OS - I NEED YOU FOR MYSELF!!! part 3 pg 22 Sept 03 - Page 17

Originally posted by: LiveLife321

This is just PERFECT 👏 and you are simply MARVELOUS 🤗

Originally posted by: Lovely_KaranIka

Yet again.. very well written!! I actually don't have words to tell how much I loved reading all these parts... Only if we could have something like this in show, but CVs r going somewhere else I guess 🤔 I didn't wanted it to end this soon but every good thing has to come to an end someday... Hope to read more like this from you ❤️ Brilliant work! 👏 thank you so much for writing this beautiful story, LOVED reading it 🤗

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

oye hoye...
Loved the third part as well...
Coming back soon with the review...
Hidden myself in the corner of the house to read this...
Will be back soon... 😃

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Claps are not enough...

Sitting at the airport lounge, reading the 3 parts in 1 go, you have given me wonderful feelings on Friday night. The whole story was very very apt towards the serial...Filmy but beautiful.

Thank you so much. 🤗

Oh trust me, if not for my buddy / editor ke sangat ka asar, my updates would have been more filmy. Dono ko logic ka bhoot chada rehta hain par Divya ko kuch zyaada hi hain. She keeps me on a tight leash I tell you. 😆

I loved how you made Dev cry within himself. Even in pain, he subconciously rejected Iswari but never uttered a word. Mom is still the mom. Dev's God...wonderful.

Exactly. He is not the kind to lash out at his mom. But at that moment, that rejection I felt was needed. Harsh, I know, but he has snapped.

Sona, 'I love him but he has lost my trust', this has been my thought all the while too. I have mentioned it many times, yes, Dev did not have a choice when he had to choose between his mom and Sona. However, instead of choosing, he could have fought for both relationships. I guess, in normal times, for normal people, not reel, we will take the decision Dev did and regret forever. In this case, the CVs have been very down to earth.

I agree. CVs have kept the dramatics and OTT factors to the minimum where Dev and Sona are concerned. Hope they continue to do so.

You my lovely friend, found the niche to pen down the story moving forward. I sincerely wish this happens in the serial. How they cement all the relationships, lets wait or maybe you could write...👏👏👏

Uh... No. I have no plans to write / take this forward as of now. But let's see. Thanks again. 😃

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Absolutely fantastic...enjoyed reading , nice...please continue...would like to see how he wins her trust.

Originally posted by: fanktlk

👍🏼.

Originally posted by: LeslieKnope

Brilliantly written!! Absolutely loved this!! I really wish the CVs incorporate this (with your consent, of course)!! Take a bow :)) thank you for giving this to us 👏

Originally posted by: lourel24

I loved it no doubt at all but not as much as 2ND part.Because your 2nd part had set the expectations so high for me that I found this part lacking something.But still awesome update. I was checking time and again for next part.

Originally posted by: binuuu

superb prt..
luvd it..
wow...dev back 2 normal..great..
he did wht sona asked..
he did a good thing by askingg fotgivnss frm sona's parents first...
evry1 got secnd chance..
totally njoyd these 3 prts..
pls pm me nxt tym when u update..

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Fabulous part!!👏👏

Enjoyed it !!!😊