Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 49

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

<font color="#cc33cc">Yay!!</font>

<font color="#cc33cc">Pad liya mne!</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">Bada mazaa aaya ji!😉</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">I liked it how Tina was always there by Dev's side and supported him in hiding the truth!👏</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">She indeed is gr8 human being!⭐️</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">Aur Neha toh bikl EK show ki Villain ban gayi hai!😡</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">Kitna pareshaan karti hai Dev ko!😕</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">And the way she spoke those low standar words chaitra heen and all that...I wanna stab her!😡</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">But Dev gave back to her very amazingly!👏</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">Kya jhaada usko!⭐️</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">Accha hua Dev has the track record of Mohit's frauds!👏</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">Bechara yeh sochkar ki Neha uski sister h chup raha...aur Neha...usko aisa boli!😕</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">Aur Ishu ko toh Popat ho gya!😆😆</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">Wow!!😊</font>
<font color="#cc33cc">Waiting 4 the next part!😉</font>




Alle cutie jee
Bada pyaara comment kiya apne
Accha laga na ki dev ne neha ko jhaada
Pata hai mujhe bhi bohot accha laga
Sadistic me... 😆
Isshu ka popat bhi banaya
Isi khushi mein
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sa1234B

Lovely update as always👏...Last chapter was Awesome( forgot to comment)

The best part of ur FF is Morning convo. & Romance ...loved it to the core
Curious to know how dis story unfold...plz continue soon
Thanks for pm...






Thanku for lliking it dear
Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy




Thanku so much dear ki aapne comment kiya
Its ok agar har chapter pe nahi kar sakte
Kabhi kabhi kar diya karo...I'll be happy ki aap padh rahe ho

nahi nahi mai aage ke har chapter par comment karungi
i meant ki i can't comment on the previous ones which i missed
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag


nahi nahi mai aage ke har chapter par comment karungi
i meant ki i can't comment on the previous ones which i missed





Ohhh okies
Chalo koi nahi beet gayi so baat gayi
Abse har chappy pe comment karna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy





Ohhh okies
Chalo koi nahi beet gayi so baat gayi
Abse har chappy pe comment karna

sure😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Uff this Neha...
I hate her...but am glad that Dev gave back to her...and am sorry TD for the late reply...but I was very busy with my studies...
Pls cont soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Uff this Neha...

I hate her...but am glad that Dev gave back to her...and am sorry TD for the late reply...but I was very busy with my studies...
Pls cont soon
Thanks for the pm




Adi tu aa gayi
Pata hai i was waiting n hoping ki tu comment karegi
Dekh meri wish poori hui
Btw how r ur studies going onn
Acche se padhna
Paper phaad ke aane thik hai
All the best cadet
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Posted: 8 years ago
finally main agyi teri post pe comment karne😆😆

chalo haan toh bhyi kiya howa tha last part me ...yaad karna parega actuall 4 din phely padha tha na😆😆😆itto sa dimagh hai kiya kiya yaad rakhun yar😆😆




ary haan yaad agya..dev babu ne neha k tootay udha diye thyy🤣🤣
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badi ai thi neha ki bachi dev dexit ko blackmail karne.😡neha bhootni kahein ki..shakal and akal se paidal..fraud wale papa gi ki biwi ...😡😡pata chal gaya na tujhe teri and teri faltu pati ki auqaat dev dexit k samne 2 rs ki hai😆😆 ainda mouh kholne se phely soch liya kar jahil ladki kahein dev tujhe pagal khane and pati ko jail me na chor kar aye😆

NEHA BHOOTNI 😆😆😆

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or uske bad ghar jaker dev babu ne mental mata ko bhi kaha mata bhut pakati hai bore na kar ab side pe hoja..tujhe toh kaam nahi mujhe bada kaam hai😆😆

MENTAL MATA TERE LIYE 😆




and and and now our darling TINAAA😳😳😳chaaa gayi ladki 👏👏👏dil jeet liya...😳😳i always wanted tina be like this toward dev .👏







anf now for u 😆

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chalo bhut hogya yar..bhut pakkka liya ab chalti hun😆😆jaldi update kar..me waiting..and dosri wali FF bhi update karo..kuch naughty and abodoro dev 😉😉
devakshi ka phadda karwa jahan dono 2 din tak baat na karein😆😆
dev mouh bana kar ghumaye sona ko who r u boly😆😆



chal tc..love u😳




Edited by M.soni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice update Gayu...
Sorry again late 😕
When it comes to Neha I feel terrible coz I've started Hating this name.
And she deserves this treatment from Dev Kash show mey Bhi yeh dekhne ko mile.
Will wait for the next update.
Hope u dnt mind, me being late. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read all parts in one go.

I love the idea and concept behind this FF. It is absolutely beautiful and your writing is amazing too.

I can't wait for the next update.

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