DevAkshi One Shot: With Each Kiss - Page 8

Originally posted by: pallavi_bs

Awesome

Originally posted by: twilight_lover

Seems like a very big author noticed me to be honest! Haha I see your point of view and I agree too that it's about DevAkshi and it's beyond perfect couple to write about. I'm not sad that this thread isn't going to continue but I definitely want to read whatever comes next from you. Like I'm already dying to read. I'm still not over how you wrote that. I never felt so happy after reading anything like this not because of the plot but because thank god you sent such a great writer to bless me with their work. Hehe. And it's okay I already mentioned that now I have to get active here cause I don't have a choice to read whatever you're posting next and to keep in contact with you.

You're most welcome always. 😳

Originally posted by: riddhima11

Intense and beautiful.

The first time Devakshi danced together in a party, i felt their chemistry as a couple. . This OS captured that chemistry of the characters.. I could imagine them.. Alas! We wont see any scene like this on the show.. 😉

But anyway thanks for penning down this perfection..

I would like to point out the simplicity in their relation. It is the most beautiful thing about them.. And I really like how you always maintain that..

Enjoying your work!!

Love

Pankhuri

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Hi Pankhuri!

I have to say, your name is absolutely beautiful. 😳

Omg, I thought I was the only one who felt that! 😲 Their dance, the way Sonakshi's hair remained on her face and Dev's hair was a bit tousled, or the way Dev said, "Have you thought that maybe I just wanted to dance with you?" << These were the scenes that completely had me hooked.

For you to say that my writing captured that essence, means a lot! Thank you so much for this. 🤗

The simplicity has to stay with DevAkshi. It is this very simplicity that makes them so unique and beautiful. They can be a little hatke, but there will always be a sadgi that's hidden in it.

Thank you so much once again. 🤗

Originally posted by: riddhima11

You felt it too..😲 I know man.. Dev and his tousled hair.. he had that sexy voice on while he said the same to Sona.. I loved that scene..

As you can see I am in love with the way you write.. so you deserve all the praise..😃

Thanks for the compliment!!😳

Originally posted by: asmaanixx

Oh, you are too kind with your words. 😳

I have written quite a few pieces already. If you're interested, you can check out the OS gallery and find my pieces there. :)

Seriously, thank you so much. I had never expected this piece to become so wildly popular. 🤗😆

But seriously, thank you to you and to everyone who have shown so much love to this and all my pieces. 🤗 It truly means a lot. 😳

Originally posted by: twilight_lover

To be honest you deserve this attention and popularity. Everyone doesn't writes like you Hehe. You gave us a wonderful treat and all this love to you is a return for you. 😳

I don't remember If I sent you a buddy request. I'm sending you and please pm me your next OS incase if I miss any of them. That's a very big deal, I can't miss anything you write. And you don't have to thank me everytime. Hehe.