Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Malvika07


Your analysis is more beautiful than the chapter itself!😃
You've captured the nerve of what I intended to potray with this one. Thank you so much!
I'm trying to not deviate too much from the show and at the same time adding some elements that I would've loved to watch😊Its nice to know I'm not the only one who wants to see this!



You are the writer... Am just the critic 😊

Before the memory loss, Dev-Sona were very much together & in love so guess this situation has given Dev-Ishwari to try n wipe the slate clean & write the new journey with love...

Love was never an issue between Dev-Sona and Sona-Ishwari had a bond... I like it that she can't help but focus on the love even if the one single piece of memory is unpleasant...
Honesty is the best policy & Communication always a solution to messy situations...

Oh! But if all is said & done, how will the makers create the drama they are so passionate about 😃
We signed up for this not the hilarious route they want to take now...



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Divi.C

Its really superb.. Sometimes it's needed to forget to move on..

Thank you so much dear😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: masooma98

Wow yar... that was beautiful once again!

Loved the ending, very very well expressed.
Keep writing!

Thank you so much dear😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice story dear
Loved it

Thank you so much dear😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ssimmy

Girl, that was AMAZING!!! You literally made my day with this update. ❤️

And you made mine with your sweet comment😉 thank you so much😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ARCH21



You are the writer... Am just the critic 😊

Before the memory loss, Dev-Sona were very much together & in love so guess this situation has given Dev-Ishwari to try n wipe the slate clean & write the new journey with love...

Love was never an issue between Dev-Sona and Sona-Ishwari had a bond... I like it that she can't help but focus on the love even if the one single piece of memory is unpleasant...
Honesty is the best policy & Communication always a solution to messy situations...

Oh! But if all is said & done, how will the makers create the drama they are so passionate about 😃
We signed up for this not the hilarious route they want to take now...



Thank you!! Hahaa.. so true! The makers are hell bent on creating more and more drama these days.. as you very correctly put it, they've started taking a hilarious route now.. specially with Ishwari's character.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautifully written update...Sona doesn't remember anything but still is trying hard to do so. Liked how she told everything she remembered to Dev n Ishwari...They are getting attracted to each other naturally...loved their little romantic banter...please do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read all the parts in one go... beautifully written...pls do continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
A second chance to make memories. I liked the kiss portion a lot...it was all new to her and in a way for him too as he gets to make new memories without rancor ...
It was great seeing Ishwari so understanding...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sinalfan1

Beautifully written update...Sona doesn't remember anything but still is trying hard to do so. Liked how she told everything she remembered to Dev n Ishwari...They are getting attracted to each other naturally...loved their little romantic banter...please do update soon

Thank you so much dear😃 Glad you're liking the story!

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