OS - I NEED YOU FOR MYSELF!!! part 3 pg 22 Sept 03 - Page 16

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Posted: 8 years ago
Claps are not enough...
Sitting at the airport lounge, reading the 3 parts in 1 go, you have given me wonderful feelings on Friday night. The whole story was very very apt towards the serial...Filmy but beautiful.
I loved how you made Dev cry within himself. Even in pain, he subconciously rejected Iswari but never uttered a word. Mom is still the mom. Dev's God...wonderful.
Sona, 'I love him but he has lost my trust', this has been my thought all the while too. I have mentioned it many times, yes, Dev did not have a choice when he had to choose between his mom and Sona. However, instead of choosing, he could have fought for both relationships. I guess, in normal times, for normal people, not reel, we will take the decision Dev did and regret forever. In this case, the CVs have been very down to earth.
You my lovely friend, found the niche to pen down the story moving forward. I sincerely wish this happens in the serial. How they cement all the relationships, lets wait or maybe you could write...👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Absolutely fantastic...enjoyed reading , nice...please continue...would like to see how he wins her trust.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Brilliantly written!! Absolutely loved this!! I really wish the CVs incorporate this (with your consent, of course)!! Take a bow :)) thank you for giving this to us 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
I loved it no doubt at all but not as much as 2ND part.Because your 2nd part had set the expectations so high for me that I found this part lacking something.But still awesome update. I was checking time and again for next part.
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb prt..
luvd it..
wow...dev back 2 normal..great..
he did wht sona asked..
he did a good thing by askingg fotgivnss frm sona's parents first...
evry1 got secnd chance..
totally njoyd these 3 prts..
pls pm me nxt tym when u update..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous part!!👏👏
Enjoyed it !!!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb.. Really dev just not onluneeded to apologize to sona but also to her family..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Absolutely perfect... U R so right , this isn't ending this is just beginning...
Beautifully written . Dev really Ned this
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Posted: 8 years ago
Firstly thank you for the quick update. And i loved reading this part.
Erian thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
So beautifully written. Hope we get to see something close to this story in the serial.

You've captured everyone's emotional turmoil so realistically. Thank you dear.

Hope in future we get to read something on the second phase of their life too.

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