DevAkshi OS~Tujhpe hi marke tho,mujhe jeena aaya hai - Page 3

Originally posted by: gudiyanrani143

Love...Love...Loved it!!! I absolutely love your writing. The way you portray each and every character, it's like I'm reading updates of a serial and not some fan fiction.

Ishwari and Sona were mind blowing! Hope serial mein bhi aisa ho jaye :D

Nikki is such a sweetheart ^_^

No Devakshi scene :'( But it's okay. Lol. A little bit of family time.

Thanks so much for the PM babe. Will wait for the next update. :D

Something new maybe. :)

All the best and keep writing.

Love

- M

Ughh..I'm so late...thanks for the pm warna i would've missed this awesome OS... 😕

Hey Akshara..beautifully written..I have read the previous OS too..in love with the parts you write at the end in red..
Scars can be healed..death cannot be reversed..brilliant one..

How Sona said I'm there only in ur hearts..very touching one..

p.s. thank u for using tere sang yaara on DevAkshi..I just love this song on them..:)

Originally posted by: gudiyanrani143

Oh and I forgot...TYSM for the dedication love. :D

Xx

D'Awww dear - thank you so much !!! It was my pleasure !!😳😆

Originally posted by: Littlestar108

Such a beautiful OS...

Loved Loved and Loved it!! ❤️

You are such a beautiful writer! Love your writing!!!

Awww thank you so much Monal - This means a lot to me !!😳😆

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

F A N T A S T I C! Beautiul! I loved it SO much!

And the message at the end was so thoughtful! Thank you for that! :)

Awww thank you so much dear!! So happy you liked it and found it to be thoughtful - I always share tidbits of messages and POvs at the end - so glad you liked it !🤗❤️

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Too good !! Loved it , once again you have written wonderfully :-))⭐️👏

Awww thank you so much dear !! Glad you liked it!😆

Ammu🤗

Originally posted by: Anu_LoveRain

Wow!! I wasnt expecting a continuation 😳

Ammu chechi, you always surprises me 🤗 *bada wala hug*

As usual, the update was outstanding!!❤️

I loved the first part like anything and this part is no less

Thought this part wasnt romantic at all, I wasnt even a bit bored! Actually I get bored reading EVERY story without romance/humour, but this one created magic👍🏼

Emotions portrayed brilliantly 👏

I haven't said this before, now confessing it with complete honesty.

You are my true inspiration chechi 🤗

I not only enjoy, laugh, cry reading your stories .. but also learn a lot of things!

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for being my best sis EVER ❤️

I just adored the last part like anything .. how do you manage to be so thoughtful always?!

All that you have written in brown colour, they are too much heart touching.. I mean like, dil ko Chu jaati hai ❤️

Your proud lil sis can't stop praising you

Don't mind kay?

Waise I have haq to praise you .. like dev says 'pyaar haq de deti hai chechi, and mujhe tumpar poora haq hai kyunki mein tumse Pyar karti hu' - I know iam crazy🤪

I LOVE YOU kay?! ❤️

Take care byebye

D'Awww Aur mein thak jaati hoon tumhare comments ko dekthe haste !!
I love yoou so much - will that suffice.
And I'm glad I found you!!
Thank YOU.🤗
I am so happy I could bring a smile onto your face!😆😳