DevAkshi OS~Tere pyaar mein, ho jaon Fanaa - Page 5

Originally posted by: _BunnyHere_

Superbly written 👏
In love with your writing ❤️
Wonderful fanfiction 😃

Originally posted by: Pilu05

Just wow , simply amazing

Fever wale Dev ka Romance ...hayee

Absolutely right yaar that ...yeh banda na bimari main bhi uttna hi HOT lagega jittna abb lag raha hai...

I wonder like this some scenes in KRPKAB add by cvs

Thank you so much for mentioned my name here and also thank you for PM me Akshra

I AM HERE! Lelelel many sorries but I am just really busy, even though I am on my holidays, I don't get a lot of time! Anyways! Love! Love! Love thiiis! This is too adorable and I love how you portray your Dev and Sona, it makes them very real, very admirable! Very dreamy 😉. Also have I never mentioned how I love your endings? Nerd life clearly shows in those concluding statements! As soon I read the first like I was like "OOO I HAVE I HAVEE" jumping up and down like an idiot 🤪


I have been noticing this for a while now, but all your OSs have one thing in common, all their titles are song lyrics! I rmbr reading the golmaal hai one after I got home and singing the whole "seedhe raaste ki yeh, tedi hi chal hai" complete with the hand movements as well. Lelel yes I love that movie 🤪. I am rambling now, so yea basically all your titles are song lyrics, lelel. I used to do this when I wrote for the SHq forum 😆

Not sure how I missed this OS ... I loved it.

Originally posted by: EJF_FAN

Wonderful OS ammu!! 👏
I loved evry bit of it!❤️

Could so clearly picture Dev Snuggling Sonakshi... wow what a visual treat that would be! 😳

every dialogue was vivid and i could imagine their expressions so well!

Thank you for sharing your DevAkshi love with us!🤗

Awww thank you so much dear !!! I am so happy it could make you smile 😉😛😃

Originally posted by: lourel24

👏👏👏

D'awww thank you sweetheart !!

Originally posted by: kriti094

Totally amazing

U r a fabulous writer :-)

Awww thank you so much for the kind words ; i ma glad you liked it 😳

Originally posted by: pripri95

Amazing
Very cute and sweet os 😊

Aww thank you so much dear !!😳

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Wow... It's amazing
Brilliantly written dear...thanks for shut up RR
Caring Sona was treat to read... 😳 😳 ... Nd DevAkshi convo was just awesome..
Thanks for the OS.. Waiting for next

Awww thank you so much Ferdous !!!
I am happy that you liked it !!😆😳