DevAkshi OS~Tere pyaar mein, ho jaon Fanaa - Page 7

Originally posted by: andy1245

awesome actually luv u fr the writing wanna c this in the real show as well

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Simply Beautiful

First I like that you included Biology into your story it really made for interesting reading

Dev been ill and his Sona comes and takes care of him , at first I though Dev's actions to be out off deliriousness but realized both have this deep connection especially when Dev had awaken and recalled everything made me realize their bond is deep but have strength in it

thank you for such a lovely OS

Originally posted by: Littlestar108

Sorry could not reply earlier... I got busy with work...

Finally, got a chance to read your OS...

What have you done... So so and so beautiful! Just loved it!!! ❤️

I just loved the Devakshi scenes! ❤️

You are really a beautiful and an amazing writing!! I love reading your OS!

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Amazing OS :)

Originally posted by: -Viji-

Amazing one again Ammu👏

I get excited to read ur Os's when ever i find a new one🤗🤗

It always brings a big smilee on all our faces😃

Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict

I AM HERE! Lelelel many sorries but I am just really busy, even though I am on my holidays, I don't get a lot of time! Anyways! Love! Love! Love thiiis! This is too adorable and I love how you portray your Dev and Sona, it makes them very real, very admirable! Very dreamy 😉. Also have I never mentioned how I love your endings? Nerd life clearly shows in those concluding statements! As soon I read the first like I was like "OOO I HAVE I HAVEE" jumping up and down like an idiot 🤪


I have been noticing this for a while now, but all your OSs have one thing in common, all their titles are song lyrics! I rmbr reading the golmaal hai one after I got home and singing the whole "seedhe raaste ki yeh, tedi hi chal hai" complete with the hand movements as well. Lelel yes I love that movie 🤪. I am rambling now, so yea basically all your titles are song lyrics, lelel. I used to do this when I wrote for the SHq forum 😆

Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

This is so so good... I loved each and every part of your OS... Lovely.🤗👏

Thanks for sharing dear... Do keep writing.😊😳

Originally posted by: Sky23

Not sure how I missed this OS ... I loved it.

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Loved it!

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb Os..