhi dev ishwari ki aise hi dhulayi karta. A great punishment he left for US where they need not fear any interference from anyone. The best part was his dirty look to mamaji. I hate that character seriously. He never tries to correct either ishwari or maami. He is always a silent spectator. More than the doer i hate the spectator because its these spectators who in a way support the wrong therefore the doer gets more liberty to do the wrong.

U r absolutely right when u say about maamaji being an irritating character ths days
As they say gunah karne waale se sehne waala bada gunehgar hota hai
Maamaji is just one such culprit

Yes i can bet if shaheer was given such a showdown he would have nailed it
U imagined him while reading i did while writing


Thanku for commenting dear

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

such a engrossing chapter dii

aapko meri tare se ek big hug🤗

aur bahut saari kisses

dev ne kya counter attack kayak hai aaj

im dancing

sahi sabak sikhaya sabko

kaash...kaash...kaash...

aisa serial mein bhi hota

mujhe to aapka yeh chapter sabre achcha laga ab tak ka

aur yaaay!!!!!!!!!!!!

devakshi US jaa rahe hai

ishwari se bahut bahut door

meri khushiyon ka to aaj thikaana hi nahi raha

thanks for the pm

aur haan main shaayad pages badhaane main madad na kar paun

coz my lappy is creating problems

to ill be not be coming online very frequently until next week

isiliye itna bada comment

sir aur sirf meri pyaari gayu dii ke liye

Awww sammy meri taraf se bhi tumhe dher saari kissi aur huggy

Btw yeh chappy maine tujhe dedicate kiya hai
Theek se padh

Aur haan meri kahaani ka dev sunata bhi hai aur logon ko unki asli jagah bhi dikhata hai

Isiliye to woh mera favorite character hai

Originally posted by: TwinFlames

WAOH! Awsome.. dev ne ishwari ko kya sunaya? hehe.. nice update

Thanku for commenting
Will update soonish

Originally posted by: ketaki9narkhede

Wow I loved it👍🏼

I wished that the confrontation between Dev and ishwari would had happened in the show.but it's ok the on going track is also good.

BTW thanks for the pm Gayi di

~KT@K!

Well i also wish for a confrontation
But as u sd currently track is also good going
Will update soon n pm u dear

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

amazing
loved d way dev answered ishwari back n shup her up ...
n d best part is left IN forever
plz update soon
thanls for pm

Awww thanku sona dii for ur lovely comments
Will update soon

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

awesome!

what a face-off!

hats off to dev

cont soon

thnku 4 the pm!

Thanku for liking
Will update soon

Originally posted by: M.soni

Wowowoow..maza agya yar...dev dexit ne toh bhajiyin udra di ishwari and sub...simple mindblowing..mmata ko chipakao ye and bolo aisa kuch plz mehrbani kare and show me dekhaye...dev sona soha golu ko dooirrr bhej de...

Its really awsome yar..plz wapis nahi leker ana ab US se devakshi ko..wahein rahne do...

P.s...me ne last part pe bhi comment type kiya tha...but wo post hone se phely net dc hogya and wo pani me gaya mera comment.'..sorry us ke lie...

P.s.s...bina colr font wale comment se kaam chala...q ki mobile se aisa hi colorless comment kar sakti hun main.

I wish mein yeh chappy producer ko bhej sakti
Kuch to bole yaar dev
Bas chup chap khada apni killer smile se humein ghayal karta rehta hai
Aur hum fan girls ki hawa tight ho jaati hai

Na na ab wapas nahi ayenge
Ab to wahi rahenge ...itne mushkil se nikle hai bahar aise thodi na waapas ayenge

Tera last waala comment net ki wajah se post nahi hua 😭
Humesha mere saath hi aisa kyun

But still i hope ki aap dubara apne comment kp type karke post karengi

Font colorful nahi hua to kya hua
Likhne waali to colorful hai na