Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Fantastic Chapter

Loved Dev bursting Neha's bubble that was indeed needed to at least show her not to interfere in his matters otherwise he will destroy her husband
that was just awesome

Dev proudly claims both Sonakshi and Ansh as his and now poor Neha can't even run to her mother and gossip 😆

Tina been the person she is standing strong as a friend and PA to Dev when none of his sisters can actually stand with him

oof course they are his

these relations are not imposed on Dev forcefully but he has chosen them willfully

neha ko ab mohit ke pass laut jaana chahiye

uska idhar koi kaam nahin

thanks for commenting dear

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag
omg god main late ho gayi
abhi ke liye res gayu dii
abhi padhti hun
lekin comment baad mein karungi
much apke her chapter par jo comment karna hai
to thoda time to lagega
sorry😭😭

koi baat nahin saumya

araam se padhna

koi jaldi nahin hai

do take ur time

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: Mishti_94
chapter 10
Amazing!
I just loved the Dev Sona scenes! ❤️

Chapter 11

Yeh Tina badi mast hai!
i love her!
And Neha! Achha kiya Dev neye ussey uski sahi jagah dikha di!
Loved this one too!

Update soon Di! ❤️

thanku Mishti jee

apne humein appreciate kiya humein bohot accha laga😳😳

thanks for commenting mishh

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: binuuu
Super duper update gayu dii..
That neha😡 but whom she was blackmailing🤣

She got what she deserved👏

Dev going back..nice..

Continue soon dii...

isshu ki beti hai na use lagta hai she's sabse jyaada smart

but Dev to kisise kam nahi hai

afterall woh Ansh ka papa jo hai

Neha got her dues and so will everyone get

Thanks for commenting Binnu

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: 27JAAN
Ishwari deserves this👏
Aur neha bhi!!!
Please continue writing

thanks for commenting dear

will continue soon

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: Sharica
Hi Dear...I have not commented on last few chapters as I was busy in my sister's wedding...
I have read all the chapters that I missed and all were mind blowing...Amazing & shocking twists...😉
Ansh is an adopted child...what a twist👏..I was like

You have included infertility issue and the way Devakshi are handling it is brilliant...

So only Tina knows abt Devakshi and their secret...She is such an angel...always there to help Devakshi and save them from mad Dixits..

Neha- She is such a S**T...Apne bhai ko blackmail karne chali thi and how...Dev gave her back so strongly...enjoyed her condition a lot...

When are Devakshi getting married???
I knw there will be more twist and turns before that...waiting for next update...

congos on ur sister's wedding dear

koi baat nahin family comes first

glad ki u still took time out and commented here

really feels great

Devakshi ki shaadi jaldhi hogi

maybe in the next 2 chapters to come

will update soon

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Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#477

gayu dii

vaise to main apke her chapter par comment karna chahti thi

but time doesn't permit me

and don't want too many chapters to accumulate for later on

isiliye all i would like to say is i love this ff

the way dev handles everything in mumbai as well as delhi👏

jaise usne sona ko support kiya hai in every matter👏👏

whether be it infertility or anything else

i especially love the 9th chapter

the way he forgets her birthday

and how he makes up for it😉

aur latest chapter mein to usne neha ko kya sunaya😆😆

i just want him to rush to mumbai and crash in her arms😳

update soon

sorry 😔

har chapter ke liye comment nahi kar payi😕

Edited by Soumya21ag - 8 years ago

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Sonali Mahajan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#478

Yay!!

Pad liya mne!

Bada mazaa aaya ji!😉

I liked it how Tina was always there by Dev's side and supported him in hiding the truth!👏

She indeed is gr8 human being!⭐️

Aur Neha toh bikl EK show ki Villain ban gayi hai!😡

Kitna pareshaan karti hai Dev ko!😕

And the way she spoke those low standar words chaitra heen and all that...I wanna stab her!😡

But Dev gave back to her very amazingly!👏

Kya jhaada usko!⭐️

Accha hua Dev has the track record of Mohit's frauds!👏

Bechara yeh sochkar ki Neha uski sister h chup raha...aur Neha...usko aisa boli!😕

Aur Ishu ko toh Popat ho gya!😆😆

Wow!!😊

Waiting 4 the next part!😉

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sa1234B

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Posted: 8 years ago

#479

Lovely update as always👏...Last chapter was Awesome( forgot to comment)

The best part of ur FF is Morning convo. & Romance ...loved it to the core

Curious to know how dis story unfold...plz continue soon

Thanks for pm...

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag
gayu dii
vaise to main apke her chapter par comment karna chahti thi
but time doesn't permit me
and don't want too many chapters to accumulate for later on
isiliye all i would like to say is i love this ff
the way dev handles everything in mumbai as well as delhi👏
jaise usne sona ko support kiya hai in every matter👏👏
whether be it infertility or anything else
i especially love the 9th chapter
the way he forgets her birthday
and how he makes up for it😉
aur latest chapter mein to usne neha ko kya sunaya😆😆
i just want him to rush to mumbai and crash in her arms😳
update soon
sorry😔
har chapter ke liye comment nahi kar payi😕