DevAkshi OS - 'Untitled'

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: gigi16
You are an amazing writer. I literally had tears in my eyes. Please keep writing.

Thank you so much😳 You know, I am very new to writing. . Just motivated by a chain of thoughts. . And appreciation like these. . Encourages me a lot😳😊

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saumiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: binuuu
amazing...
beautifully penned their emotions..whole scenes were perfect..
loved the beginning very much...

So happy you liked the start😊 Thank you so much😳

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saumiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
It was beautiful!!

Thanks dear😊

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saumiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: LiveLoveLaugh96
This was sooo good and realistic ❤️
I could totally imagine this scene in my head while reading!!

Loved it! 👏👏

Thank you so much dear😳 So glad you liked it.❤️

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saumiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sinalfan1
Well guess its an os so its just gng to be one part. ...but a beautiful take on dev n Sona's life post their breakup
I wish u cld write another one ... a more passionate one whr they long for each other aftr breakup n spend some passionate moments with each other once they meet up

Thank you so much😳

Well, yes you are right! This was supposed to be this much only. . But since everyone requested on continuing this. . I will post one more part to this. . And lets see if I can include your request in the same part. . Otherwise I will try to write another one on the same lines.😊

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saumiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...
Somu !
I was just moved by this story !

*hugs*

Lasya🤗

How have you been dear?😳

Thank you sooo soo much😳😊

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saumiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Buzzinnn...
Somu... This is beautiful 🤗 😳 so you did write ;) & am so happy :) how how did I miss this?? :/
I hope they show somethin similar like this.. And I feel they will bcoz Dev can't stay away from her.
It's so hard to see them like this..So close yet so far! And the mind rules the heart :/

Plz pm me the next time you write an OS. Don't wanna miss it :)

Aksh!! Yippeee You finally read this🤗

I was waiting for your comment😆 Was actually inspired to write after talking to you only that day😳😆

Yes, And we already saw how Dev is just so transfixed when he sees Sona in the office.😭

Oh! Sure will do it next time😊😳