Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 20

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ARCH21 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
I love second chances but more than that, I love open honesty ...
Everyone is trying to give each other a much deserved second chance but with love as the base & no guilt or other motive driving it.
There seems to be guilt but also a knowledge that they faced, bared and fared well in the storm that has passed...
The new situation is a breather for all... for now I guess 😊

I like this Ishwari. Dev was never good at reading emotions but always good at expressing... Sona may not remember but she's the same person, still in love...

Needless to repeat, you write well but these could actually be episodes in the show and they would bring a smile to the viewers, as was originally promised! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the update
It was soo cute and romantic
The way they finally slept peacefully
Can't wait to read the next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing...Its my secret wish to see this scene in the show.😊
They engaged in small talk while having breakfast and then Dev turned to leave for office. Sonakshi was still sitting when he rose and gave her a small kiss on her forehead and told her to have a good day. Before she could register what happened, he was gone. The casualness in his gesture, born out of sheer habit of kissing her goodbye everyday before he left sent a warm feeling though her body and she found herself smiling involuntarily.
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Posted: 8 years ago
This is so beautiful. They are all walking on egg shells. Her memory loss have given them all a second chance to correct a wrong that happened before. Love was never their problem. It was a constant in their lives. I would love if this is how they showed in the show. You can't find fault with anyone because you can understand where they are coming from. I don't mind waiting for your updates because it is so worth the wait. Thank you. This was what I fell in love with when they started the show.
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Posted: 8 years ago
❤️
Thank you for writing this one, Malvika! Your ff is the much needed respite from the disappointments going on in the show😃
Aww, Ishwari is a good person at heart here. . And I loved how Sonakshi cleary communicated to both Dev and Ishwari that she remembered something.
Ishwari and Dev's reactions were so natural and in character, yet again. I wish this is how the show went ahead too, much needed conflicts are shown in your piece without even deviating a bit from the characters😳 Every chapter has a link with the previous and the next😃
Loved it👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohh
Thanks for providing us with this.. something romantic between DevAkshi was much needed.
Superb..🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ARCH21

I love second chances but more than that, I love open honesty ...
Everyone is trying to give each other a much deserved second chance but with love as the base & no guilt or other motive driving it.
There seems to be guilt but also a knowledge that they faced, bared and fared well in the storm that has passed...
The new situation is a breather for all... for now I guess 😊

I like this Ishwari. Dev was never good at reading emotions but always good at expressing... Sona may not remember but she's the same person, still in love...

Needless to repeat, you write well but these could actually be episodes in the show and they would bring a smile to the viewers, as was originally promised! 😊

Your analysis is more beautiful than the chapter itself!😃
You've captured the nerve of what I intended to potray with this one. Thank you so much!
I'm trying to not deviate too much from the show and at the same time adding some elements that I would've loved to watch😊 Its nice to know I'm not the only one who wants to see this!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: BunnyObodhro368

Loved the update
It was soo cute and romantic
The way they finally slept peacefully
Can't wait to read the next

Thank u so much dear😃 Glad you liked it !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you dear😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveLife321

Amazing...Its my secret wish to see this scene in the show.😊

They engaged in small talk while having breakfast and then Dev turned to leave for office. Sonakshi was still sitting when he rose and gave her a small kiss on her forehead and told her to have a good day. Before she could register what happened, he was gone. The casualness in his gesture, born out of sheer habit of kissing her goodbye everyday before he left sent a warm feeling though her body and she found herself smiling involuntarily.

Thank u soo much dear😃
It's my wish to see this one on the show as well😊 I got the idea from the forehead kiss of the 100th episode😉

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