OS - I NEED YOU FOR MYSELF!!! part 3 pg 22 Sept 03 - Page 19

Originally posted by: sarchanu

loved it
it was so beautifully done
please update soon

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Corner of the house... but I distinctly remember you saying you hid somewhere else to read the update... 😆

No issues. Will wait for the review. 🤗

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Yeah! That place is in the corner of my house...🤣

My mum had actually asked me that day- "Took you so long?"😆

Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi

Clapping clapping

Originally posted by: Faith28

Read the os in one go...and i must say u are BRILLIANT!! For a min i couldn't realise whether i was reading ur writeup or this was actually happening in the current track. So emotionally gripping😭 Heart wrenchingly painful yet very very well narrated. Keep writing👍🏼 Please do pm me of ur next updates😊

Originally posted by: Malvika07

So it happened. I cried. And I never cry while reading anything. The last time I cried while reading was when Dobby died in HP.

Please don't hit me but I have no clue who Dobby is or what HP is.

I cried because THIS is what I needed to happen on the show. I've repeated again and again that Dev and Sonakshi have the potential to become one of those everlasting love stories.

I've been so so disappointed with the way things have been going on the show. Dev needing alcohol to talk to his mother, not being able to have a sane conversation without its help. And most importantly, THIS realization. This introspection. The first step towards redemption. Actually having to fight for Sona. This is what I yearned for.

It's a sad state, I agree. A son should be able to talk freely with his parent. But somethings just... happen. Ishwari's love is unhealthy. Possessive. Territorial. She will need to realise what that love is doing to her son. That pahaad of a son is crumpling like dust at her feet.

Thank you. Thank you my dear Suvi for giving me this beautiful OS. But you can't leave it here. Pls pls pls u have to continue!! I only trust you to take this story forward to its rightful happily ever after. Pretty pls?

For now I am too engrossed in watching the show. My problem with continuing this is I will need to stop watching that to write this or my thoughts will overlap and I will mess up. That's the only reason I gave an option to Dev in this OS and left it at that.

I'm sorry I couldn't comment earlier. I thought it was a one shot so I figured the various email notifications must be the well deserved appreciation coming your way.

Arre... no apology required.🤗 When I didn't see your like click and / or comment, I realised you probably wouldn't have known / read.

Big love always🤗

Malvika

Originally posted by: Suvika.