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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bookworm123

Well written. Please continue this.

Thanks a lot😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Saumya this left me choked. So beautifully written dear. You made us cry 😭 😭
How on earth did they manage to stay so calm and composed in front of each other? The silence is killing. If reading can affect us so much, cnt imagine how to handle if this happens on screen. 😭 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
😲 you cant leave the story like that. It is not fair. You cant do this to me.
Please continue quickly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Saumieee!!! This is amaze. You write so so well. You remained true to the characters. I wish they show something like this on the show. You gotta continue this. I can't wait to read more from you. Plss update soon. Once again, outstanding work👏⭐️
Big love always,
Malvika
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
So beautifully you've written it Saumiee..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Loved it ❤️
Loved how you portrayed their thoughts and how one small meeting holds so many feelings and emotions
You should write more often :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Wow ...beautifully written 👏
loved it...too good !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Amazing. Do continue and write more.
Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Emotional One.. Would love to read its Sequel... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
You are an amazing writer. I literally had tears in my eyes. Please keep writing.

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