Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 57

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Malvika07


Would love to know your thoughts! You're right. As far as I've experienced, once you start dramatising stuff it's really difficult to stop. I found that out while writing this story as well. But I controlled myself and tried to keep it as real as possible. Maybe the writers want to get ahead in the TRP race. Some issues I just don't seem to understand. Dev and Sonakshi's chemistry is so popular, people keep begging for intimacy. That would get them the TRP they're after. But they refuse to show that. The proposal was such an anti climax, they hugged for precisely one second. The lack of intimacy has started affecting the story line now.
Anyway, I will hold my horses before I break into a full blown rant.
Hope you connect with the episodes enough to make a post. I'll be waiting🤗



Guess they want to try and connect with the sanskari ladies in the audience. After all steady TRPs come from the women audience sitting at home & watching the kitchen drama. Maybe this is why the story took such a dramatic turn and further tracks seem more in line with what women like Ishwari & RR seem to be concerned about. They completely ignored the leads who have a story of their own to live but guess in India, it needs to be all about family!

What they started with and where they seem to be headed - talk about confused positioning!
One second hug ha! Oh dear! These are siblings or a couple in love! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ARCH21



Guess they want to try and connect with the sanskari ladies in the audience. After all steady TRPs come from the women audience sitting at home & watching the kitchen drama. Maybe this is why the story took such a dramatic turn and further tracks seem more in line with what women like Ishwari & RR seem to be concerned about. They completely ignored the leads who have a story of their own to live but guess in India, it needs to be all about family!

What they started with and where they seem to be headed - talk about confused positioning!
One second hug ha! Oh dear! These are siblings or a couple in love! 😃

Hahahhaa that's a question I keep asking myself a lot these days! Only Shaheer and Erica's chemistry gives me the satisfaction that they're not siblings!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Malvika..sorry for the late reply...just read this. I am not frequent to the forum nowadays.
The epilogue was amazing dear. Loved how you described the tension before the delivery.
Loved these lines so much.
Her first shriek rang louder than the grumbling of the sky, and for the first time all day Dev was able to relax. They may not have gotten the calm, but she was their perfect storm, and he wouldn't have it any other way.

How have you been? Please do write more on DevAkshi😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Malvika..sorry for the late reply...just read this. I am not frequent to the forum nowadays.

The epilogue was amazing dear. Loved how you described the tension before the delivery.
Loved these lines so much.
Her first shriek rang louder than the grumbling of the sky, and for the first time all day Dev was able to relax. They may not have gotten the calm, but she was their perfect storm, and he wouldn't have it any other way.

How have you been? Please do write more on DevAkshi😳

Hey Rasika, I've missed you🤗 I haven't been that active on the forum either. Hence, replying late.
I'm very happy to know you liked the epilogue!
I miss our discussions on the forum. But the show hasn't been giving me the same feeling lately. So stayed away.
Will try my best to write something soon😊
Thank you so much for always supporting me!
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Posted: 8 years ago
I just read all the chapters in one go and let me tell you that this is one amazing story . Everything just felt so real . You write really well . And I just loved the things that you choose from Grey's Anatomy (That show is just about perfect ) . I'll send you a buddy request ...so please from now on pm me when you write anything new on DevSona.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Hey Rasika, I've missed you🤗 I haven't been that active on the forum either. Hence, replying late.
I'm very happy to know you liked the epilogue!
I miss our discussions on the forum. But the show hasn't been giving me the same feeling lately. So stayed away.
Will try my best to write something soon😊
Thank you so much for always supporting me!


I missed you and our discussions too..🤗please do write more and its always our pleasure to read your stories😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow lovely:) so well written !!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tinkerred10

I just read all the chapters in one go and let me tell you that this is one amazing story . Everything just felt so real . You write really well . And I just loved the things that you choose from Grey's Anatomy (That show is just about perfect ) . I'll send you a buddy request ...so please from now on pm me when you write anything new on DevSona.

Oh wow. All chapters in one go!! Thank you so much for your lovely review😊 Glad you liked the story. Grey's is one of my all time fav show and I somehow felt that the Mer -Der post it wedding and other references were perfect for Dev Sona as well. Good to see you liked that aspect.

Sure, I'll PM you if I write anything new😊
Thanks again!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rasika_DS


I missed you and our discussions too..🤗please do write more and its always our pleasure to read your stories😳

Thank you so much for always supporting dear😃😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: neelima_menon

Wow lovely:) so well written !!

Thank you so much😊 Glad you liked it!

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