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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: bharkha
OS was ultimate.. I felt like the script s written.. actors did their job perfectly n directors cut.. all in one.. gr8 writing...

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Vadhana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Just wanna say, mindblowing. Dunno if others felt the same...but i could feel the passion reading it Please write more often :)

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Vaddy
Just wanna say, mindblowing. Dunno if others felt the same...but i could feel the passion reading it Please write more often :)

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KambakthIshq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Oh my!! Please send this to the PH, Gurleen. At least 10% toh dikha de. Great job hun!

I'm going to read it again

Edited by KambakthIshq - 9 years ago

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LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

YES!

I mean Dev's lines are really simple but they hold SO much passion to them. His intentions are noble but there is SO much desire in them. Sonakshi may be the dominant one when it comes to other matters, but jab passion aur romance ki baat hoti hai, tab Dev babu mahir hai. ☺️

You are most welcome once again. 🤗

I have quite a few ideas in mind. Just a matter of picking which one to write first. 😆

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Waiting to read so amazing stuffs. But wait hi nahi hota, very difficult thing to do.😆

I'm new to this forum and your this os is my first read here. 😳

Edited by Keechu_SwaRon - 9 years ago

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: KambakthIshq
Oh my!! Please send this to the PH, Gurleen. At least 10% toh dikha de. Great job hun!
I'm going to read it again

Haha, thank you so much Shruti! 🤗

If the PH is able to show even 1% of this I will be over the moon. 😃 I really hope they touch upon the passionate side of Dev. 😳

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon
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Waiting to read so amazing stuffs. But wait hi nahi hota, very difficult thing to do.😆

I'm new to this forum and your this os is my first read here. 😳

Haha, I try! The thing with me is that my brain runs so much faster than my hands do. By the time I have written out one paragraph, I have outlined the entire OS in my head and for me that's complete. So while I'm actually trying pen it down I get distracted really easily because the actual piece isn't being written fast enough. My brain just wants to jump onto the next story while I'm still stuck on the previous one.

It's a really weird cycle but I'm trying to get out of it. 😆

Aww, thank you! I personally haven't read any other fics around here, (I generally tend to stay away from all stories unless I'm specifically asked to read something), but I'm pretty sure there are some really amazing pieces out there. :D

But I'm glad that your first read was a pleasant journey. 😳

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LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Haha, I try! The thing with me is that my brain runs so much faster than my hands do. By the time I have written out one paragraph, I have outlined the entire OS in my head and for me that's complete. So while I'm actually trying pen it down I get distracted really easily because the actual piece isn't being written fast enough. My brain just wants to jump onto the next story while I'm still stuck on the previous one.

It's a really weird cycle but I'm trying to get out of it. 😆

Aww, thank you! I personally haven't read any other fics around here, (I generally tend to stay away from all stories unless I'm specifically asked to read something), but I'm pretty sure there are some really amazing pieces out there. :D

But I'm glad that your first read was a pleasant journey. 😳

That is weird, and i'm quite like that. 😆

While writing i feel to put everything together, like i gets scared that i may be forget my concept, so i wish i could type as faster as my brain works. 🤣

I didnt know there is someone as weird as me. 😆

Yeah i have not read many in this forum. But looking forwards to read good works.

And i must say, you are a brilliant writer. 🤗

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Keechu_SwaRon
That is weird, and i'm quite like that. 😆
While writing i feel to put everything together, like i gets scared that i may be forget my concept, so i wish i could type as faster as my brain works. 🤣

I didnt know there is someone as weird as me. 😆

Yeah i have not read many in this forum. But looking forwards to read good works.
And i must say, you are a brilliant writer. 🤗

OMG, YES!

For me it's like, I start writing down one concept and keep ten other in the back of my head but don't start on them until I jot down all of the first concept first. It'll become too confusing to sort everything out once I start writing. It has to be all linear with an appropriate beginning, middle and end.

LOLL, I can guarantee you I can connect with all the weirdos on some level or another. 😆😆

Thank you so much once again. 🤗