Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: masooma98
Once again, beautifully written!!
Thanks so much for writing the epilogue, loved the build up of anxiety and finally the delivery!
Looking forward to reading more of your works!! :)

Thank you so much dear😃 Sorry for the delay! I'm glad to know you liked it :)

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: princesspipi
OMG that was brilliantly written.. May i ask you something... Are you a doctor?? Are you a mother??? How can you write so realistically???? All that anxiety fear during the contractions period... The doctors and the nurses reacting and reporting...dev and Sonakshi reacting...You have written so amazingly... When i was reading it felt so real..i could feel everything even though i have never experienced any such thing... You are one amazing writer...

I'm neither, actually :) But I do love medical dramas a lot, so I usually get the medical terms from there. Thank you so much for your kind words😊 I'm truly happy to know you liked it!!😃

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bookworm123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#533

Malvika 🤗,

Thank you for posting an update in which we get to see Dev loving his Sona like a man (as he had promised her)..

What I liked was that Sona was trying to be her usual calm and composed self but she could not be superwoman. It was very nice to see Dev taking care of her and giving her strength, as her man and true partner should. We have not had an opportunity to see that on the show so it was very heartwarming to see him coming through for her, for them.

Once again, in addition to their interactions the setting was captured very well. I like your attention to detail, along with the prose and vivid descriptions of their emotions. I almost felt as if I was right there with them in the room as they were getting ready to have their baby. It truly feels as if I am reading a chapter from a professionally published novel and not an amateur OS/FF.

A fitting end (?) to a lovely series.

I think you also need to pat yourself on the back for coming up with a creative effort on this duo under such trying circumstances!

Edited by bookworm123 - 8 years ago

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: bookworm123
Malvika 🤗,
Thank you for posting an update in which we get to see Dev loving his Sona like a man (as he had promised her)..

What I liked was that Sona was trying to be her usual calm and composed self but she could not be superwoman. It was very nice to see Dev taking care of her and giving her strength, as her man and true partner should. We have not had an opportunity to see that on the show so it was very heartwarming to see him coming through for her, for them.

Once again, in addition to their interactions the setting was captured very well. I like your attention to detail, along with the prose and vivid descriptions of their emotions. I almost felt as if I was right there with them in the room as they were getting ready to have their baby. It truly feels as if I am reading a chapter from a professionally published novel and not an amateur OS/FF.

A fitting end (?) to a lovely series.

I think you also need to pat yourself on the back for coming up with a creative effort on this duo under such trying circumstances!

You're here 🤗

After the way our show crumbled right before our eyes, it was very difficult to write a happy chapter on them. And I delayed it long enough, praying for a more relatable Dev/Sona. But they never came through and I finally completed this one. I found myself coming up with less than pleasant scenarios for Dev but then I controlled myself , and remembered why I write in the first place - to make them do everything the makers refuse to show us.

Thank you soo very much for your constant support throughout and your very lovely words 🤗

Love ya!

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#535

Oh wow !! absolutely wonderful !! Thank you for such a beautiful write up !!👏⭐️

Please do keep writing OS/FF etc Malvika ...would love to read more posts from you ...eagerly waiting for your next work...

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Curlyhairdiary

@Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 8 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Oh wow !! absolutely wonderful !! Thank you for such a beautiful write up !!👏⭐️

Please do keep writing OS/FF etc Malvika ...would love to read more posts from you ...eagerly waiting for your next work...

Thank you so much dear for your lovely reply😃🤗

Will definitely try to pen something down soon😊

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Kamal kulshreshta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#537

Awesome, beautiful epilogue
very realistic ,must say.
Looking forward to read more .

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taara113

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Posted: 8 years ago

#538

A big warm hug to you...

And thank you so much for giving the story a beautiful end and devakshi a beautiful start...

You took us from their bedroom to the kitchenthrough the car and into the lobby... entering the elevator and from there to the room... all through out i was there with them... living the moment with them...you amazingly engross the reader into the story and make them experience it so closely...

What a beautiful balance they are in good times and bad...and its been a constant throughout the story... wherever one of them fell short of expectations or beacame weak, the other became stronger and took the lead and so it was today...

Thank you so much Malvika for writing this amazing piece...I really hope something somewhere inspires you soon...

-Vandita :)

Edited by taara113 - 8 years ago