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Posted: 9 years ago
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Simply Beautiful

First I like that you included Biology into your story it really made for interesting reading
Dev been ill and his Sona comes and takes care of him , at first I though Dev's actions to be out off deliriousness but realized both have this deep connection especially when Dev had awaken and recalled everything made me realize their bond is deep but have strength in it
thank you for such a lovely OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Sorry could not reply earlier... I got busy with work...

Finally, got a chance to read your OS...

What have you done... So so and so beautiful! Just loved it!!! ❤️
I just loved the Devakshi scenes! ❤️

You are really a beautiful and an amazing writing!! I love reading your OS!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: independent

Lovely os. .

devakshi conversation so cute. .
loved it. .
keep writing. .



Aww thank you so much dear - glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34


Thank you so much dear !! Your comments are precious !!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: uthraa.m

Cute os

I loved the note conversation 😉



Awww thank you so much !!!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: saumiee

The comment turned out to be longer than I expectedPlease excuse my rant🤔

Originally posted by: saumiee

Akshara🤗

Each of your OS is better than the last one. . How on earth do you manage to be so good?😲
This was really the best. . Partly because it was fully in the romantic genre. . And more because of the way you described how they are inseparable and can't do without each other😳
I loved how you again drew a parellel between Biology and life. It is amazing how magical perspective is, right? What one sees as plain chemicals and Biology. . Another sees as an essence of life👏
I so love to see the 'doctor' side of Sonakshi in the show as well. . She has been such a caring person. Aww. . Ishwari is such a sweetheart in your OS as well. . She still trusts Sona completely. . Hope she does that in the show as well😆
The entire part where Sona comes to Dev and is in his embrace. . Oh god. . 😳 It had so much warmth and love at the same time!
I sound like a broken record again . .but I so wish something like this happens on the show as well.😆

P.S thank you for dedicating this lovely piece of writing🤗
P.P.S I love you for writing this on a weekend. . Shoos away my weekend 'no DevAkshi' blues😆


Oi ! Never apologise for doing a great and awesome think ..K?
I love to read your heartfelt reviews - because it seriously makes my day !!
I love them - feel like jumping with joy 😆😆
Thank you so much for understanding the thought behind the OS so well
I love you too ❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Amazing one again Ammu👏
I get excited to read ur Os's when ever i find a new one🤗🤗
It always brings a big smilee on all our faces😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi

very well written

will love to read stories like this
i mean at this stage when devakshi break up will happen after some episodes
do write more


Aww thank you so much !! So happy , you liked it !!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Your writing looks like a full bloomed rose on a winter morning.Fresh,beautiful and poised.The settings added with beautiful lines produces a splendid piece of art.The lines connects with audience and that's the real beauty of the writing.👏 The analogy provided at last is the best one.Kudos to you for bringing forth such real analogies intermingled with the reel fictions..😊

Thanks for the pm.
Keep writing and Keep Smiling.😊


Awww dear - thank you so much for that wonderful compliments - like that alone is more prettier than all my efforts 🤗😳😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Awww thank you so much dear !!!😃

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