Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 41

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy



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Agar pata hota ki like na karne se tujhe itna gussa chadhega ki itni detailed comment milenge mujhe to aage se tere posts pe no like
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Detailed comment to gusse k ka effect nahi late hone ka compensation tha...
I do give long comment mostly...
Aadat se majboor hun na...

Like karna ya nahi...
Aapki marzi hai...
At the end this thread is Urs n
Frnds tooo...
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Posted: 8 years ago
yar ye galte hai ab main us os pe comment karun ya yahan karun comment ..k its damn udhummm😛dil garden hogya padhe kar😉😉

ansh ka kiya turn and u turn dala hai 😆
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but but i want devakshi ka mini sa piece i mean dev ki tiny after they get married officially😛😛


baqi kiya kahun yar..maza agya padhe kar seriously...👏👏👏devakshi understanding.love for each other..they fight and tease each other every thing is 👏
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about romance and love making and seducing part..wo jo dosri OS me likha tha same to same yahan chipaka deti hn😆😆devakshi bhi toh same hain na bhyi😉😆😆

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chalo yar bhut howa ab main bhagti haun..tata bye .😆😆

Edited by M.soni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update... Read both parts together.. it had all type of feelings so liked it .. be it Sona n Dev's anger, sadness, s*x n also last emotional part.. n the entry of ansh was really dhamakedar (coz it was unimaginable)... But the idea of adoption was perfect decision.. hats off to ur thinking..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: M.soni

<font size="3">yar ye galte hai ab main us os pe comment karun ya yahan karun comment ..k its damn udhummm😛dil garden hogya padhe kar😉😉</font>


<font size="3">ansh ka kiya turn and u turn dala hai😆</font>
Image result for hats off to a job well done



<font size="3">but but i want devakshi ka mini sa piece i mean dev ki tiny after they get married officially😛😛</font>


<font size="3">baqi kiya kahun yar..maza agya padhe kar seriously...👏👏👏devakshi understanding.love for each other..they fight and tease each other every thing is👏</font>
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<font size="3">about romance and love making and seducing part..wo jo dosri OS me likha tha same to same yahan chipaka deti hn😆😆devakshi bhi toh same hain na bhyi😉😆😆</font>

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Image result for its so romantic


<font size="3">chalo yar bhut howa ab main bhagti haun..tata bye .😆😆</font>





Kya yaar soni moni
Ek toh aapke chakkar mein humne dev ko abhodro bana daala
Aur upar se aapne same same emojis chipka diya
Variety honi chahiye na
Koi baat nahi aap ke post mujhe bohot jyaada pasand hai
Matlab bohot jyaada
Fan hoon main aapki 😆 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy




Kya yaar soni moni
Ek toh aapke chakkar mein humne dev ko abhodro bana daala
Aur upar se aapne same same emojis chipka diya
Variety honi chahiye na
Koi baat nahi aap ke post mujhe bohot jyaada pasand hai
Matlab bohot jyaada
Fan hoon main aapki 😆 😆



😆abudoro yahan kahan tha ...wo toh phely hogya na 😉abudoro k lie toh me line laga dun emtion ki😳..u know na abudoro is my all time fav😳...but yar sorry jaldi me comment kiya tha is lie same same chipaka diya😆next time aram se different comment krungi😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandniyati




Detailed comment to gusse k ka effect nahi late hone ka compensation tha...
I do give long comment mostly...
Aadat se majboor hun na...

Like karna ya nahi...
Aapki marzi hai...
At the end this thread is Urs n
Frnds tooo...



Its ok dear
Accha lagta hai jab koi lambe comments deta hai
Sukoon milta hai
Thanku for commenting
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona





<font color="#339999">Arrey!!</font>
<font color="#339999">Aap inne khush ho mujhse aaj!</font>
<font color="#339999">Hayee!!</font>
<font color="#339999">Mera jiwan toh yahi safal ho gya!!😃😉</font>
<font color="#339999">Accha!!</font>
<font color="#339999">Bht zor se Dance aa raha h is par mujhe</font>
<font color="#339999">Ruko zra!😆😆</font>
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<font color="#339999">Haa!!</font>
<font color="#339999">Main na aapki gang ki latest member ban gayi hu!</font>
<font color="#339999">Swaagat nahi kroge humara!!😆😆</font>
<font color="#339999">Arrey aaj m thoda se Vella hu na...</font>
<font color="#339999">Isliye reply de diya...woh bhi 2 baar!😉😃</font>




Aapka to swagat bhi hoga aur satkaar bhi
Gm club ki nayi naveli member jo thehri aap
Mujhe na bohot accha lagta hai jab koi humare gm club ki life membership leta hai
Aur tumne do baar nahi 3 baar comment kiya hai btw
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: write2neetha

Amazing update... Read both parts together.. it had all type of feelings so liked it .. be it Sona n Dev's anger, sadness, s*x n also last emotional part.. n the entry of ansh was really dhamakedar (coz it was unimaginable)... But the idea of adoption was perfect decision.. hats off to ur thinking..




Hey dear thanks for commenting
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: M.soni




😆abudoro yahan kahan tha ...wo toh phely hogya na😉abudoro k lie toh me line laga dun emtion ki😳..u know na abudoro is my all time fav😳...but yar sorry jaldi me comment kiya tha is lie same same chipaka diya😆next time aram se different comment krungi😃😃





Arrey majaak kar rahi thi main
Waise hum bade mazakiya hai
Waise aapki aubhodro dev ki definition kuch alag hai
Thik se samjhao toh agle update mein milegi
😆
Main pata nahi kyun har baar aubhodro se shuru karti hoon aur romantic dev nikal aata hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm pleased that Sona had realized her folly in usage of words against Dev
and he well it was pay back for his love wanting her to seduce him though he knows her innocence does not really make her that bold to seduce him and it still has to be him to take the steps but its good to see that they sort their issues out
Doctor has said it would be difficult for Sona to conceive and Dev tells her everything but at the same time its like God has answered they wishes and a baby that has been born lost his parents now to get Sona and Dev as his parents I like that too

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