DevAkshi OS - 'Untitled' - Page 4

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Saumya this left me choked. So beautifully written dear. You made us cry 😭 😭
How on earth did they manage to stay so calm and composed in front of each other? The silence is killing. If reading can affect us so much, cnt imagine how to handle if this happens on screen. 😭 😭

Originally posted by: dlavanya

😲 you cant leave the story like that. It is not fair. You cant do this to me.
Please continue quickly

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Saumieee!!! This is amaze. You write so so well. You remained true to the characters. I wish they show something like this on the show. You gotta continue this. I can't wait to read more from you. Plss update soon. Once again, outstanding work👏⭐️

Big love always,

Malvika

Somu... This is beautiful 🤗 😳 so you did write ;) & am so happy :) how how did I miss this?? :/
I hope they show somethin similar like this.. And I feel they will bcoz Dev can't stay away from her.
It's so hard to see them like this..So close yet so far! And the mind rules the heart :/

Plz pm me the next time you write an OS. Don't wanna miss it :)

Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi

Please continue

Originally posted by: _RS_

So beautifully you've written it Saumiee..

Originally posted by: ishra368

Loved it ❤️
Loved how you portrayed their thoughts and how one small meeting holds so many feelings and emotions
You should write more often :)

Originally posted by: sa1234B

Wow ...beautifully written 👏

loved it...too good !!

Originally posted by: sow2428

Amazing. Do continue and write more.

Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Emotional One.. Would love to read its Sequel... :)