Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 40

Originally posted by: Erinasingh69

Awsum chap dear seriously ur last few part made me to fall for u👏

Awsum concept...

Post asap n pm me if possible from next time...

Hey dear thanku for ur lovely comments
Will surely pm u d next time

Wow!!! Part 1 was too too too hot, just read it twice 😛 the term *birthday suit* I didn't get it firstly to be very honest 😃 😃 but liked it so much !!

Part 2 was too wild in the first half. Dev was actually testing her yaar. Bichari Sona 😉
And you took it to just another level towards the end. So Ansh is adopted, how beautoful this fact is !

Thank you so much for giving such updates.
And sorrh for being late yar. My weekends only can afford reading stuff
🥱

Originally posted by: Iqqa

Wow!!! Part 1 was too too too hot, just read it twice 😛 the term *birthday suit* I didn't get it firstly to be very honest 😃 😃 but liked it so much !!

Part 2 was too wild in the first half. Dev was actually testing her yaar. Bichari Sona 😉
And you took it to just another level towards the end. So Ansh is adopted, how beautoful this fact is !

Thank you so much for giving such updates.
And sorrh for being late yar. My weekends only can afford reading stuff
🥱

Hey thanks for commenting dear
Its ok even if u r late u made it a point to comment
Thats really sweet of u
Keep commenting on my stories
It flels nice to hear from u ppl

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

<font color="#330099">Hurray!!</font>

<font color="#330099">Yupiee!!</font>

<font color="#330099">Balle-balle!!😆😆</font>

<font color="#330099">Abhi disturb mat kro zra nach lu m thoda sa...</font>

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<font color="#330099">Haa!!..</font>

<font color="#330099">Nach liya bht saara...</font>

<font color="#330099">Ab btati hu kyu naach rahi thi...</font>

<font color="#330099">Actually na...I'm really happy that I done reading it today only!</font>

<font color="#330099">Dono parts!😃</font>

<font color="#330099">Warna I was expecting it to complete till tues!</font>

<font color="#330099">Par thanx to my desperation ...</font>

<font color="#330099">Mne sab pad daala aaj m!😆😆</font>

<font color="#330099">Accha!!</font>

<font color="#330099">Abhi chap par aate hain...</font>

<font color="#330099">Yaar Gayu di!</font>

<font color="#330099">Do u know what u've done to me...</font>

<font color="#330099">Mere saaf-suthre dimag ko gutter bna diya aapne!😆😆</font>

<font color="#330099">I've not studied this much in my science books nor I watched such bold movies...jitna aapne likh kar bta diya!😳</font>

<font color="#330099">..u know what I mean right?!</font>

<font color="#330099">Itna minute detailing of anyone's s*x ...I'm reading it very 1st time...Dekho is choti si bacchi ka apne kya kar diya!!😳😆😆</font>

<font color="#330099">Now I'll talk abt the my fav part!</font>

<font color="#330099">And that was Dev admitting the truth to Sona abt her...inablity to concieve...I really liked it ..⭐️</font>

<font color="#330099">Thanx to the Doctor to it 4 his right guidance to Dev!👏</font>

<font color="#330099">And the way he consoled her...Sona badly needed him to gather herself from this shock!👏⭐️</font>

<font color="#330099">And the way he thought to adopt Ansh...</font>

<font color="#330099">And said that line..</font>

<font color="#330099">"Paida krne se zyada palna bada hota h..."</font>

<font color="#330099">Hats off tu for imagining this line!👏👏</font>

<font color="#330099">That last kiss of Dev to both Sona & Ansh...was just the perfect ending to the chap!😳😃</font>

<font color="#330099">Haa!</font>

<font color="#330099">Abhi talking abt rest of the story .</font>

<font color="#330099">Hmm..</font>

<font color="#330099">Sona kitni woh hai!😳😆</font>

<font color="#330099">The way she seduced him inorder to pacify him...</font>

<font color="#330099">Aur Dev ka teasing...not bad haa!😉</font>

<font color="#330099">Bht chalu h bnda!😉😆</font>

<font color="#330099">Accha!!</font>

<font color="#330099">Bht kuch likh diya...</font>

<font color="#330099">Now I'm going...</font>

<font color="#330099">Padai krni hai...</font>

<font color="#330099">Warna aapki story ne toh mujhe distract kar diya tha bikl. .😉😳</font>

<font color="#330099">Man hi nahi lag raha tha padai m!😉😆</font>

<font color="#330099">Accha!!</font>

<font color="#330099">Ek baat bolna bhul gyi m!</font>

<font color="#330099">Thanku 4 such a lovely update!😳</font>

<font color="#330099">Waiting 4 the next part😉</font>

<font color="#330099">😉
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Aila itna lamba comment
Mazaa aa gaya padhke
Ruk mujhe bhi nachne de [:D/] [:D/]

