OS - I NEED YOU FOR MYSELF!!! part 3 pg 22 Sept 03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Divi.C
Superb.. Really dev just not onluneeded to apologize to sona but also to her family..

Yes. Him coming to her house is a good start. He never did that in the show. Guess he is directly going to barge in uninvited for the engagement. 😆

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#172

Originally posted by: libran13
Firstly thank you for the quick update. And i loved reading this part.

You are very welcome.

And thank YOU for reading it.

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Suvika.

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Originally posted by: Erian
So beautifully written. Hope we get to see something close to this story in the serial.

You've captured everyone's emotional turmoil so realistically. Thank you dear.

Hope in future we get to read something on the second phase of their life too.

Thank you. I am glad you all could connect with the characters of this OS with the ones in the show. 😊

Second phase.. no plans to write anything for now but let's see.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: adi35
incredible

Oh. Thank you. 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Thanks for penning this story.

At a time when most of us are waiting (without any expectations) for Dev and family to redeem themselves, for our beloved characters to feel and act the way we would logically expect them to, then story is like manna from heaven!!

I have always wanted to see Dev work at winning back Sona and her family's trust like a gentleman (emphasis on the word man). At the same time, many of us want to see Sona always be there for Dev but wary (after all he broke her heart and trust so callously)...

Thank you for letting us experience that and so well through your story.

Eagerly waiting for the next part. I want to see how Dev makes it all work!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Read all 3 parts in one go...I am speechless ..you should be on the creative team of KRPK.. Mindlowing work

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wat do i say lady...ur just soo good...while the stry started with the storm it beautifully reached to this atmosphere of a silent breeze, still wavering at places but still there is much hope for it to reach its destination...

Thank you so much fr writing this beautiful peace...hope to read frm u...

- Vandita :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

loved it
it was so beautifully done
please update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

This is what dev actually have to do in the show make efforts to get sona back in his life rather then saying ki sona is wrong every where...beautifully penned doen waiting for next update

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Suvika.

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Originally posted by: taara113
Wat do i say lady...ur just soo good...while the stry started with the storm it beautifully reached to this atmosphere of a silent breeze, still wavering at places but still there is much hope for it to reach its destination...
Thank you so much fr writing this beautiful peace...hope to read frm u...

- Vandita :)

Thank you Vandita. It was good to pen down my thoughts in the form of this OS. I have started to get the feeling of the show going round and round in circles without moving fwd much. at least not in the way I expected it to. So it was like a venting session for me.

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