DevAkshi OS~Tujhpe hi marke tho,mujhe jeena aaya hai - Page 4

amazing os. loved it.
so beautifully written.

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

As Sigmund Freud has stated:Unexpressed feelings are like volcanoes.They come out in uglier forms.Similarly vent words are better than harbouring grudges;keeping a myriad shades of vexation inside.Loved how beautifully the volcanoes were dealt with.The conversation between each character struck right to the chord of heart.The reunion between Ishwari and Sona was the highlight of the story.Nice setting and heart warming conversation.The analogy is again an outstanding example of what Wordsworth says-There would have been no science if literature did not exist and vice versa.Each dependent upon other for creative Input. 😊 Thanks for the pm. Keep Writing and Keep Smiling..

WOW - just wow - your words are as beautifu, serene and expressive as you are maa. I absolutely loved this - made my day !! Thank you so much!!!😳🤗❤️

Originally posted by: adi35

Amazing yaar
👏

Thank you so much yaar !!!😳

Again read it...
Superb OS Akshara... Amazing
Do write more dear..,

Originally posted by: kashishbano

WOW.Beautiful, beautiful and simply beautiful OS 👏
Dear AKSHARA , such an amazing writer you are.
Love the OS to the core ❤️ .
You have just nailed it dear.
The Ishwari's confession to Dev about her insecurity after her daughters went was just brilliant. The dialogues were just awesome.
The situations you described were bang on. BECAME YOUR FAN.
A big hug and lots of love to you AKSHARA. 🤗 .
Thanks for the PM.

D'Awww thank you so so much dear - your comments always make me smile!!
They made my day!! And you ARE my inspiration😉
Love you!!😳

Reserved!!

Originally posted by: vssdp

Beautiful and amazing os

Totally loved it

Thanks for the pm dear

Awww thank you so much dear !!😳