Haan now let me continue
To tujhe meri kahaani acchi lagi
Tera bohut bada thanku

Aur pata hai bohot darr lag raha tha jab yeh story likhi ki ansh devakshi ka asli nahi balki asopted beta hai
Laga log bolenge ki pata nahi kya likha hai
Par this is what i had felt should have happened in the show instead of the crap they showed before leap
Chodo koi nahi jo show mein nahi dikhate woh hum likh daalte hai

Aur tujhr meri kahaani science ki class se jyaada informative lagi 😳 😳
Ab main kuch nahi bolungi aage
Sharam aa rahi hai 😆

Originally posted by: Mishti_94

<font color="#990000" size="3">Chapter 9 A</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">Yeh Dev bhi naah!</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">Ladai ho gayi naah ab😕</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">But I know make up bhi mast hi hoga!😉</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">Loved the chapter Gayu di! ❤️</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">Chapter 9 B</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">Wow!</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">Yeh kya tha!</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">What a Chapter!</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">And Ansh!</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">Toh aise hui uski entry Devakshi ke life meye.</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">Wow!</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">Amazinggg! ❤️</font>

<font color="#990000" size="3">Update soon!😃</font>

Kya kare ab dev ki aadat hai ki pehle jhagda karo aur phir sona ke peeche peeche ghumo uska pupy banke
Ab ladai ki hai to manana bhi padega
Aur dev manaye aur sona ne maane aisa ho sakta hai kya bhala
Ansh to hai hi unki Khushiyon ka ansh
Use to aana hi tha
Thanku for commenting mishti

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Aila itna lamba comment
Mazaa aa gaya padhke
Ruk mujhe bhi nachne de [:D/] [:D/]

Haan now let me continue
To tujhe meri kahaani acchi lagi
Tera bohut bada thanku

Aur pata hai bohot darr lag raha tha jab yeh story likhi ki ansh devakshi ka asli nahi balki asopted beta hai
Laga log bolenge ki pata nahi kya likha hai
Par this is what i had felt should have happened in the show instead of the crap they showed before leap
Chodo koi nahi jo show mein nahi dikhate woh hum likh daalte hai

Aur tujhr meri kahaani science ki class se jyaada informative lagi 😳 😳
Ab main kuch nahi bolungi aage
Sharam aa rahi hai 😆

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

<font color="#6633ff">Aila sacchi?!</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Mazaa aaya comment par?!😲</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Arrey waah...</font>

<font color="#6633ff">M phirse dancey-dancey mood m hu!😉</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Zra ruko phirse...</font>

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<font color="#6633ff">Haa!. .</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Is baar thoda chota dance hua...</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Arrey...</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Darr?!.</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Kis baat ka darr...bhai?!</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Aap toh sherni ho ...</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Darre aapke dushman!</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Jab inna sensous update dete hue nhi dare...to ab kya darna!</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Balki ...I'm there to support u in this!</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Adoption se hi actually infertlity track ka importance lgta!</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Jab sab normal method se hi hona tha ...toh there is no difference in ur storyline...</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Bht sahi kiya aapne yeh wala aspect daal kar!👏👏</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Aur haa!</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Mujhe aapki Bio ki class mere Commerce ki studies se zyada interesting lag rahi h!😆😆😳</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Dekho aa gyi m aapke Gutter gang m!😳😆</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Sharmao mat!</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Mujhe besharm bnakar ab khud sharma rahi ho?!😆😉</font>

<font color="#6633ff">Naugty Gal!😉</font>

Kya yeh maine kya dekha!!!!!! 😲 😲
Tune mere comment par reply kiya
Lets nacho [:D/] [:D/]
Tune yeh bhi kahan ki tu bhi gm club mein graduate hona chahti hai????
Ruk phirse dance aa raha hai [:D/] [:D/]

Wah meri fighter welcome to the gm club
Jis din tujhe baaki saare cheezon se upar bio subject lagne lage samajh le ki tera jeevan safal ho gaya
Dil khusg kar diya yaar tune

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Kya yeh maine kya dekha!!!!!! 😲 😲
Tune mere comment par reply kiya
Lets nacho [:D/] [:D/]
Tune yeh bhi kahan ki tu bhi gm club mein graduate hona chahti hai????
Ruk phirse dance aa raha hai [:D/] [:D/]

Wah meri fighter welcome to the gm club
Jis din tujhe baaki saare cheezon se upar bio subject lagne lage samajh le ki tera jeevan safal ho gaya
Dil khusg kar diya yaar tune