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Anu

@Adi_Ki_Zoya

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wow!! I wasnt expecting a continuation 😳

Ammu chechi, you always surprises me 🤗 *bada wala hug*

As usual, the update was outstanding!!❤️

I loved the first part like anything and this part is no less

Thought this part wasnt romantic at all, I wasnt even a bit bored! Actually I get bored reading EVERY story without romance/humour, but this one created magic👍🏼

Emotions portrayed brilliantly 👏

I haven't said this before, now confessing it with complete honesty.

You are my true inspiration chechi 🤗

I not only enjoy, laugh, cry reading your stories .. but also learn a lot of things!

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for being my best sis EVER ❤️

I just adored the last part like anything .. how do you manage to be so thoughtful always?!

All that you have written in brown colour, they are too much heart touching.. I mean like, dil ko Chu jaati hai ❤️

Your proud lil sis can't stop praising you

Don't mind kay?

Waise I have haq to praise you .. like dev says 'pyaar haq de deti hai chechi, and mujhe tumpar poora haq hai kyunki mein tumse Pyar karti hu' - I know iam crazy🤪

I LOVE YOU kay?! ❤️

Take care byebye

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

As Sigmund Freud has stated:Unexpressed feelings are like volcanoes.They come out in uglier forms.Similarly vent words are better than harbouring grudges;keeping a myriad shades of vexation inside.Loved how beautifully the volcanoes were dealt with.The conversation between each character struck right to the chord of heart.The reunion between Ishwari and Sona was the highlight of the story.Nice setting and heart warming conversation.The analogy is again an outstanding example of what Wordsworth says-There would have been no science if literature did not exist and vice versa.Each dependent upon other for creative Input. 😊 Thanks for the pm. Keep Writing and Keep Smiling..

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kashishbano

@kashishbano

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

WOW.Beautiful, beautiful and simply beautiful OS 👏
Dear AKSHARA , such an amazing writer you are.
Love the OS to the core ❤️ .
You have just nailed it dear.
The Ishwari's confession to Dev about her insecurity after her daughters went was just brilliant. The dialogues were just awesome.
The situations you described were bang on. BECAME YOUR FAN.
A big hug and lots of love to you AKSHARA. 🤗 .
Thanks for the PM.

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RamAayeHain

@RamAayeHain

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Beautiful and amazing os

Totally loved it

Thanks for the pm dear

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ammu3

@ammu3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Doctor Sahiba getting time between patients and round duty to write us a fantastic OS

I wish something similar happens where Ishwari realizes that Sona is not taking her place at all
such an amazing OS

Awww thank you so much dear - glad you liked it !!!😳

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Ferdous_69

@Ferdous_69

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow.. Amazing OS 😳 😳
Sab thik hu geya.. I am so so so happy.. I wish actual show main bhi aicha Kuch hu
Love it... Beautifully written...nd beautiful ending
Thanks for d OS...

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fatima rukia

@rukiaa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

still many are left to read but i start with it.😆

Ammu 🤗 you writing is always MINDBLOWING. Every thing was perfect. Their dialogues amazing. And marna chahti ho kya 🤣 that song🤪 go well with situation. Thanks for PM.😳

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ammu3

@ammu3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl
YaY ME 2nd😆😆😆
Akshara meri doctor girlfriend you are getting awesome day by day...
I fell in love with you again... Ek dum straight and sundar wala love hai😆😆😆
Keep rocking baby
and

Luv Ya
Dev aur Sri dono ke taraf se

D'Awww Sri !!!I love you and your comments yaar !!
Baby!!*cue* ☺️
Thank you so much mere Dev !!❤️

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Aww..Thank u So much Akshara dii...beautiful os loved it...

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ammu3

@ammu3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.
Its an amazing OS Akshara dii!!
Tour OS'es are always fun to read!!
They always carry a certain amount of humour in it!!
Thank you so much!!

Awww thank you so much dear!! Really happy that you liked it !!
Appreciate it a lot!!! Love you !!🤗😳