Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 31

Relationship progress very beautifully written yaar...

Bht intezaar karwake phir jake update di.. Thank god..

It was too good...

Thank dear for the update. It was so much needed after all the leap fiasco. Tumne aur CVs, Dono ne leap liya hain par dekho u have never separated them. But hamare CVs kuch aur hi Mood main hain. Coming to Ur update, I just loved it. U have perfectly showcased sonas emotions and devs eagerness. as usual Ur passionate part was amazing. Ur update is my saviour for the weekend. Thanks.

Originally posted by: M.soni

Tere story padh kr cv ne 7 saal ka leap diya hai beta😆7 saal ki dukaan😆2 4 saal ka nahi dal sakti thi

But it was awsome awsomee...i love their understandings.their care and importance for each...loved it...they trust each other..they trust on their love ...they care for each other needs ..lobed it dear awsomeee.

And despo dev hahahaha..abodoro dev manga tha ap ne to despo dev dal diya...but but i likeddd it...loved my bold and hot devakshi...

And plz no atni jaldi ansh nahi yar plz...aik or night honseye plz like shimla night phada krwao and them abudoro romance😉

Once again very noce part dear...keep it up

Yes yes please do that !!!!! Please please please Gayu 😃 😃
And thanks for this hoy update 😛

Originally posted by: Tremors

I just have one word for u... AMAZING!!! just loved it... please update soon!!

Thanku for the lovely comment dear

Originally posted by: _RS_

Aha.. Gayu di😳😳

Thank you so much mere comeback pe aisa part likhne ke liye😉

And as always..🤗tussi to kamal ho ji

I hope hamare DevAkshi jo for the time being Dev-Sonakshi ho gaye hai, in near future cozy cozy ho jae😳

And why were you asking in the last part if you should or shouldn't write something passionate... Arre puchne waali baat hai kya ab yeh.. big YES always..

😃😃

Radhika 🤗
Tujhe bohot miss kiya maine...
Teri comeback pe meri treat to banti hai
Thanku yaara tune itna acha comment likha

Originally posted by: A.K.Aggarwal

I jst loved it yaar... sona ki hesitatin tht fear tht dev will leave again n societal pressure n her need for him was so well written ... dev too wanted her bt didnt want her to regret it
Then d so called intended disguise took place bt they took their tym to start their relationship as it was love which they wanted to experience nt lust n make each other comfy
Seriously nick of tym pe she is thinkin of protection bt phir ansh kaise aata

Thnxxx for d update

Waiting for ansh ki entry
I hope we hv sona ka dilemma n dev ki feeling n baba bose ka reaction n their journey to be parents cravings mood swings n stufff
Uodate quickie

Thanks for liking it dear 😳

Good story just read all parts

Originally posted by: M.soni

Tere story padh kr cv ne 7 saal ka leap diya hai beta😆7 saal ki dukaan😆2 4 saal ka nahi dal sakti thi

But it was awsome awsomee...i love their understandings.their care and importance for each...loved it...they trust each other..they trust on their love ...they care for each other needs ..lobed it dear awsomeee.

And despo dev hahahaha..abodoro dev manga tha ap ne to despo dev dal diya...but but i likeddd it...loved my bold and hot devakshi...

And plz no atni jaldi ansh nahi yar plz...aik or night honseye plz like shimla night phada krwao and them abudoro romance😉

Once again very noce part dear...keep it up

Arrey sab log mujhe yahi bol rahe hai ki maine cv's ko 7 saal ka idea diya 😭
Par yaar meri story mein to kahani mein to devakshi ko kitna pyaar se dikhaya hai
CVs ne to unhe alag kar diya 😡
Tere mr aubhodro ayenge jaroor ayenge soni
Aur unka kamaal ka romance bhi
tu bas wish kar main likhti jaungi 😆