Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 55

Originally posted by: taara113

A big warm hug to you...

And thank you so much for giving the story a beautiful end and devakshi a beautiful start...

You took us from their bedroom to the kitchenthrough the car and into the lobby... entering the elevator and from there to the room... all through out i was there with them... living the moment with them...you amazingly engross the reader into the story and make them experience it so closely...

What a beautiful balance they are in good times and bad...and its been a constant throughout the story... wherever one of them fell short of expectations or beacame weak, the other became stronger and took the lead and so it was today...

Thank you so much Malvika for writing this amazing piece...I really hope something somewhere inspires you soon...

-Vandita :)

Originally posted by: Malvika07

You're here 🤗

After the way our show crumbled right before our eyes, it was very difficult to write a happy chapter on them.

You don't say!

And I delayed it long enough, praying for a more relatable Dev/Sona. But they never came through and I finally completed this one.

I found myself coming up with less than pleasant scenarios for Dev but then I controlled myself , and remembered why I write in the first place - to make them do everything the makers refuse to show us.

Thank you for that! We have your story to fall back on if we want to visualize a mature progression. It certainly does not look like our show will give us that.

Thank you soo very much for your constant support throughout and your very lovely words

🤗

Love ya!

My pleasure!🤗. My only gripe with you however is that you did not insert a much needed haircut scene in your story. We could have done without the love making scene, hair cut scene is more important!!!

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Nicely written. ...do write another story soon dear...

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Epilogue was awesome

Wow reading about the fear the pain a woman goes through just to bring a life into this world , I'm sure at that point it has to a life death situation yes I've seen many guys been anxious sitting either in the waiting rooms or standing right outside the delivery room but actually reading about the painful contractions makes me respect women even more .

Both Dev and Sonakshi having this deep fear that they should not lose another baby and finally when the baby is born all the pain all the fear all the anxiety just vanishes

This was truly a beautiful story

Originally posted by: bookworm123

Originally posted by: ssimmy

So beautiful, why must it end 😭 Your writing provides us with the light romance and maturity the show so desperately needs right now. Looking forward to your future pieces!

Originally posted by: Jo2345

Though silent reader joined this forum to appreciate few of my favourite writers in this forum...your are one among them...love this ff and your writing...keep do writing...