Devakshi FF:The Memory of Us Epilogue Updated on Pg 70 - Page 21

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: gmgi

This is so beautiful. They are all walking on egg shells. Her memory loss have given them all a second chance to correct a wrong that happened before. Love was never their problem. It was a constant in their lives. I would love if this is how they showed in the show. You can't find fault with anyone because you can understand where they are coming from. I don't mind waiting for your updates because it is so worth the wait. Thank you. This was what I fell in love with when they started the show.

Awww thank you so much dear for your kind words. Love was never their problem - so true! All of them love fiercely. Only their means of expression varies. Thank you for your patience regarding the updates. I try my best to do it as fast as I can. The next one will also take 1-2 days since I haven't even started writing it yet. But I'll try to put it up soon! Thank you once again😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: saumiee

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Thank you for writing this one, Malvika! Your ff is the much needed respite from the disappointments going on in the show😃
Aww, Ishwari is a good person at heart here. . And I loved how Sonakshi cleary communicated to both Dev and Ishwari that she remembered something.
Ishwari and Dev's reactions were so natural and in character, yet again. I wish this is how the show went ahead too, much needed conflicts are shown in your piece without even deviating a bit from the characters😳 Every chapter has a link with the previous and the next😃
Loved it👏

You're on time for this one, saumiee😆😆 *HUGS* Thank you so much for your analysis dear. The promos promised us that Ishwari is a good person at heart, her behaviour recently indicates otherwise. I chose to stay with her character that was promised in the promo.
After all we've been subjected to with the current spoilers, I thought it's high time we had a kiss, if not on the show then here atleast😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _RS_

Ohh

Thanks for providing us with this.. something romantic between DevAkshi was much needed.
Superb..🤗

Thank you so much dear😃 Big hug to you!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Your chapter reminded me of a quote that I'd read quite some time back.

Your memory is a monster; you forget - it doesn't. It simply files things away. It keeps things for you, or hides things from you - and summons them to your recall with will of its own. You think you have a memory; but it has you! - John Irving.

She doesn't remember but desperately wants to. He remembers and fears her remembering. And before her memory returns like a monster lurking in the shadows, Dev and Ishwari are trying to build a strong present. Something that would be able to withstand, fight and win over the monster.

Lovely. 👏

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Posted: 8 years ago
Malvika a big hug to you for giving this today🤗 Was so disturbed today with all the confusions going on.
Loved how everyone was honest and frank with each other including Ishwari. This memory loss has surely given Ishwari a chance to correct her mistakes. Sonakshi is so innocent. She was thanking him for letting her stay in their room😆

Loved that she directly told Dev and Ishwari about the memory without any qualms. Sonakshi just has one memory and she gave a chance to their relationship with this one memory. She does not remembers everything but she surely can feel the love and the warmth in their relationship. It is so overwhelming.😳

And the cute sweet romance.. And they slept peacefully first time after the accident 😳




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Your chapter reminded me of a quote that I'd read quite some time back.

Your memory is a monster; you forget - it doesn't. It simply files things away. It keeps things for you, or hides things from you - and summons them to your recall with will of its own. You think you have a memory; but it has you! - John Irving.

She doesn't remember but desperately wants to. He remembers and fears her remembering. And before her memory returns like a monster lurking in the shadows, Dev and Ishwari are trying to build a strong present. Something that would be able to withstand, fight and win over the monster.

Lovely. 👏

The quote is soo good Suvika! Absolutely loved it! And it's so apt for this story. You're right. Dev doesn't want her to remember. He wants to forget. But alas, he doesn't have this liberty.
Thank u soo much for taking the time out to read and review😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

Malvika a big hug to you for giving this today🤗 Was so disturbed today with all the confusions going on.

Loved how everyone was honest and frank with each other including Ishwari. This memory loss has surely given Ishwari a chance to correct her mistakes. Sonakshi is so innocent. She was thanking him for letting her stay in their room😆

Loved that she directly told Dev and Ishwari about the memory without any qualms. Sonakshi just has one memory and she gave a chance to their relationship with this one memory. She does not remembers everything but she surely can feel the love and the warmth in their relationship. It is so overwhelming.😳

And the cute sweet romance.. And they slept peacefully first time after the accident 😳




Thank u soo much rasika😃 Big hug to you too!! I know, even I was so depressed with the current spoilers I thought we should all have some respite! You pointed out a very good thing. Sonakshi has just one memory, not even a particularly happy one but she decided to give her relationship a chance based on that.
I'm glad you like this update. Thanks again for your continued support😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its really superb.. Sometimes it's needed to forget to move on..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow yar... that was beautiful once again!
Loved the ending, very very well expressed.
Keep writing!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Girl, that was AMAZING!!! You literally made my day with this update. ❤️

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