Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 74

Loved loved and lived ur confrontation. I was Damon enjoying imagining shaheersheik in this scene. Kaash serial mein bhi dev ishwari ki aise hi dhulayi karta. A great punishment he left for US where they need not fear any interference from anyone. The best part was his dirty look to mamaji. I hate that character seriously. He never tries to correct either ishwari or maami. He is always a silent spectator. More than the doer i hate the spectator because its these spectators who in a way support the wrong therefore the doer gets more liberty to do the wrong.

such a engrossing chapter dii

WAOH! Awsome.. dev ne ishwari ko kya sunaya? hehe.. nice update

Wow I loved it👍🏼

amazing
loved d way dev answered ishwari back n shup her up ...
n d best part is left IN forever
plz update soon
thanls for pm

Wowowoow..maza agya yar...dev dexit ne toh bhajiyin udra di ishwari and sub...simple mindblowing..mmata ko chipakao ye and bolo aisa kuch plz mehrbani kare and show me dekhaye...dev sona soha golu ko dooirrr bhej de...

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

O god... It was sooo engrossing and captivating chap gayu di... I just loved it...

Sona left job due to ansh was such a cute thing to do... And how lovely dev was gaping at her... Haye... Devakshi r bliss indeed...

And now sona came to delhi and vik yaha pe kaan bhar dia... Well thanks vik... U only made sona come to dixit house and made d way for ish insult by none other than dev...

Loved how ranveer helped him... And really neha is a bore... Dev aya... Aya... Aya... ur ishu ko invisible chaata mara... Mara... Mara... And gayu spl touch was interwining of fingers with sona... Proved he respects her like anything... And gkb chup... Hahahaha.. I m a huge sadist when it comes to gkb and ishu...

And dev ne woh decision liya jiska mujhe tha intezaar... Ghar chodna... US chala gya... Wow... Good... And boses k saath rishta hai... Thats also good...

Aab thodi sukoon milega devakshi ko with ansh...

And now last but not the least... Will be waiting for d new update... With a new brightness and the spl gayu charisma... What say???

Chalo update soon...

Thanku so much anu
Itna like kiya aur like karke mere update pe humesha ki tarah sabse pehla comment diya

Vik to humesha se humare devakshi ke paksh mein hai
Bas use khud yeh baat pata nahi hai

Uski harkatein hi aisi hoti hai ki devakshi ki help hi kardeta hai

Ranveer sachmein accha banda tha yaar
Prob to neha ke dimaag mein thi

I hv always wished ki ek baar baa ek baar dev ishu aur rr ko chup karaye
Par show mein yeh ho na saka to maine socha ki main hi likh dun

I hv always felt ki kaash dev boses ka beta hota aur sona uss ghar ki bahu
Baat kitni alag hoti na

Agla update jaroor milega aur usmein mera waala touch bhi jaroor milega 😉

Till then tata...

Originally posted by: Sharica

Dhamaakedaar, Dhansu chapter tha yaar...maja aa gaya

🤗🤗

Kya confrontation tha...itna acha laga na..I am getting short of words...

Awesome, amazing, brilliant, excellent, fantabulous etc etc etc..

I loved the way story progressed and those twists...👍🏼

Intended disguise - loved the title and the disguise disclosure as well...kisi ne socha bhi nahi hoga aisa kuch...👏Unpredictable...

Best part- Devakshi moved out of Dixit house...Such a relief...

Aisa confrontation show mein kabhi nahi milega...

Waiting for next update...

Thanku for ur lovely comments gini jee

When u all appreciate it only pushes me to write more

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

<font color="#0000cc">Yaar Di</font>

<font color="#0000cc">I'm dying to read it</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Ghar pohach kar sabse pehla kaam is to read the chappy & comment thokna!😆😆</font>

<font color="#0000cc">Res😃</font>

<font color="#cc3366">*unres*</font>

<font color="#cc3366">This was beyond perfection!</font>

<font color="#cc3366">Wow!!! Di!👏👏</font>

<font color="#cc3366">U've nailed it completely</font>

<font color="#cc3366">This is by far one of the best chapters!⭐️</font>

<font color="#cc3366">The confrontation was damn good!👏</font>

<font color="#cc3366">It's something we would wish to see in the show as well!</font>

<font color="#cc3366">The way Dev gave back to everyone...</font>

<font color="#cc3366">No words to describe how much Proud I felt for Dev!👏</font>

<font color="#cc3366">And Ranveer is such a pure hearted soul</font>

<font color="#cc3366">The way he tried to help Devakshi ...</font>

<font color="#cc3366">Nowadays we can hardly find such gr8 human beings!</font>

<font color="#cc3366">Glad that Sona-Dev-Ansh will be far away from the negativity of ishwari niwas!</font>

<font color="#cc3366">And As Dev rightly said Ishu deserve to be living with such selfish people ...I wish to see Ishu being thrown out of the house by Vickey-Gkb and Sona helping Ishu going against Dev thus making Ishu realise her faults and regret for the same!😉</font>

<font color="#cc3366">But anyway waiting to see what u've planned for next chap!</font>

<font color="#cc3366">Update soon!😃</font>

Thanku cutie jii inne bade comment keliye

Sabsa accha chapter to yeh mere liye bhi tha writing wise kyunki aisa lag raha tha ki apne man ki saari bhadaas nikaal rahi hoon bahar

Dev ne bilkul sahi decision liya to leave that madhouse
Kyunki u can try upto a point to hold all ur relationships together but jab saamne waala sun na hi na chahe to its better to move out of this mess

Ishu ki durdasha to main bhi likhna chahungi par yeh to hoga nahi kyunki agle 2 chapters mein sirf dev aur sona pe focus hoga

Will update soon