DevAkshi OS - 'Untitled' - Page 3

Very well written ...please continue.

amazing...
beautifully penned their emotions..whole scenes were perfect..
loved the beginning very much...

Well guess its an os so its just gng to be one part. ...but a beautiful take on dev n Sona's life post their breakup
I wish u cld write another one ... a more passionate one whr they long for each other aftr breakup n spend some passionate moments with each other once they meet up

Somu !

This was sooo good and realistic ❤️

Originally posted by: independent

Wow it's amazing ❤️

Loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: Erian

👏

So beautifully you've captured the pain that I cried while reading this one. Thanks for writing this. Keep writing about DevAkshi pls.

A big hug 🤗

Originally posted by: gmgi

I am feeling so overwhelmed. I don't know what to say. It just touched somewhere deep n I can't help but feel their emotions as my own. Saumya it is so beautiful. If you can continue this one please do. Dev might have succeeded in keeping his tears from flowing but I was not. Loved it👏

Originally posted by: JazzyM

You made me cry and smile at the same time. You gave Sona strength. You made her flourish. Thank you

Originally posted by: AfiChanAC_CA

Lovely 👏